60 click to Alive by Maverick Fan

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made by Maverick Fan for Ludum Dare 46 (JAM)

5 minutes point and click interactive fiction. Probably the most funny Twine make game. Will Android suicide? Based on the cyberpunk background, try to survive within 60 clicks. 屏幕截图(191).png|屏幕截图(193)1.png|屏幕截图(195)1.png

Ratings

Overall 2244th 2.95⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1912th 2.975⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 262th 3.85⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Theme 2104th 3.125⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Humor 629th 3.375⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Mood 1662th 3.125⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Given 14🗳️ 7🗨️

Feedback

Melonking
21. Apr 2020 · 09:06 UTC
Not sure what to say about this! I was confused and clicked a lot.

There are some good funny moments like when you start making random faces and the game complains you're wasting time!

A soundtrack and a moody presentation would add a lot to this game (example: https://fauux.neocities.org/)
PerpetuumMobile
21. Apr 2020 · 15:20 UTC
I found the idea very interesting, but it feels like it needs a lot more work. Also, some audio would be appreciated.
Scruffy
21. Apr 2020 · 15:22 UTC
Very interesting. Nice to see some different types of game.
Draelent
21. Apr 2020 · 15:27 UTC
Same here, was not sure what to do in the elevator, no button appeared, and my count went negativ. So I tried again, and after some time and some click, a floor became clickable eventually.. Not sure what I did though
🎤 Maverick Fan
21. Apr 2020 · 15:31 UTC
@draelent Thank you for playing my game. Reply to the part of elevator, you supposed to scroll the mouse down to the end. Then you will see the clickable button. It's tricky but it's actually part of the game experience.(^-^)
Wxzuir
22. Apr 2020 · 09:39 UTC
Amazed to see such a great story in Ludum Dare!
Nice job!

唯一让我有点出戏的是颜文字,尤其是电梯上行的时候……感觉那几个颜文字和游戏文本带给我的氛围有些差异(捂脸)
fabula_rasa
22. Apr 2020 · 20:37 UTC
I was quite confused in this game. I guess this story was just not my cup of tea. It is indeed nice to see something different... it's just, I'm not exactly sure what it is that I saw. It is very nice that you finished and published though! It's not an easy thing to make a game on your own!

Also, there is sadly quite a bad English at times, which does not provide a good experience in a text-based game.
Doritolord
22. Apr 2020 · 20:41 UTC
i was really confused, especially at the elevator stage, cause i kept pushing these buttons: <> , then my counter went on negative and after i figured it out, i kept playing, my counter went back to positive numbers. i don't know if it was intended this way. anyways i liked the concept and the story, but i think a bit of music or sound effect would bring a lot to the game.
Naca
22. Apr 2020 · 20:48 UTC
Interesting but a little confusing... I was wondering if I was playing for a couple times, some audio would be appreciate. It has some very funny moments anyway. Well done :)
🎤 Maverick Fan
22. Apr 2020 · 20:55 UTC
@fabula-rasa Thanks for your critical feedback to my game. It's very helpful to let me know the writing problem. I'll try my best to do the proof reading for improving the experience.

@doritolord Hi. Thanks for playing my game. Sorry for the little confuse on it. The elevator part you supposed to scroll mouse down to the end then you will find the clickable button. It's a part of the experience actually but I can understand I didn't convey it properly though. But thanks again for playing my game!
pomelouncia
24. Apr 2020 · 02:29 UTC
有趣而又新颖的点击解密游戏。通过字符构成了一些很有趣的镜头。而本身讲述的故事也挺不错!
zc74560
24. Apr 2020 · 12:00 UTC
Inspires me lot.
Nice conception.
lalada
25. Apr 2020 · 07:59 UTC
Really enjoyed interactive fiction. The recall password level is what I enjoy most. The click count text is not very obvious.
Rahcelz
02. May 2020 · 15:11 UTC
有些表现很棒,喜欢楼梯和回忆密码的场景。有时候会get不到发生了什么,找门的谜题略生硬。总体来说很有趣!
Zitao YE
09. May 2020 · 15:58 UTC
很喜欢这样的一个实验性小作品,想知道twine有什么特别的动画和背景的制作方式!