30 Seconds or it's free by Pixelhurricane

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made by Pixelhurricane for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

​A 3D pizza delivery game where you must race around the city as a drone picking up pizzas and carrying them to hungry customers! The only problem is your store has a typo in their new promotion, if it's not delivered in 30 seconds it's free! Made for Ludum Dare 53 compo! 30SecondsOrItsFree2023-04-3021-13-02.png

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ROBOWARRIOR1982
01. May 2023 · 07:48 UTC
I can't deliver any pizza when i try to deliver one, i have an error message write in red, could you patch this error ?
🎤 Pixelhurricane
01. May 2023 · 15:34 UTC
I'm not sure what that error might be, I definitely have some time to try a patch though. what did the error say exactly?
MatthewDrake
01. May 2023 · 15:35 UTC
Got an error in the console log when trying to drop a pizza while I'm not holding one. It's not anything game-breaking, just wanted you to know:

ArgumentOutOfRangeException: Index was out of range. Must be non-negative and less than the size of the collection.
Parameter name: index
at System.Collections.Generic.List`1[T].get_Item (System.Int32 index) [0x00009] in <3dd5df5ef4974f29afeb2d3ba227c5da>:0
at PlayerController.RemovePizzaFromDeliveryStack () [0x00001] in E:\Game Dev\30SecondsOrItsFree\Assets\Scripts\PlayerController.cs:262
at PlayerController.Update () [0x00275] in E:\Game Dev\30SecondsOrItsFree\Assets\Scripts\PlayerController.cs:241


That being said, this was a pretty fun game! The flying controls were good and the gameplay loop was pretty solid, trying to remember which building ordered what and getting back in time. It might be nice to see an overall fail / win state or score tracker if you want to expand it more.
🎤 Pixelhurricane
01. May 2023 · 15:39 UTC
Thanks for that! I think that explains the bug both of you were having, pretty sure I know exactly where to track it down to fix.

I'm glad you thought it was fun, thanks for the feedback and giving it a try!
🎤 Pixelhurricane
01. May 2023 · 15:55 UTC
Bug should be fixed, thanks both of you!
zSharpFire
01. May 2023 · 16:05 UTC
Overall a nice game, the mechanics are good and the game looks and sounds great. The game although, gets a bit repetitive without a clear objective. I would have loved something like a scoreboard or costraint to make the game more challenging.
🎤 Pixelhurricane
01. May 2023 · 16:08 UTC
Thanks for the feedback!
Is the scoreboard not showing up at the end of your game though?
🎤 Pixelhurricane
01. May 2023 · 16:45 UTC
I've taken some of the feedback and updated the game slightly to hopefully address some of it
Wolfier
02. May 2023 · 18:55 UTC
Is there a way to stop all movement? Its quite hard to pick things up when your moving constantly.

Also the controls disappeared before I had a chance to read them. Considering no one else seems to have that problem i'm wondering if it just me.
zubspace
04. May 2023 · 21:11 UTC
It's a nice idea. I like the 3d business environment. It took me a while to understand how it works but that's on me... It's a bit too hectic for my taste because you have to juggle so many things at once, like the color, the pizza type, the location and many orders at once... I think I'd die delivering pizzas... Anyway, good job finishing your game!
Francis
05. May 2023 · 00:10 UTC
![Capture.JPG](///raw/09b/15/z/5b559.jpg)

It took me a while to understand what's happening, and by then I was already losing lives. I missed that I could fly up/down because the prompt disappeared before I read everything. I liked the mechanic that you have a stack of pizzas and you can only deliver them from the bottom up. Having verticality is a cool idea, I think there's more potential to be explored there. I also had a problem where I was losing lives but I couldn't tell if there were even active orders. Maybe some kind of UI with the orders coming in would be helpful.