{"author_link":"\/users\/lieutenantmaster","author_name":"LieutenantMaster","author_uid":"1186370","comments":[{"author_name":"codyhansen","author_uid":"1005735","time":"2020-04-21T20:52:39Z","epoch":1587502359,"modified":1587502359,"text":"Congratulations on your first game jam!\nThe snowflake growing while rolling in the snow was a really nice touch.\n\nI disappeared when I started level two, though. The game was still playable, but the snowflake wasn't visible at all. Unfortunately it meant I couldn't play much further than that, but I enjoyed what I did play!\n\nA little bit of audio would go a long way in this game. Even blips or bloops when jumping or rolling. That's not a big gripe though!\n\nI can assure you, my first \"real\" game looked nothing like this. You're doing great for a first time and I wish you the best of luck!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"LieutenantMaster","author_uid":"1186370","time":"2020-04-24T08:15:10Z","epoch":1587716110,"modified":1587716110,"text":"@codyhansen Thank you,\nas I said in the description it's a first for me for pretty much everything. Time management was my biggest mistake, I worked too much on the features instead on everything. It's not shown in the final build but I had the time to work on a fire wall, fire, smoke and a little AI but level design was a lot harder than expected meaning I could really work on two levels in time sadly :c \nAnyway, that was fun in overall ^^\n\nBtw I played and rated your compo, nice idea you got there !","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Gnocchi","author_uid":"1191281","time":"2020-04-24T09:07:57Z","epoch":1587719277,"modified":1587719277,"text":"For a first time, indeed it is not bad ! \n\nAs you said, I think the biggest issue you had was prod work : managing the tasks and determining which one to do first. The level design is huge and I noticed a lot of small features and great ideas (water instakill, wind tunnels, snow growth when on ground), but I think the gameplay of only on button (two when you're on snow but it's not very often) serves your level design badly. I would suggest smaller levels with clearer goal and a more fluffy gameplay (why not add one button\/feature at the end of level 1 so that it breaks monotony).\nFor dev work, it's really good, wind and direction jump are well done, colliders don't bug. I only had a problem with the player disappearing on level2 (maybe a z axis problem ?)\nObviously sound design and more work on the graphics would have helped but in a compo it is quite hard to put everything.\n\nOverall, nice work with potential that need more time management.","likes":0,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":["ld46\/186373-9940c2d57fb50cd9bae82ec06fc3c492.png"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/mega.nz\/file\/nMYSUIAQ#WRKZlwFF4JsKw4jwG1alGDtiWpVpSxVW9bi0BLADABU","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/mega.nz\/file\/qdJAUaZC#dttUTioeo50VTq09186YgX-6tREe4PFpVZgsR8y8chM","text":"Youtube"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"62351","g_author":"1186370","g_event":"LD46","g_eventkey":"77","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"276532","g_title":"Breeze","g_status":"PVT1","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"3","g_site2_node_id":"186373","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"186373","n_urlkey":"276532","n_parent":"176557","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/46\/breeze","n_slug":"breeze","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"compo","n_author":"186370","n_created":"1586931209","n_modified":"1588010954","n_version":"633575","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":186373,"parent":176557,"superparent":9,"author":186370,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"compo","published":"2020-04-20T00:58:31Z","created":"2020-04-15T06:13:29Z","modified":"2020-04-27T18:09:14Z","version":633575,"slug":"breeze","name":"Breeze","body":"You are a snowflake in the snowy city for adventure !\nYour goal is to keep the snowflake alive through your aventure. 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Heat and water are your worst ennemies and all you can do is avoid them.\n\n\nA fixed version will be uploaded soon, sorry for the inconvenience and have fun playing all the games of this Ludum Dare !\n\n\n> -- Disclaimer --\nThis game is buggy, clunky and ugly. But I have learned a lot for a first \"real\" game and for a first compo\/event. I don't hope for anything with this game, only gained experience. If only I had more time :')\n\nOh ! And even if it's obvious, everything have been produced by myself... And most of them were a first as well x)","title":"Breeze"}