souvenirs by SoarenDev
As time flows by, memories fade. I made this little “game” to make you remember all these little moments, to keep these memories alive.
The game asks questions about your past, and you must answer to these questions by typing them with your keyboard. The game tries to push you in your answers to make you remember details about the events and the persons involved.
> Post Jam version available here: https://soaren.itch.io/souvenirs-postjam <

> Post Jam version available here: https://soaren.itch.io/souvenirs-postjam <
| Youtube | https://soaren.itch.io/souvenirs |
| Youtube | https://soaren.itch.io/souvenirs |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/46/souvenirs |
Ratings
| Overall | 377th | 3.581⭐ | 39🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 994th | 2.529⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 178th | 3.771⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 205th | 4⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 946th | 2.621⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 43th | 4⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 708th | 2.333⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 19th | 4.314⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 24🗳️ | 38🗨️ |
* When typing, it always misses the first few letters you type
* if you press' down' to speed up the text, it should stay that way.
I feel this maybe a bit marmite, as many people wont be comfortable typing in their memotires into an app, but cool nontheless ;)
Great job !
The music made me feel like something bad was going to happen. Just had a ominous tone about it (science fiction movies may have ruined me). I kept wondering what impact my answers might have. Unfortunately it seemed that you ran out of time before adding an end game.
Good start to something!
P.s. - I also ran into the missing characters issue. I believe what's happening is that you're reading input to advance text and if the keyboard is still being interacted with before you've switched states, the system is still looking to advance text instead of inputting text. Might want to look into the state management of the game :)
So sad you didn't the time too finish, I would love to see where it's going.
That input issue is indeed annoying, I'm quite sad that I didn't catch it before publishing due to time issues :/
@theartifacts You're probably right about the cause of the issue, it would make sense, I'll look into it for the post-jam release :)
I'll probably iterate over the text flow, size, etc... for the post-jam^^ I used the auto-resize to save some time and not having to handle problems with very long answers, but maybe it wasn't a very good solution after all eh^^ I'll try to find better solutions
The atmospheric music fits the theme and I did not notice repetition during my session.
One note on "typing" sound though: I wasn't expecting them, maybe silence would be more contemplative?
I had some difficulties as the game wouldn't accept input and seems to have gotten stuck at some point where it says it wants to talk about something else, unless that is the ending?
@barrier Yes there is an input issue for some people that I didn't detected before publishing :/ And yes, when you're stuck on subject changing it's the ending! I wasn't able to implement more than 4 subjects on time, and didn't implement an end screen, really sorry about the abrupt implicit end
As a sidenote I did download the game as my browser doesn't take the inputs too well.
If anything, there are a few issues that others have already stated, but I'll put my two cents in:
* The typing sound. For something with a simple and calming atmosphere it is too out there. Like others have suggested well, do a more discrete and a bit more calming version.
* Speaking of typing sounds, how about some for the user, too?
* As for input, yeah you need to make sure the typing state is consistent. I found myself clicking on the window for every text prompt that is not the arrow keys or the enter key.
* The display of the text doesn't really help with large blocks of text. It know it's made to fit the screen but I keep getting lost while I was reading before since it shrinks every time. It's better to do it with a fixed size.
* Maybe a scrolling display with a fixed with of text works too. (I meant not sharp snaps.)
* As for the text when writing. Spacing between letters will be appreciated.
Again, thank you for doing this. It means a lot to me to keep memories alive...
I played a few times, but it froze after several questions, so I'm curious how this ends.
Anyways, I like it.
Cheers
In all honesty, if this was a full 'game/experience' kind of thing, I'd genuinely pay money to try it out. Really good work!