Reza's Story by Herrybiscuit

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made by Herrybiscuit for Ludum Dare 48 (JAM)

Reza has gone missing and left pieces of a letter she received behind. Talk to their friends and figure out what happened.

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nardandas
28. Apr 2021 · 01:34 UTC
Interesting entry, you don't see too many story-based games. I was really interested in what happened to Reza, though I'm not sure if I understood the end. If anything, the only thing I'd add is a little crosshair - watering the garden was tough.
Jaiden Gerig
28. Apr 2021 · 02:11 UTC
Neat little story, I loved the pop-up storybook style presentation and I found the character designs quite interesting. I loved the effect at the beginning would be cool if there were more of these kinds of strange twists throughout the experience, but a lot of it was pretty simple item fetching. A small dot crosshair would go a long way as well as making the garden section easier do without accidentally dropping the watering can. The music really matched the tone of the game and I found myself captivated enough to see Reza's story through to the end!
HyperTheory
28. Apr 2021 · 08:03 UTC
The idea and stroy is good. But my game crushed when I was talking to Iris. Hope it can be fixed.
steinuil
29. Apr 2021 · 14:53 UTC
Nice little story, the character designs and dialogues were quite charming. Pretty good music too! I was also a bit confused as to what happened at the end but maybe it was meant to be ambiguous?
Substain
29. Apr 2021 · 18:52 UTC
Cool, i like the nodding idea very much. Was that a mirror at the end?