The Wild Flower's Song by NidzaKornjaca

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made by NidzaKornjaca for LD34 (JAM)
IMPORTANT
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OS X and Linux users need to set the file permissions for the file to be executable using chmod +x or chmod 755.

UPDATE - FIXED (i hope) -
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I've also been told the game is crash prone - I can't reproduce it on my machine, but it has happened to a few different people.
Until I fix it, a simple restart/refresh should solve it.

Turns out it wasn't an actual crash. I just managed to leave some debug code that would show the text on key input. Silly me <3

HOW TO PLAY
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A/D or the Arrow Keys to move.
Collect seeds to sprout branches.
Escape to quit (desktop).

DESCRIPTION
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Made in less than 18 hours for #LD34.

Explore the poetry of William Blake!
Think Journey...

But made in 18 hours by one guy who may or may not know what he is doing.

Features:

Soothing minimalistic graphics
Soothing ambiental music that dynamically changes
This poem:
The Wild Flower's Song

As I wander'd the forest,
The green leaves among,
I heard a wild flower
Singing a song.

I slept in the Earth
In the silent night,
I murmur'd my fears
And I felt delight.

In the morning I went
As rosy as morn,
To seek for new joy;
But O! met with scorn.

Both links include Web, Windows, OS X and Linux builds.
OS X and Linux untested - tell me whether it works or not please :)

Ratings

Coolness 63% 3
Overall(Jam) 3.68 196
Audio(Jam) 4.00 66
Graphics(Jam) 3.70 374
Mood(Jam) 4.32 24
Theme(Jam) 4.15 121

Feedback

AkirAssasin
14. Dec 2015 路 23:24 UTC
OSX version displays 'can't be opened'.
馃帳 NidzaKornjaca
15. Dec 2015 路 00:58 UTC
Thanks for the comment!
Permissions need to be set for the executable file using chmod.
Ornicar
15. Dec 2015 路 01:43 UTC
Really peaceful and relaxing, thanks ! ^^
Zknet
15. Dec 2015 路 01:45 UTC
Fantastic! I loved the mood of the game... very peaceful.
Suui
15. Dec 2015 路 01:53 UTC
Oh, nice is the word to describe it :)

Pretty relaxing, interesting concept, I enjoyed it.
fede0d
15. Dec 2015 路 02:00 UTC
Very atmospheric, I liked it.
Dining Philosopher
15. Dec 2015 路 03:02 UTC
The droplet graphics make for a nice style, and the audio is very soothing. "Fun" is of course a bit lacking, but that's not what you were going for after all. Altogether a pleasant surprise for the first game I'm rating this LD.
squarebridges
15. Dec 2015 路 03:05 UTC
This is beautiful!

Slight issue with the web version is that pressing down fades the screen to black (underneath what I assume is the credits, which are unreadable.
馃帳 NidzaKornjaca
15. Dec 2015 路 09:20 UTC
Thanks for the kind words!
@squarebridges: If by down you mean S - then I forgot to remove some early debug code so it might be interacting a bit fiddly with the rest of the game >.<

I'll be reuploading a fixed build later today.
bloomingbuds
15. Dec 2015 路 09:46 UTC
very nice use of colors, lovely music and sounds!
Neoludo
15. Dec 2015 路 09:47 UTC
Asides from a few glitches here and there with credits appearing randomly on the screen on top of themselves, this was a really nice, relaxing, meditative experience. One of the most relaxing games I've played in a long time... overall extremely pleasant. Thanks for the experience and beautiful poetry!
RadStar
15. Dec 2015 路 09:48 UTC
Wow I love this kind of contemplative games! The art, the poem and the music/sound design are working very well together! Really good job!! :)
marod
15. Dec 2015 路 09:49 UTC
Very interesting game, but a little boring. Also I have problems to visualice the text, that overlaps with other text. Great game!
tyrants.not.found.team
15. Dec 2015 路 09:50 UTC
Perfect mood, perfect sound, fits the theme very well!
Not much else to comment, I think the game does perfectly what it set out to do :)
At most, it could've used more visual effects towards the end of the poem, perhaps more atmospherics or more blooming elements of the "flower" that keeps growing - more color or shapes :)

Very well done!

Cheers,
Ionut(Tyrants.not.found team)
Remblej
15. Dec 2015 路 09:55 UTC
That loading though :)
DieBackStudios
15. Dec 2015 路 10:00 UTC
I thoroughly enjoyed the experience keep up the good work ,
18 works u did some work :P
inbetweengames
15. Dec 2015 路 10:05 UTC
This is so wonderful. I.. I got something in my eye.
TomenLuca
15. Dec 2015 路 11:18 UTC
Great mood
fractalbear
15. Dec 2015 路 12:38 UTC
Beautiful, loved it, thank you :D
Baransu
15. Dec 2015 路 12:44 UTC
Nice game, but a little bit too short. He he he he
printhello
15. Dec 2015 路 12:46 UTC
Very nice
Warboys
15. Dec 2015 路 13:26 UTC
Pretty :) I really wish I could appreciate poetry, but alas!

Note on the gameplay, I wanted to move around and make the tree grow in all kinds of ways, but often I'd see the next pickup too late and not be able to reach it in time. So in the end I just sat back and let it grow straight up until pickups arrived.
馃帳 NidzaKornjaca
15. Dec 2015 路 13:33 UTC
@Warboys:
Theres a *secret* button. Don't tell anyone!
Tuism
15. Dec 2015 路 15:54 UTC
Played on itch.io. no sound?

I like the pretty style, that's really interesting, but I feel like it can barely be called a "game"... I could just leave it running. The branches and the poem are pretty, but ultimately not interesting to me. Maybe it's just me. I didn't like Monument Valley too and it won like a million awards...

I feel like I couldn't make round shapes like the rest of the branches were - my lines were zig zaggy and that felt out of place.

Would have liked to see a zoomed out view of my creation - I feel like that that would add a lot more to the creative aspect of this. To be creative and be recorded as such.

Pretty thing :)
Sosolol261
15. Dec 2015 路 16:00 UTC
I looks very pretty :3
SiENcE
15. Dec 2015 路 19:50 UTC
Wonderfull relaxing! The theme is suberb fullfilled and writing a poem for an LD game is just great :) !
Diel Mormac
16. Dec 2015 路 01:56 UTC
This is a relaxing and reflexive game!
I loved the concept and I was really hypnotized by the sound!

Thanks for this awesome experience!
_HopFrog
16. Dec 2015 路 06:02 UTC
Lovely mood! I really really liked this one :)
blohod
16. Dec 2015 路 22:39 UTC
Very nice and relaxing, more of an experience than a game, I liked it. Played on a livestream at http://www.twitch.tv/meep706.
BroCade
17. Dec 2015 路 10:50 UTC
Nice use of the theme and really relaxing.
ajopart
17. Dec 2015 路 11:04 UTC
Great mood !
cimbaman
21. Dec 2015 路 10:16 UTC
Read poetry, listen to relaxing music, and grow a tree while doing it.
This is game is perfect to play after a stressful day.
SecondDimension
02. Jan 2016 路 15:40 UTC
What a lovely experience, really liked the mood and atmosphere.
SinclairStrange
02. Jan 2016 路 23:09 UTC
Man, what a fantastic mood and atmosphere this gives off! Lovely stuff, so relaxing and interesting! :D
Jupiter_Hadley
05. Jan 2016 路 15:38 UTC
Really neat experience! I included it in my Ludum Dare 34 compilation video series, if you鈥檇 like to check it out :) https://youtu.be/DUttdjt5uB4