The Breakable Spiral by Wassim

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made by Wassim for Ludum Dare 47 (JAM)

a ​Relaxing orthographic star collection spiral, Collecting all the stars is the key to break the spiral!

Note: Game Fully made in 5 Hours, Did not want to miss the Jam hope you'll enjoy and have fun!

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Ratings

Overall 1145th 3.262⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1052th 3.119⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1391th 2.714⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1617th 2.357⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 919th 3.429⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Audio 469th 3.553⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Mood 562th 3.619⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Given 23🗳️ 5🗨️

Feedback

junomontgo
06. Oct 2020 · 03:01 UTC
This is a beautiful game! The physics are a little frustrating, but the game is beautiful. Wish that the screen kept up with the ball at all times; I lost track sometimes because I went too fast.
nik184
06. Oct 2020 · 09:34 UTC
I thought I've made really hadcore game. How naive I were.
By the way, there is 9 bonuses on map. To win it's enoth to collect 8, as far as I understood
Cool game, I like it
wormius
06. Oct 2020 · 13:03 UTC
I like this game. Don't really see much of theme there. But, fun non the less.
🎤 Wassim
07. Oct 2020 · 15:25 UTC
@junomontgo @nik184 @wormius Thanks for your honest feedback and kind words really appreciate it, Will take it all into consideration!
GammaRomeo
07. Oct 2020 · 18:53 UTC
The music and atmosphere of this game have a nice calming feeling. I wasnt sure if there are more controls other than left and right and where the 'loop' comes in. Maybe its the idea of retrying forever? Either way, nice job and it conveys a certain smooth, laid back emotion which I found quite alluring
johanhelsing
07. Oct 2020 · 18:57 UTC
Really nice use of colors, and soothing soundtrack.

I was a little frustrated by being sent all the way back when dying, but maybe I'm not just hardcore enough.

Anyways, really impressive in only 5 hours!
guimoliveira
07. Oct 2020 · 19:13 UTC
Cool short game. Nice graphics, but I didn't see the theme here.
JoeDev
07. Oct 2020 · 19:33 UTC
This was a fun casual game, and I'm impressed that you made this in only 5 hours! The audio and calmnesss of the game was very nice and relaxing as well! Good stuff :)
🎤 Wassim
08. Oct 2020 · 16:28 UTC
Thank you everyone for the Feedback :smile: Much appreciated, The loop idea comes in the spiral you're stuck in and I shortened the pickables one short just cause the game is a bit hard but If I had time there will be more into it and it would been more polished thank you everone for the amazing feedback will take it into consideration :relaxed:
Oleksandr Shchavinskyi
08. Oct 2020 · 17:54 UTC
Great small game!
Nice music, it's working quite well in the game)
Eluo
09. Oct 2020 · 00:41 UTC
Nice you made this in 5 hours and i almost took just as long to finish it.
So ....
XD
Gj bro
🎤 Wassim
09. Oct 2020 · 01:09 UTC
@oleksandr-shchavinskyi Thank you man! :smile:
🎤 Wassim
09. Oct 2020 · 01:10 UTC
@eluo Thank you so much for your patience and your gameplay and review it was very helpful and fun streaming it for almost an hour and a half :laughing: It was worth it glad you didn't quit and thank you for the fun time bro!
Omer Zadok
09. Oct 2020 · 01:35 UTC
good and fun game for 5-hour game jam
eskooh
09. Oct 2020 · 02:38 UTC
Good game you got here, A bit simple and short but the challenge is there. I do like the soothing music to go along with dying a lot. Good job!
StrangerYann
10. Oct 2020 · 16:17 UTC
pretty neat bug it's bugged up - or might be my antivirus that's goin awol - ffs
figueroass27
12. Oct 2020 · 02:33 UTC
Its a pretty neat idea, it can get kinda frustrating when you run out of momentum
MiltonNH25
13. Oct 2020 · 23:12 UTC
Good job with the game especially since it was made it only 5 hours. It was fun to play but the ball tended to be difficult to control will high acceleration on the movement. The aesthetics fit the game well and the music was great, very calm and relaxing.
wrimo
20. Oct 2020 · 14:54 UTC
The game is stunning and the audio is excellent! As others have said, the ball can be frustrating to control. I really enjoyed my time with this, great job.
🎤 Wassim
21. Oct 2020 · 15:34 UTC
Thank you everyone for the amazing feedback!
JoaoG
25. Oct 2020 · 22:46 UTC
I agree that the ball can be frustrating to control, but I liked the game, the sound is great and the graphics, even simple, are very pleasant to look at. Great job!
TolMera
25. Oct 2020 · 23:07 UTC
If you can, you get a WebGL or HTML version of the game, I can't play because it's windows and I don't have a windows machine.
🎤 Wassim
27. Oct 2020 · 17:54 UTC
@joaog Thank you for your feedback :smile:
@tolmera Will do in the next version, Sorry about that time was tight!