{"author_link":"\/author\/metalchouchen\/","author_name":"metalchouchen","author_uid":"37446","comments":[{"author_name":"tyrants.not.found.team","author_uid":"66002","time":"Dec 15, 2015 @ 1:12pm","epoch":1450184820,"text":"The mood created is awesome :)\r<br\/>I would have liked to hear a recording of the poetry, since reading it was a bit hard.\r<br\/>Good job!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Cheers,\r<br\/>Morco (tyrants.not.found team)"},{"author_name":"yhsper","author_uid":"50473","time":"Dec 15, 2015 @ 1:22pm","epoch":1450185420,"text":"I liked the aesthetics you used in the game, particularly the Skybox use and the music. I liked the rail controls, although I'm not the best at them, but found the poetry writing impossible to read while playing. To me, not zen and relaxing at all! Fun, nonetheless!"},{"author_name":"RougeRogue","author_uid":"43866","time":"Dec 15, 2015 @ 4:18pm","epoch":1450195980,"text":"Definitely shows a lot of potential as a game (that is if you plan to turn it to one; it works just fine as it is)."},{"author_name":"LxStudio","author_uid":"66859","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 8:54am","epoch":1450255740,"text":"I imagine this would be an exquisite way to end a story (e.g. outro or credits sequence). Beautiful experience."},{"author_name":"coywolf","author_uid":"18007","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 12:47pm","epoch":1450269720,"text":"Cool concept. I also had trouble reading while playing"},{"author_name":"CremaGames","author_uid":"59414","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 1:09pm","epoch":1450271040,"text":"I like the mood and the aesthetics but I got all dizzy"},{"author_name":"utgarda","author_uid":"62981","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 1:11pm","epoch":1450271160,"text":"I was able to kinda read it because I remember some narrator reading it, so it sounded in my head :) With more challenge added it's going to be a great game. For now, the coolest thing is seeing this 3D path all over the space. The idea of collecting words for the poem, or maybe &quot;pieces of thought&quot; or inspiration, this brings 5 stars for innovation from me."},{"author_name":"fractalbear","author_uid":"64635","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 10:43pm","epoch":1450305480,"text":"Awesome concept! Loved that instead of score you collected words of a poem, great idea! Visuals were really nice and the music was lovely, great stuff :)"},{"author_name":"metalchouchen","author_uid":"37446","time":"Dec 16, 2015 @ 11:46pm","epoch":1450309260,"text":"Thanks you all for your comments :) That give me a lots of motivation to make it better."},{"author_name":"Rex Peppers","author_uid":"4914","time":"Dec 18, 2015 @ 1:08pm","epoch":1450443780,"text":"Can't play on windows, but looks cool!"},{"author_name":"Rialgar","author_uid":"3996","time":"Dec 20, 2015 @ 10:14pm","epoch":1450649340,"text":"While poem and game did no seem to connect, I liked both. Music was interestingly fitting both the visual stlye and the poem. Good job!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Reading while playing was difficult, maybe stretching out the collectibles or having a narrator read a piece the poem everytime a verse\/sentence\/unit is complete would get rid of that."},{"author_name":"Hot Box Games","author_uid":"39707","time":"Dec 22, 2015 @ 8:57pm","epoch":1450817520,"text":"I liked the visuals and the idea, the poetry is rather hard to read. But lovely games."},{"author_name":"beetracks","author_uid":"62138","time":"Dec 22, 2015 @ 9:08pm","epoch":1450818180,"text":"Interesting mood, interesting idea, but it was hard to read and play. I'd put a sfx when the balls are caught too."},{"author_name":"SinclairStrange","author_uid":"44332","time":"Jan 2, 2016 @ 11:02pm","epoch":1451775420,"text":"Had trouble reading a little however the whole premise was nice and relaxing. Great mood!"}],"images":["ld34\/37446-8e91de9bba1c1f71f5276957e9a0fc11.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/metalchouchen.itch.io\/poetry","text":"Windows"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"7222","g_author":"37446","g_event":"LD34","g_eventkey":"31","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"7254","g_title":"Poetry","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"692","g_commentcount":"14","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/511439\/37446-shot0-1450142481.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"So this is my entry for this Ludum Dare. My goal this weekend was to follow a tutorial to create a spline editor in Unity3D. But finally, tonight after the work I decide to make something that looks like a game. Mostly to be able to vote and comments other games :)\r\n\r\nI'm note sure it's a game. But at least it's zen and relaxing.\r\n\r\nThanks you for playing.\r\n\r\n(PS : Once I'll reinstall completely unity3d 5.3, I will made the WebGL build.)\r\n\r\n","title":"Poetry"}