Every 10 seconds life by aDeCon
Look on every important second in the life of the characters. Play mini games. Clean up after the cat, get married, get a job, etc. Find a piece of your life in the 10 seconds! :heart:
Use hints! 
Ratings
| Given | 91🗳️ | 65🗨️ |
Another really important thing is that if you're going to do a game with a heavy narrative focus, you should have a robust grasp of the language you're writing it in. "Doing the next" is not a valid English sentence (try saying "one more time" instead), and "talent" is spelled with one L. I understand that not everyone is a native speaker, but it becomes pretty hard to ignore in a game where the main draw is reading the text. Just a basic spellcheck would go a long way.
That being said, the graphics are quite appealing, and the minigames are surprisingly challenging and well designed. Maybe in the future you guys would be better off shifting the focus to the gameplay experience.
I could not really find the theme in this one, other than the title.
*also the "every 10 seconds" theme is revealed literally at the end of the game*
A very simple and well done visual novel.
I liked that they used the theme in a subjective way. It's the first game I've seen like this.
Congratulations!
ps: I've never had so much trouble eating candies. :D
For sound design I recommend to play with the pitch of the beep a little bit. or instead of making a beep for every letter. skip the beep for some letters in the string (for example the spaces and punctuations). or have a different beep for vowels as another examplel, this would make it sound more "natural" and pleasant to listen to. (I had to turn the volume down a lot 😂)
I enjoyed playing the mini games, although grandma's candies almost made me rage quit!
Good job overal on this game!
Overall it looks great, even though the game is in pixel style but I can see you put a lot of effort into the art resources.
I really liked the idea! But a few minigames were funny.
1. Cat minigame, why does she poop more when I miss? :D
2. Granny shooting candy like a gun.
3. The guy who gives a damaged heart 0_0
I haven't beaten the letters minigame yet. I'm 10 minutes of tryed :s
The game asks different questions. Why is a guy's poop being removed is an important memory? Is he that lonely? This is sad T_T
The sound did not interfere, despite the problems that you described, and the graphics are nice. Keep making jam games! I believe in you <3
Чалавек у маёй камандзе сказаў, што ваша гульня яшчэ падтрымлівае ўкраінскую мову. Вельмі спадзяюся, што вы не дашлі на стрым таму што не змаглі, а не па палітычных чынніках.
Не хвилюйтеся. Ми не прийшли, бо забули. :sweat_smile:
Also, I suggest using royalty free music if you don't have access to a sound person. It does a lot to set the mood, which would have elevated a game such as this.
Enjoyed the game a lot
> "did you missa 0 on 10000 miliseconds = 10 seconds or did I missread?"
We do not know English well, so we could not convey the meaning of the text correctly... We wanted to indicate that one second is not just 1000 milliseconds
The mini games are OK, nothing to special but they are providing some gameplay. Besides that the messages at the end of the game was very touching and made clear why I coudn't make out a continous story.
It would be cool if the controls weren't hidden behind the minigame. I had to restart to see the controls for the minigame again.
Overall a very cool entry. Keep it up.
Gameplay and plot are so amusing and graphics is very unusual and stylish.
Окрема подяка за українську💙💛
If only life had so many retries...
only constructive criticism is that they typing games were got a bit old / long by the last one.
I liked the graphics, they were clear and also very expressive, especially considering the two-color scheme. The sounds for dialogue, including the "pitch variation" depending on the character "speaking" might have felt less intrusive if the volume of it was a bit lower.
The concept itself was interesting, a narrative delivered with a backing of minigames. Most of the minigames felt easy to "decode", the "words from letters" took me a few tries before I realized that the white-background letters were the letters to catch.
I liked the message of the game, so many moments to reflect on, so remember to make the fullest out of the time we get.
Some thoughts:
- The art is great, sometimes less is more.
- I don't really get if we are seeing different moments on the live of the same characters or there're all different people.
- The mini-games may be a little bit repetitive after three or four times
I agree with the comment that some background music would be cool!
Only command I can make is the audio but I played my own music so I’m not gonna :).
I liked the idea of seeing little parts of peoples lives. It would have been good to know if it was the same people, and to build up a bit of a story of their lives.
The mini-games were ok, but a bit repetitive. I felt like the story was the interesting part.
Nice work getting this together in such a short time :).
Cats are a really important part of every game ha-ha

WHAT A CUTIE :two_hearts:
Our game has a cat too :sparkles: i'd be very happy if you'd rate it because it's our fist one :hearts:
Я не очікував побачити інших українців на цьому сайті :smile:
It was fairly easy to figure out what to do in each scene, especially with the sparkles to highlight important things (great touch btw!), and the minigames were intuitive as well. I have to disagree with the reviews that called them "repetitive" - there was enough variety that I never felt as though any specific minigame had outstayed its welcome.
There's a bit of wonky grammar in places, but I understand that English isn't your first language, so I can overlook that (and from the sounds of things, you've already made some improvements compared to what it was like initially). Overall, a really good game with a really powerful message. Well done!
My one technical note was that not all the minigames lock the movement controls, so I'll be playing a game and walking around at the same time. But other than that, it played very smoothly!
Well done, congratulations!
If you want to play our game [WHO'S NEXT !?](https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/51/whos-next), have fun !