The Elephant in the Room by CeeJap

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made by CeeJap for Ludum Dare 48 (JAM)

The Elephant in the Room is a short adventure game made for Ludum Dare 48.

You must travel downwards into the Earth to find why the planet is drying...

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Ratings

Overall 393th 3.833⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Fun 354th 3.759⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 730th 3.37⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Theme 651th 3.833⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 770th 3.796⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Audio 283th 3.87⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Humor 502th 3.22⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Mood 505th 3.808⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Given 19🗳️ 30🗨️

Feedback

bassguitarbill
26. Apr 2021 · 23:29 UTC
Excellent! Know that I was about to scroll past your game, but then I saw the animation of the elephant drinking and I was immediately charmed, and I had to know more.
beats
26. Apr 2021 · 23:39 UTC
Cool little game, the end gave me dino run vibes. I appreciated the nice backgrounds and awesome music.
3amsoda
27. Apr 2021 · 00:33 UTC
fun game! harder than i expected but still good. I really liked the pixel art of the elephant its cute.
AbigailCorfman
27. Apr 2021 · 00:35 UTC
This is delightful! It took me a minute to realize that drinking water reduced the bar--my immediate instinct was thinking it should fill it. Maybe rename that status bar thirst or something?

The boss battle was LOVELY. I loved booping him to death with my snoot.
alec
27. Apr 2021 · 00:46 UTC
Pico-8 is the best. You made a really amazing game here. Great work! The graphics were nice and there was some great movement going on.

At one point I fell into a hole that I was unable to jump out of. That could be user error though lol.
kankje
27. Apr 2021 · 01:13 UTC
The game was very cute and harder than I thought it would be! 🐘
Augcart
27. Apr 2021 · 01:20 UTC
Fun game ! Great job :D
kel
27. Apr 2021 · 01:33 UTC
How polished! Incredibly cute, bumpin music, fun yet simple gameplay... what more could you ask for??
KyleTheCoder
27. Apr 2021 · 02:50 UTC
This game was really clever. The music really snagged me, plus the art was so cute. Great work!
tarfield
27. Apr 2021 · 21:45 UTC
I really liked the music and mood here, such a charming game! I thought it was a bit to harsh that you have to start from the beginning if you die, there were no checkpoints :(
TheWinrawr
27. Apr 2021 · 23:34 UTC
Love the mood of this game, it's super charming. The elephant is super cute and the gameplay is simple but fun. I really like the graphics and the environment as well.

I'd definitely add some checkpoints in the game though. Dying after you get hit once is fine with checkpoints, but not if you have to go all the way at the beginning and replay everything again. I'd also reverse the colors of the water bar. Usually, the dark color is used to indicate a bar is empty, not full. I was pretty confused on how to fill the bar until I realized it was depleting, not filling.

Overall, great entry. I had fun and managed to beat the boss.
🎤 CeeJap
28. Apr 2021 · 12:43 UTC
Thanks everyone so much for your feedback! I've created a second version of the game which should be now linked alongside the original Ludum Dare submission above. For @alec I removed the hole that you would get trapped in, for @abigailcorfman and @thewinrawr I changed the look of the water bar so that it's a little more clear, and finally for @tarfield and @thewinrawr I added a checkpoint on level 4, which should remove some of the monotony of redoing all 8 levels every game. Thanks again to everyone who left a review and a comment, I appreciate you all!
Eugenik
28. Apr 2021 · 14:27 UTC
It is so good!.
David U
28. Apr 2021 · 15:13 UTC
I really liked the bright colours. The mechanic of having to drink water along the way, it added some strategy to the game, even though sometimes I wanted to take my time, it forced you to keep moving.
mtrc
29. Apr 2021 · 21:54 UTC
So good - it's such a complete thing, I liked the difficulty too, has that really good PICO-8 vibe. I was not expecting the boss, but I loved it, and the ending screen was so sweet. Such a lot of charm crammed into a tiny package. ^_^
neontropics
01. May 2021 · 00:28 UTC
The graphics have a great clean but cute minimal look that fit very well with the music, and the platforming was good in that it was fun to just walk and jump around.

After dying a few times past the first level it gets tiring having to redo it - I think either checkpoints at every level or otherwise a bit more "juice" in the gameplay would be needed to balance this out.
duo-afgebeld
02. May 2021 · 13:51 UTC
This is a pretty good game. Presentation is charming, and it's addictive enough to keep going to reach just one more level. Dying instantly from one mistake grates after awhile though. I see that you made a version with a checkpoint, I'm gonna try that now.

I just played the final level. The boss fight is a good idea, maybe good to have more of this!
woahitsjeff
03. May 2021 · 02:00 UTC
This was such a neat little game! I love everything about it. I really enjoyed the part where I could be really greedy and risk it all for the final moment. Well done!
frompdx
06. May 2021 · 01:15 UTC
I really like the music and the scrolling background is a nice touch.
unplugred
11. May 2021 · 07:48 UTC
difficult but extremely fun game! it was very cute and i enjoyed it a lot
pancelor
18. May 2021 · 01:28 UTC
really cute! love that drinking animation. I thought it was a bit too punishing; maybe a checkpoint at the beginning of each room would have been nice? But I see you've already made some changes to help with that. nice work; love to see more pico-8!