What’s on your train? by VLAD_LEN

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made by VLAD_LEN for Ludum Dare 59 (JAM)

In this first-person western inspection game, every decision begins with a signal: ring the bell to call the next train in, inspect its papers and cargo, catch contraband, then signal it to leave or move on. New rules are introduced day by day, so the game naturally teaches you as the shift gets harder.

Tutorial WASD - MOVE

MOUSE - CAMERA

E - INTERACT

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Ratings

Overall 385th 3.611⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Fun 583th 3.13⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 676th 2.926⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Theme 703th 3⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 383th 3.821⭐ 30🧑‍⚖️
Audio 207th 3.808⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Mood 304th 3.833⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Given 34🗳️ 36🗨️

Feedback

Enriranjan
Apr 21st · 08:00 UTC
I like the train theme, and I think it's an innovative idea. The overall mod for the game is awesome and really draws you in.
Flinge
Apr 21st · 11:45 UTC
Great western vibes. I really liked the way you interpreted the theme, and the whole idea of checking the trains is genuinely cool. It feels like one of those concepts that could be expanded. Nice job!
FakeTrap
Apr 21st · 12:55 UTC
-Mom, buy me “Papers, Please”
-No, we already have “Papers, Please” at home
“Papers, Please” at home:

Seriously though, it’s a really addictive game.
LDJam user 423838
Apr 21st · 13:49 UTC
the train theme and western vibes are awesome and really draw you in. the whole mechanic of checking trains is a super cool and innovative take on the "papers, please" style, but light source is a little bit smol
disperse
Apr 21st · 14:32 UTC
Really well done, I think there's room for more games like this. I'd like to see this expanded, having the ability to search through crates, for instance. What's really missing is a day timer and the instant feedback about whether you made any mistakes. What made Paper's Please so good was the time and money pressure along with the tension as you let someone through and had to wait to see if you would be penalized or not. I think adding that element would make the game more compelling.
Rocotos
Apr 21st · 15:14 UTC
"Papers, Please"-ish game, but with Wild West atmosphere and trains. Actually quite nice, has a potential.
NinjaCatz
Apr 21st · 18:07 UTC
Старая добрая игра "проверялка", но в стиле Western. Музыка и графика приятная. Единственное, чего не хватает, это трекинг, сколько ещё вагонов нужно проверить в текущем дне. Не совсем понятно, проверка ограничена по внутриигровому времени, или кол-вом вагонов в день?
Ещё словил небольшой баг, что у меня 4 день стартовал три раза подряд, но так даже лучше, закрыл квоту без особых трудностей xd
ShadyShade
Apr 21st · 19:55 UTC
Really liked the atmosphere and gameplay (It seems a bit too repetitive at the end tho)!
Good job :thumbsup_tone1:
Kwetka
Apr 21st · 22:09 UTC
I jumped in front of a train.
I died 👍
tinykidtoo
Apr 23rd · 16:52 UTC
I really like the vibes. I wish there was some more pressure, like a timer that fined me if I went over an inspection. If you had infinite time, maybe a stow away who bribes you. But I did forget to close the door many times. Maybe some auto doors
bereg
Apr 23rd · 22:09 UTC
I paid off my debts! Interesting game. Despite its simplicity, it’s really engaging. It made me want a bit more cognitive load. Maybe you could add tasks like inspecting something outside the train car, where there might be a stash, or similar little objectives. Or maybe a timer would help, not sure. Still, a great game.
cRoxx
Apr 23rd · 22:56 UTC
The game has a great western vibe. I was hooked immediately because it doesn't have a lengthy tutorial. The game loop is easy to pick up, but it keeps you engaged enough so you don't get bored after 3 minutes. Nice work!
Kuwagata
Apr 24th · 10:28 UTC
🤠👍👍👍
Kuwagata
Apr 24th · 10:28 UTC
It was fun playing this game. I love the atmosphere, as I've watched a lot of Westerns, and it's captured well here! The sounds are very high-quality, and I love how the ground shakes when a train arrives, haha. Someone has probably already mentioned this; it's not really a downside, but rather a way to improve the game: I'd like to immediately see how our decision, whether to let a train pass or not, affects the game. For example, a fork immediately appears where trains that didn't let a train pass stop, or something like that. Otherwise, it's as if my decision has no effect and they all go the same way, haha. (I think in games like Papers Please, this is very important, in addition to the rewards, etc.) The game has great potential!! COOL IT! I have the fastest hands in the goddamn wild west.
harujam
Apr 24th · 14:45 UTC
Nice western vibes here. Just one thing: If music was self made, was e-guitar a real fender telecaster or not? :D
Shram
Apr 24th · 18:40 UTC
The music and the idea are not bad. But the monotony ruins everything.
nexusasx10
Apr 24th · 20:24 UTC
I like the atmosphere. Art and music are awsome. Didn't really understand what to do with closed crates. Almost every train has them. But I finished the game anyway. Good job.
OttoBroccoli
Apr 24th · 20:35 UTC
This game is style. This game is a vibe. This game is Django Unchained from Arstotzka.
Eeva
Apr 24th · 21:24 UTC
I thought the graphics, sound and general vibe of the game was cool, even though the gameplay got repetitive quite fast. felt more like busywork than enjoyment in the end, even though i had fun in the beginning. you should consider different rules/mechanics to keep the checking of trains interesting throughout the game :)
SHAKIROVICH
Apr 25th · 07:37 UTC
Enjoyed the game, bottles of moonshine got me cracking!
GARYglhf
Apr 27th · 12:03 UTC
здорово, атмосфера передается очень хорошо, музыка приятная.
CataclysmicKnight
Apr 30th · 18:23 UTC
Great work! I really enjoyed checking out each of the trains, and even though I didn't end up getting any wrong, there was still that stress of "please don't let me be owned by the railroad company!" 😅 The endless final day was a nice touch, too, as was your allowing players to walk around the desert, the audio, and the rumbling of the screen as trains came and went.

I'm also SO glad you wouldn't allow the trains to be sent without closing the door, because I forgot that almost 60% of the time!!! 🤦‍♀️
Ava Skoog
May 05th · 18:39 UTC
Very cool and atmospheric! Enjoyed it a lot.

Mostly intuitive to understand, tho I was never able to figure contraband out, as I never saw any enclosed crate that I thought looked different from the rest, so the first time I just rejected any train that had crates at all, which lost me a lot of points, and so after that I just always let trains with crates through as long as the manifest was correct, which seems to have mostly worked. How *do* you tell crates with contraband from normal ones? 😅

Graphics and sound are great. Based on visuals alone it would've been very melancholic, but the music is quite upbeat and motivating. Fits well, given the story. I'm in trouble, but on a mission! I like how tactile stuff is, having to ring the bell, open and close the doors and so on. Would've been nice if the bell swung.

The one thing I didn't like was how much the screen shook with every train. A little bit I think would've been cool as it does help sell the weight of the trains, but it made me very motion sick, so I just had to close my eyes for about ten seconds between every train leaving and the next coming in.

Being able to move around the desert beyond the station was interesting. Would've been cool to find something out there.

Overall well done and quite polished, nice work!