Untroubled Bliss by Gamayun.Games

An interactive fiction, or a short story about recognising the certain signals. Made in Twine.
You wake up and this day is just perfect. You should probably get outside and enjoy spring in the park. Or maybe you have some other plans? No matter what, you'll probably have to deal with this annoying beeping first...
| itch.io | https://gamayungames.itch.io/untroubled-bliss |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/59/untroubled-bliss |
Ratings
| Overall | 479th | 3.516⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 538th | 3.226⭐ | 33🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 584th | 3.109⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 609th | 3.328⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 769th | 2.403⭐ | 33🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 217th | 3.391⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 437th | 3.609⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 21🗳️ | 38🗨️ |
yes, you can add graphic and audio, but I wanted to create a solely text-based game partly as a challenge for myself and partly because of limited time :) it is also my first Twine game, so I spent the majority of my time learning about variables and actually writing haha.
p.s. there is actually one graphic piece in the game that you can see if you reach the "true" ending!
haha they are hidden like that so that you could grasp the whole of a story if you aim to pass the test :)
the system is a bit broken, you're right :D
Overall some decent writing in there, manages to build a world with only a few sentences. I think it needs a little bit of imagery, if you had simple a drawing of the room and you would click on each element to interact with it instead of choosing a text option it would elevate the game. Adding some ambient music would also have been a low-hanging fruit to set the vibes.
@kkkyia totally agree! thank you <3
@gecko64 i am happy you enjoyed it! audio is planned for the postjam version :)
@venomousmouse thank you ^^
i thought about adding some imagery but decided to limit it as much as possible (there is one art piece you get with the "true" ending only), as my challenge for this LD was to create a text game. clicking on the elements is probably another genre :) but ambient music is a great idea!
@lollister thank you for playing! i'll definitely look into adding some music or sound effects :)