by chesschaser

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made by chesschaser for Ludum Dare 53

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Cole Hutson
01. May 2023 · 21:48 UTC
Audio was a little rough (I muted I'm sorry). The game was fun though. I noticed that you move faster when moving diagonal (don't forget to normalize!). Great entry!
MikoziQ
01. May 2023 · 22:37 UTC
Had some rought time with hooligans

- Are they shooting rockets at you? That's some Chicago-level neighbourhood :sweat_smile:
- I like that you can actually recharge the drone!
- Comprehensive tutorial is a plus
- Multiple levels is cool
- The drone itself is actually quite cool!

I Wish the levels were more... diverse in terms of different worlds / cities. Also, it seemed like Enemy density was unequal and there were no-go zones, were you get bombed instantly. I didn't know if I can hide on the buildings as well to avoid damage...

A good effort nontheless!
LDJam user 331502
02. May 2023 · 09:33 UTC
Funny game with friendly city dwellers. I like the city. But would be great if different levels had different ones. Delivery points can be so close or so far, just random, that not really cool. And woul be great to heal yourself somehow
Ayced
02. May 2023 · 09:34 UTC
I managed to lose track of a package on my first run lol. Dwarves came out of nowhere and were mad about it so I think the package had something dwarf related inside.

About half way through the jam I remember thinking of a drone delivery game and thinking I should have made one :smile: I was already committed to something else
greenphox
02. May 2023 · 09:49 UTC
Very nice game! I was doing something wrong tho and I don't understand what, in the first level, I deliver all the packages but it says 2/3 and it just doesn't finish and I am either shot down, or out of charge. Is it a bug, or a am I doing something wrong?
Very cool idea and with a nice touch of humour.
🎤 chesschaser
02. May 2023 · 09:52 UTC
@greenphox hmm that might be a bug
marzenie
02. May 2023 · 10:01 UTC
I had a lot of fun playing this game! Love the shade on corporate delivery hell and the whole user experience of it, also I think the music is a bop, with a nice concept as well. I can definitely see this game being fully fleshed out so please keep up the good work! Would love to play it in the future <3
Blueanoli
02. May 2023 · 10:22 UTC
This game is amaizong ;) Had fun trying this one out
Mrtubagames
02. May 2023 · 10:30 UTC
I kinda wish the stuff got picked up automatically when you hovered over it. Also, indicator pointing to the headquarters after you deliver a package would be nice. The sound could use a bit of work. The gameplay works well though.
Ido
02. May 2023 · 10:33 UTC
oh my, i never knew the life of a drown could be so hard, poor thing :laughing:
Mololo
02. May 2023 · 10:35 UTC
I had fun playing your game, Good job!
SamChen
02. May 2023 · 10:36 UTC
This game looks pretty fun. I like how the whole satire with Amazon going on here and the random supervisor yelling at you. However I do think the mechnism could be more polished. There are no countermeasures against the shooters, I think it would be cool if we can have a new mechnism which tells us how to deal with the shooters.
LDJam user 312900
02. May 2023 · 10:56 UTC
Really fun game, don't really have any feedback apart from maybe making the energy bar smoother energy so that it ticks down slower.
Quanta Studios
02. May 2023 · 11:29 UTC
Fairly clear game loop, good tutorials - good entry!
mackelio
02. May 2023 · 11:49 UTC
really cute game! i like it! :)
LDJam user 241354
02. May 2023 · 11:54 UTC
Super fun, loved it! Its mostly impossible to dodge bullets, and sometimes game does not recoginze package bein delivered into the circle, but overall, great game!
🎤 chesschaser
02. May 2023 · 11:57 UTC
@nastya-nenapisannoe yeah it only recognizes it if you press space when "Press SPACE to drop" is on screen. That can be a bit of a bug
Aalula
02. May 2023 · 12:22 UTC
nice cute game but i would like it if the drones movement would feel different when you get hit very badly, a bit of shake or drowsiness(?) would give it a good feel
arron-fowler
02. May 2023 · 12:34 UTC
Simple enough and well put together. It felt a little flat to play. Maybe a bit of juice in the movement so that it swings a little. I found it very tricky to do much about being shot. Kinda just had to take it. The alignment for dropping and picking up stuff did not quite feel in the natural place. I intuitivly put myself where it felt right but it was wrong. All that aside it was well put together and explained and I had fun. Good work.
Enver Arco
02. May 2023 · 12:41 UTC
Nice touch that you were able to include tutorials. I made a drone delivery game too
teadrinker
02. May 2023 · 13:31 UTC
impressive completeness of this game!
However the tutorial texts displays a bit too slow.
Le Goss du Net
02. May 2023 · 13:45 UTC
This is a fun and goofy ahh game how i like them ! A few bugs but that's not very bad for a game jam game ! overall pretty good, good job !
Oliver Pope
02. May 2023 · 13:52 UTC
Nice game! I think a few more features/obstacles in the later levels would be cool but overall good fun! I think your tutorial is a bit too much text and should be more of a guided level, but also I feel like the game is quite simple in it's controls so I still picked it up quite quickly. Well Done xXXx
Charlieorange07
02. May 2023 · 14:12 UTC
Kinda hard for me I guess but truly fun idea
flanne
02. May 2023 · 14:16 UTC
Pretty fun. Nice that you included tutorials as well.
PoshDan
02. May 2023 · 14:36 UTC
Simple enough, seemed like a good scope for the jam. People are really picky about the accuracy of deliveries. :) I would've liked some way to deal with the enemies, perhaps a way to stun them. I really liked the graphics/aesthetic.
LDJam user 336996
02. May 2023 · 15:41 UTC
Fun game! I loved the tutorial setup, and the game is very easy to understand and get into. Not very buggy either, good job! Cool graphics and fun bgm tune. It was hard not to get blown up though haha
LDJam user 158571
02. May 2023 · 15:56 UTC
Good Game! I would only change the attack of the ground enemies, because right now it's impossible to dodge their shots. Also, maybe softer sounds
Pete Valeo
02. May 2023 · 16:03 UTC
Nice work! Was a little it hard to tell where pickup/drop zone was because of the shadow effect (which was visually cool - just a lil confusing), but once I got that, it was a straightforward and fun challenge. Graphics/sound were very acceptable for a weekend game, and the story/premise was definitely relevant to the modern moment. Definite moments of anxiety when the low-battery alarm was going and I was far away from the charging station - overall a very solid offering!
Cody Holt
02. May 2023 · 16:28 UTC
Pretty simple to understand game. I thought it played fine, but the enemies attacks were pretty unavoidable if you actually were attacked by them. I would have liked to see maybe a speed boost or dodge at the cost of charge or something like that. I think the text scrolling in the tutorial could be made faster or if clicking skips the text scrolling animation and displays it all.
Wouter52
02. May 2023 · 16:45 UTC
I like your game, I had fun playing it.


Some feedback/questions I've got for you :-)

- Quora filled sound effect sounds like a game-over screen
- Charge is refilled after delivering a package?
- Is there any way of restoring health?
- Pointers are nice, and I like how the "home base" does not have a pointer. That way the player has to remind the route back.
- I don't like the music in the tutorial level. It makes it for me hard to concentrate on the explaination. Also, the font is fine for buttons and titles, but hard to read for large amount of text, like the tutorial.
I like how you split the tutorial up. And that you made all the levels playable. That is clever
- I like how you can just drop packages to make a quick escape from the bezosguys. Also, very cool that the buildings can be used as shields!
XSchaumiX
02. May 2023 · 17:46 UTC
Really nice game! I got shot down many times but still fun! I had some trouble with parcel number 5 in level 2 it didnt register the parcel on the floor. Besides that well done!
Erlioniel
02. May 2023 · 18:26 UTC
Hey dude, played thru and can say that those bastards killed me multiple times! It's not fair that I can't drop a package on their head in return :smile:

On more serious note - there a few things to consider next time. It doesn't really feel fair, especially with heavy package, because you can't dodge or run from them. Building might be a coverage (logical, right?) but as far as I understood they doesn't cover you.

Overall a good entry for LD, you matched the theme and it's quite nice and challenging to play. Great job!
ToSMaster
02. May 2023 · 19:02 UTC
Funny game and cool idea of implementing the tutorial. The drone was fun to navigate. It's cool that buildings block attacks, but why not other enemies. Would have been a cool thing, if they could be eliminated by shooting each other accidentally. :D
Fun game still! Keep it up!

Also, good thing the company is not a ripoff of amazon. Yea.
LDJam user 263763
03. May 2023 · 01:16 UTC
Simple and fun, I like it, a little hard for me, the baby bezos are bad man lol, maybe some health to pick up, I don´t see it or more speed for the drone, at least pass a couple of levels, nice music and sounds, cool job!
Dongle
03. May 2023 · 04:53 UTC
Simple yet fun. The game is quite hard. Great job on the game.
Attala
03. May 2023 · 09:22 UTC
Nice game mechanics which works well. Some sounds and music sometimes came as a shock to me :) Kudos for a tutorial and nailing the theme.
Red_dino
03. May 2023 · 09:26 UTC
Cool game, really logical and satisfying game loop. Definitely one of the games that I've 'picked-up' the fastest of the ones I've played this Jam! Only note is that darn bullseye was so picky about where I put the package!
LDJam user 299352
03. May 2023 · 09:27 UTC
Cool game. I wish I could shoot back sometimes :sweat_smile: . But sometimes it didn't accept the package, especially when there was a shooter at the drop point.
MihRea
03. May 2023 · 09:43 UTC
Nice game, quite addictive, even though it gets hard later. I got stuck on level 2, the health drops very fast, it would have been nice to have the possibility to recharge it.
magus77
03. May 2023 · 17:54 UTC
cool game , love the shadow to help target stuff and the 8bit sounds
riley9
03. May 2023 · 20:34 UTC
i like the premise of your game and the evil jeff bezos' you have to escape from! i got to level 3, from there on out it was a bit too tricky for me! i'd have liked if the gameplay would have been a bit more faster :3
LDJam user 334002
05. May 2023 · 16:11 UTC
Nice game! I didn't beat it but i think that your game is fun. Good job!
EmojiBea
05. May 2023 · 16:12 UTC
A fun time to play. Very full-featured with multiple levels and tutorials! Good stuff! Like others have said, some variance in the level layout and such would've elevated the experience, but well done nonetheless!
bad_fetus
05. May 2023 · 16:12 UTC
Cool idea, the shooters were too frustrating in practice but I can see it being a fun game after some iterations. Good work!
nerdyHerbivore
07. May 2023 · 19:25 UTC
Loved the funny dialog with Eric, had a bit of trouble beating it, but still had fun! Sorry could not rate audio, my computer speakers aren't working... :grimacing: