Beyond the Canyon by Dante2001

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made by Dante2001 for Ludum Dare 48 (JAM)

ld48-2.png A walking simulator of sorts. It tells a story. This game is heavy on the heart but uplifting. Hope you enjoy it!

Most of the music is by Punch Deck

Ratings

Overall 260th 3.941⭐ 36🧑‍⚖️
Fun 724th 3.47⭐ 35🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 310th 3.779⭐ 36🧑‍⚖️
Theme 272th 4.103⭐ 36🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 1025th 3.591⭐ 35🧑‍⚖️
Mood 57th 4.412⭐ 36🧑‍⚖️
Given 53🗳️ 48🗨️

Feedback

smt
26. Apr 2021 · 03:07 UTC
love the vibe of this and it's super unique with a great ambience to it, awesome
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 03:15 UTC
@smt thanks! was it hard to understand or was it just right?
smt
26. Apr 2021 · 03:29 UTC
I think it was just right, it makes sense as you play for sure
Choppers
26. Apr 2021 · 03:57 UTC
Mood was amazing, I like that there's message you're trying to convey.
Evileptic
26. Apr 2021 · 04:14 UTC
Good mood. I like such projects with a pronounced narrative (like "The Beginner's Guide"). Nice work.
LitmusZest
26. Apr 2021 · 04:17 UTC
Really neat experience! Loved the music and mood and it was really cool that you tried to convey a message.
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 12:05 UTC
@evileptic thanks! being compared to that game is the highest praise!
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 12:05 UTC
@litmuszest thanks a lot for playing :D
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 12:06 UTC
@choppers thanks a lot for playing! glad you liked it!
IAAndrei
26. Apr 2021 · 21:04 UTC
Oh my god, I loved the mood and the message that you sent with this game, nearly sent me to tears. Full 5 star rating!
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 21:20 UTC
@iaandrei :D thanks for playing it!! glad you liked it!!
namrog84
26. Apr 2021 · 21:23 UTC
Oh heck yeah, the driving, story, music, well put together! And I got more invested in story as time went on!
Wuppos
26. Apr 2021 · 21:26 UTC
I really liked the story of this game! It stayed a bit vague, but I think it will resonate with a lot more people becuase of that. The story reminded me a bit of a game called 'the first tree', do you know it? I can recommend it if you like to play these kinds of games yourself :)
I also really liked that you aimed your game specifically towards this community of game developers near the end :D
Thank you for making this! Great job!
🎤 Dante2001
26. Apr 2021 · 21:30 UTC
@namrog84 @wuppos Thanks guys for playing it! Glad you liked it :D
I think I have the first tree on my wishlist. I'm a sucker for walking simulators and a good story. It'll be my next purchase then :D
ZachsButt
26. Apr 2021 · 23:11 UTC
That was deep
cninja_
27. Apr 2021 · 00:27 UTC
wow, that was definitely something. To be honest I didn't expected to play something like that. And as far as I'm not really a fan of walking simulators I can say that it got my attention, maybe because of how emotional it was. Anyway great job!
philipprapp95
27. Apr 2021 · 01:10 UTC
Cool Idea and graphics. The Story was pretty deep (as well as the levellayout haha). Only thing that threw me out of the story was the car driving. But good job :)
fermingimpel
27. Apr 2021 · 03:51 UTC
Perfect
Alina Baybulatova
27. Apr 2021 · 12:41 UTC
Really good game! Cool atmosphere and mood)
Eugenik
27. Apr 2021 · 19:45 UTC
Ok, this was to most funny game of this jam! 10/10.
LDJam user 236545
27. Apr 2021 · 22:22 UTC
Wow, I see a lot of games that try to be "deep" that end up failing and being cringey, so I'm always a bit wary when I see one. This is **not** one of those games. You did a phenomenal job at making the gameplay match the story. And the mood was well done.

Since we're strangers on the internet, I'm not sure if this story was personal to you or not, but nonetheless it was profound. I'm sure it'll hit people differently depending on their experiences, but I think you also kept the dialogue heavy on feeling and light on specifics, so I hope people are able to insert themselves into the story.

Very well done!
🎤 Dante2001
27. Apr 2021 · 22:38 UTC
@andrewkennedy I think that's the highest praise I've ever received on my writing. Thanks A LOT! I was really doubting if the narrative was understandable or maybe too lacking or vague. The story was a bit personal. We're not internet strangers, we're Ludum Dare brothers! :D
Thanks a lot again!!
nyanpierre
27. Apr 2021 · 23:39 UTC
love the vibe
karlipoppins
28. Apr 2021 · 03:50 UTC
awesome story game, really heavy on several critical themes and I am sure it will resonate with a few folks that will play your game. Great mood, beautiful music and very smoothing gameplay that leans right into the story. Awesome job
Enrique Romero
28. Apr 2021 · 04:17 UTC
I think this was a fantastic way to portray the "deeper and deeper" theme, its memorable and thought provoking in a way that allows any player to understand its concpet and message. Great work!
AidanMarkham
28. Apr 2021 · 17:30 UTC
Really nice atmosphere here, with a deep story that's clearly conveyed. Great work!
Szkocka
28. Apr 2021 · 17:31 UTC
Okay, story is, I finished work, got home, drink a bottle of wine and decided to play some games and stumbled upon this masterpiece. Great work with graphics and driving model. There is no need to mention the mood and theme relevancy, everybody who played knows it is at least 11/10 : D
Zeilanda
28. Apr 2021 · 19:10 UTC
Really cool and atmoshere game! Just little crying... Great work, like story, like audio and video! Thank you for this game.
🎤 Dante2001
28. Apr 2021 · 19:21 UTC
@nyanpierre Thanks!!

@karlipoppins Thank you! I had a good time picking the right music!!

@enrique-romero Thanks a lot!! Glad you liked it!

@aidanmarkham Thank you for playing. Happy to know you liked the story :D

@szkocka Thanks for your kind words!! Reviews like yours make gamedev extremely enjoyable!
🎤 Dante2001
28. Apr 2021 · 19:28 UTC
@zeilanda Glad you liked it!!! Thanks a lot for playing :D
Globulous
28. Apr 2021 · 22:50 UTC
like said @cninja : "that was definitely something. To be honest I didn’t expected to play something like that."
thats exactly what i think about your game. He is awesome. Great job =)
🎤 Dante2001
29. Apr 2021 · 00:02 UTC
@globulous Thanks!!! Glad you liked it :D
Hempuli
29. Apr 2021 · 02:30 UTC
What a very ambitious game! You aimed to tackle some very heavy topics via the theme. I like how the "gamified" approach was involved in the story at the end. Nice work!
StrangerYann
30. Apr 2021 · 03:13 UTC
Very interesting
Why did you disable rating on the music? It works very well!
I'm always hoping Ill see driving games in game jams - they're rather rare in my experience - very interesting cause here you totally reappripriated it
and the dialogue ain't that well integrated into it - but the whole thing works
and it deals with a very important topic to you

respect, man
fresh, insightful
Thanks for making this,
I enjoyed playing it :)

So I really like your game and I'm streaming Ludum Dare 48 games on saturday with my friend Teauorent on his Twitch channel - https://www.twitch.tv/teauorent - Saturday May 1st 4PM CET
First of all - that cool with you? This may redirect some traffic to your page for more people to try your LD48 game :smile:
If you'd like, please e-mails us anecdotes and sneak peeks of your creative process (photos, screenshots, beta/WIP asset renders, mood boards, concept Art, etc.) so we can present them alongside and illustrate your LD48 adventure to our audience :slight_smile:
Here's our e-mail to send all that good stuff to --> TeamChooChoo.GameJams@gmail.com [we will confirm receiving your e-mail(s) upon reception]
The show will be in french but I'm bilingual so you can totally submit in english, we'll take care of the rest :slight_smile:

Have a great day, I hope to hear from you soon - thanks for that great moment I spent testing your little nugget of a game, and see you in the chat on saturday I hope :heart: :smile:
🎤 Dante2001
30. Apr 2021 · 13:33 UTC
@strangeryann Hi StrangerYann! Sadly I didn't make the music so I didn't think it was fair to qualify for it. I'd be totally cool with you streaming my game! I'll check if i have any content to send. Thanks a lot for playing :D
ChuChuGeralt
02. May 2021 · 11:13 UTC
Thanks for making me sad! I really like the story arc and battling with the idea of regret. It´s a nice piece of art for a three day project! Did enjoy it!
Jonas Michael
05. May 2021 · 17:25 UTC
Very beautiful game. I love the mood of this game. Combining a very sad story with beautiful music made this game feel very... depressing?

The only thing that I want to criticise is the lack of polishing (regarding graphics) in the last sections. I guess, due to the scope of this game, there simply is no time left at the end to polish these parts of the game.

Overall, still, very well done!
LDJam user 235694
05. May 2021 · 17:42 UTC
Very mood and atmospheric game. Good job