Justice by Strogorofobaldo

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made by Strogorofobaldo for Ludum Dare 59 (JAM)

A short narrative/text based game by Guilherme Leocádio

Due to some feedback, I added an option to speed up the game :)

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Ratings

Overall 427th 3.567⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Fun 319th 3.533⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 553th 3.167⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Theme 449th 3.7⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Audio 329th 3.533⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Mood 304th 3.833⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Given 33🗳️ 6🗨️

Feedback

OLEGATOR0270
Apr 21st · 17:21 UTC
It's a wonderful game, but there are no screenshots at all, there is no description, but the novel itself is incredibly atmospheric and interesting.
Silky
Apr 21st · 21:44 UTC
WOW i was not expecting this much feeling towards when that ending music hit together with the room visuals... I was honestly stunned, what a great Experience, i was truly invested!! That ending did make me choke up a bit not gonna lie..

The visuals were also Very very good and polished, and all the sounds were really well made and placed.
I was very impressed and had a GREAT time!
kayrum
Apr 21st · 21:57 UTC
Very nice story and spin on the theme. Though aparrently i am not a good investigator.
🎤 Strogorofobaldo
Apr 22nd · 00:56 UTC
I really appreciate all the comments, and I am glad you guys are liking it! I already noticed that there are some grammar errors in the game. I will adjust them when the JAM is over (English is not my first language). Thank you all :)
LDJam user 427605
Apr 22nd · 07:24 UTC
An interesting story, well executed. The visuals aren't jarring; on the contrary, the animations are pleasant.

You did a great job.
My only minor criticism: the text should have been able to skip the animation.
Nikiroz
Apr 22nd · 08:47 UTC
A simple but interesting game. The only thing missing is the ability to speed up the dialogue.
korzhik
Apr 23rd · 19:24 UTC
Wow, I honestly didn't expect this. Great writing, pleasant to read - never felt tiring. I really got drawn into the story and by the end I actually shed a tear. Excellent work, you managed to genuinely move me.
LDJam user 261037
Apr 24th · 18:54 UTC
Game isn't working for me :(. Downloaded the Windows version, tried to open the .exe and all I get is a black screen that crashes after several seconds. Tried running as administrator and had the same issue.
🎤 Strogorofobaldo
Apr 25th · 06:33 UTC
@kobato-games Have you extracted the files on another folder and opened the .exe with the .pck? If you just open the zip and double click the .exe the game does not work.
LDJam user 261037
Apr 25th · 18:13 UTC
I did unzip it. I clicked on the .exe in the same folder with the .pck.
🎤 Strogorofobaldo
Apr 27th · 03:02 UTC
@kobato-games Strange... I haven't had this problem and you are the first who did. I'm sorry about that, but I'm afraid I don't know what to do :(
LDJam user 261037
Apr 27th · 15:39 UTC
@strogorofobaldo That's okay. these things happen sometimes.
adam-gould
Apr 27th · 21:25 UTC
Very cool concept. It reminds me of Black Mirror. Good dialogue writing, too. At the very start I wanted voice acting but as the mystery unfolded it made sense why there wasn't any. Good stuff!
attentionadmin
May 01st · 09:56 UTC
It's too bad there's no WebGL build.
anaastaska
May 02nd · 16:06 UTC
Great story was told, i loved it! Only one thing that sometimes i wanted to skip text animation as i read fast enough and there was no voices so i just waited but all other rhings are just great.
jk5000
May 04th · 17:39 UTC
An interesting little story. Overall a well made little game. Well done.
Wallted
May 05th · 19:30 UTC
Great writing, short but hits hard, engages the player to the end and with a twist. The end screen in 3D is a great reward to this, I liked this cherry on top :D Overall polished game, no complains. I wish we could more loops ^^