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Let me know if you do get a translation done and I'll check it out!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-04-25T00:47:56Z","epoch":1587775676,"modified":1588584894,"text":"@kdgame \u7f51\u9875\u5df2\u7ecf\u4fee\u590d\u5566\uff0c\u8c22\u8c22\u63d0\u9192~\n","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-04-25T00:55:14Z","epoch":1587776114,"modified":1587776114,"text":"@hackschnitzel I have fixed the page's visibility and I think the link is ok now :)","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"iamscissors","author_uid":"1013765","time":"2020-04-25T00:59:07Z","epoch":1587776347,"modified":1587776347,"text":"Link is broken. will return when is fixed and rate","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-04-25T01:10:15Z","epoch":1587777015,"modified":1587777015,"text":"@iamscissors Hi, I have fixed the page and I think the link is okay now~","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"AkirAssasin","author_uid":"1000632","time":"2020-04-25T04:26:48Z","epoch":1587788808,"modified":1587788808,"text":"Nice story, well done!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"","author_uid":"1000000","time":"2020-04-25T21:33:01Z","epoch":1587850381,"modified":1587850381,"text":"nice try! it is 'luan xi' style game!\nwhen i finish the game i feel like i just watched an amazing movie!\nkeep go on!!! i really expect your next game!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"bulubululi","author_uid":1208225,"time":"2020-04-25T21:35:33Z","epoch":1587850533,"modified":1587850533,"text":"Great game\uff01But there still remains lots of space to complete your story. Such as, which committee you referred to in your game. ","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-04-25T22:43:27Z","epoch":1587854607,"modified":1588582496,"text":"@bulubululi  the 4th Division is a special department established in the corporation for system maintance. Actually it is vaguely mentioned by the clues in the game, but yeah, it needs to be clear as a worldview.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"mobiledev","author_uid":"1007051","time":"2020-05-04T09:42:29Z","epoch":1588585349,"modified":1588585349,"text":"Liked the story and pacing a lot. The art style is cute. Good job!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-05-04T09:48:50Z","epoch":1588585730,"modified":1588585730,"text":"@mobiledev Thank you ! (*^_^*)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"DimiTree","author_uid":"1198337","time":"2020-05-04T09:58:11Z","epoch":1588586291,"modified":1588586291,"text":"AMAZING GAME! so much potential! this could be an actual game with a full fledged story and I would totally play it to the end xD I'm really intrigued. Bravo","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-05-04T19:40:50Z","epoch":1588621250,"modified":1588621250,"text":"@dimitree thank you so much !!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"paul-sinnett","author_uid":"1003446","time":"2020-05-04T21:28:10Z","epoch":1588627690,"modified":1588627690,"text":"Impressive quality. I got stuck entering my name until I figured out you could use the one of the keys to delete. Z or X, I forget.","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Zanthous","author_uid":"1171476","time":"2020-05-04T21:35:41Z","epoch":1588628141,"modified":1588628141,"text":"A nice experience even through the rough translation. \n  \n","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"RiverC4","author_uid":"1182682","time":"2020-05-05T00:24:09Z","epoch":1588638249,"modified":1588638249,"text":"Very interesting game. The ending made me a bi sad but it was deep :O My only criticism is a personal taste thing, I would say to try and make it so the game remembers if you've played it before, but obviously that would require a lot of extra work so for right now this is a really great entry!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Evan Minto","author_uid":"1020346","time":"2020-05-05T01:01:40Z","epoch":1588640500,"modified":1588640500,"text":"Great work! It\u2019s got personality and a nice little story about consciousness and humanity delivered in a short package. Loved the ending too! Definitely impressed with the anime-style artwork. The translation could use some work as you said, but the story came through just fine.\n\nWorth mentioning that I also got confused when entering my name and couldn't figure out how to delete letters. I just named myself \"player\" and moved on.","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-05-05T12:00:04Z","epoch":1588680004,"modified":1588680004,"text":"@riverc4 That's a really nice and constructive idea. It makes me think that if the game needs some expansion, it\u2019s a good way to reveal more details and narrative in multiple game plus, and that maybe leads to a different (true) ending. Thank you so much for your suggestion !","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-05-05T13:30:50Z","epoch":1588685450,"modified":1588685450,"text":"@evan-minto Thank you for your feedback! I\u2019m sorry that I didn\u2019t make it clear for the controls. Press X and you can delete letters. I\u2019ve updated the guidance due to the feedback : )","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Turkey","author_uid":"1001092","time":"2020-05-06T01:08:17Z","epoch":1588727297,"modified":1588727297,"text":"Fantastic game and great story! Art was very clean and nice as well! The \"maze\" had a bit too tight of a time constraint in my opinion, but I was able to get through it just barely! Well done!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"puppetmaster","author_uid":"1001122","time":"2020-05-06T20:27:41Z","epoch":1588796861,"modified":1588796861,"text":"Great music and story. It was fun to play. ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"P1x3lc0w","author_uid":"1072770","time":"2020-05-07T21:59:22Z","epoch":1588888762,"modified":1588888762,"text":"Definitely not the type of game you'd expect for a jam. I love good story-based games and this is definitely one. Honestly I'm not really good at giving feedback for story-focused games, but i really enjoyed playing this one. good job!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"kaeveris","author_uid":"1113874","time":"2020-05-09T18:14:56Z","epoch":1589048096,"modified":1589048096,"text":"Cool game, very nice graphics and mood! 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Hahahahah.\n\n![OHNO.png](\/\/\/raw\/bc7\/6\/z\/34128.png)\n\nI'll write a review about the game...","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"gustavo.christino","author_uid":"1026571","time":"2020-05-12T17:05:35Z","epoch":1589303135,"modified":1589303135,"text":"An\u00e1lise...\n\n1 - Mec\u00e2nicas, Aprendizado e Fluxo:\nMuito interessante a hist\u00f3ria do seu jogo. As intera\u00e7\u00f5es me desafiaram um pouco (e o lado bom \u00e9 que teve check-points).\nO fluxo de jogo n\u00e3o cresceu tanto em desafio, mas como primeira entrada em Ludum Dare est\u00e1 muito bacana.\n\n2 - Gr\u00e1ficos, \u00c1udio e Narrativa:\nA arte como um todo ficou interessante e ambientou bem a narrativa.\nA narrativa \u00e9 o ponto forte do projeto e \u00e9 contada de forma clara.\nParab\u00e9ns pela ambienta\u00e7\u00e3o narrativa (e pelo plot-twist).\n\n3 - Cultura:\nO jogo tem muito a ver com narrativas sobre fic\u00e7\u00e3o cient\u00edfica e questionamento da realidade (Matrix, D\u00e9cimo Terceiro Andar, Ghost in the Shell etc).\n\n4 - Monetiza\u00e7\u00e3o:\nCreio que o jogo precisaria de bastante extens\u00e3o se formos pensar em monetizar (quem sabe implementar para smartphones permita vender ele mais facilmente).\nParab\u00e9ns!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"gustavo.christino","author_uid":"1026571","time":"2020-05-12T17:05:48Z","epoch":1589303148,"modified":1589303148,"text":"Analysis...\n\n1 - Mechanics, Learning and Flow:\nVery interesting story of your game. The interactions challenged me a little (and the good thing is that there were check points).\nThe game flow has not grown so much in challenge, but as a first entry in Ludum Dare it is very cool.\n\n2 - Graphics, Audio and Narrative:\nArt as a whole was interesting and set the narrative well.\nThe narrative is the strong point of the project and is told clearly.\nCongratulations on the narrative setting (and the plot-twist).\n\n3 - Culture:\nThe game has a lot to do with science fiction narratives and questioning reality (Matrix, Thirteenth Floor, Ghost in the Shell etc).\n\n4 - Monetization:\nI think the game would need a lot of extension if we are going to think about monetizing (maybe implementing it for smartphones will allow you to sell it more easily).\nCongratulations!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"emil0227","author_uid":"1181905","time":"2020-05-12T18:37:40Z","epoch":1589308660,"modified":1589308660,"text":"@gustavo-christino Thanks a lot for your feedback and suggestions!","likes":1,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":["ld46\/194424-2faa2cf9145ff75431d0c8669ed43a4b.png"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/emil0227.github.io\/LD46-WEB-PUSH-CH-VER-Emil0227\/","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/emil0227.github.io\/LD-46-WEB-DEMO-PUSH-ENG-VER-ud1.0.\/","text":"Youtube"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"61773","g_author":"1181905","g_event":"LD46","g_eventkey":"77","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"275376","g_title":"Error code: 107222","g_status":"PVT1","g_place":"672","g_commentcount":"34","g_site2_node_id":"194424","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"194424","n_urlkey":"275376","n_parent":"176557","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/46\/error-code-107222","n_slug":"error-code-107222","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"jam","n_author":"181905","n_created":"1587171929","n_modified":"1589309130","n_version":"640549","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":194424,"parent":176557,"superparent":9,"author":181905,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"jam","published":"2020-04-21T00:57:55Z","created":"2020-04-18T01:05:29Z","modified":"2020-05-12T18:45:30Z","version":640549,"slug":"error-code-107222","name":"Error code: 107222","body":"![\u5fae\u4fe1\u56fe\u7247_20200421023252.png](\/\/\/raw\/196\/c2\/z\/33d31.png)\n\u3010English version now avaliable.\u3011\n\n\u3010Controls\u3011\n\nArrow keys to move. 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