Deeper Sleeper by Seraphyi

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made by Seraphyi for Ludum Dare 48 (JAM)

Welcome to Deeper Sleeper. Even though I finished it late :\ I wanted to publish it nevertheless. You control Mie and you have to feed her when she wakes up from her long sleeps and make sure she doesn't remember the bad times. Until... well you'll have to find out. There are 2 ending in the game. Deeper Sleeper .png

I hope no bugs managed to sneak in.

Update 1

-Changed lighting;

-Added a background sound;

-Added WebGL version.

Ratings

Overall 1129th 3.395⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1733th 2.611⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 522th 3.556⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Theme 752th 3.763⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 878th 3.711⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Mood 108th 4.263⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Given 50🗳️ 4🗨️

Feedback

LDJam user 242787
27. Apr 2021 · 06:09 UTC
Interesting mechanic, but the objective was unclear.
SageWare
27. Apr 2021 · 06:12 UTC
Loved the graphics and overall feel of the game. I had trouble understanding what to do at times. The game over screen is really sad.
kr0s
27. Apr 2021 · 06:16 UTC
I got two different endings in this game, and the deterioration of Mie's mind makes the game creepy. Makes me wonder what happened at the river and why pens are bad.
Skye S
27. Apr 2021 · 06:32 UTC
The whole mental health / trauma angle is a super interesting take on the theme!
The graphics, while simplistic, are perfect for the vibe you seem to be going for. Well done!
My only gripe is that it took me a while to figure out what to remember and what not to (though perhaps that's the very point).
Ambear
27. Apr 2021 · 06:43 UTC
Like commend above, mood is great
But needs some explanation
And endings looks like similar, but maybe they're not
Graphics style is nice, I would like to recommend to work with more lightning settings, to make game be more moodish""
Btw great job!
🎤 Seraphyi
27. Apr 2021 · 07:26 UTC
@matterlinx Guess I was too vague. You have to feed Mie to progress in the game. To do that, you have to go to the door, and she will get food, that you eat at the desk. After that she goes to sleep again.
@ambear Thanks! I'll try tinkering with the lightning and maybe add an hdri.
jasontherand
28. Apr 2021 · 13:11 UTC
Very creepy! It draws you in with forbidden knowledge. I feel like I need to know what happened to her now. Nice job setting the scene so well!
KJG
30. Apr 2021 · 21:39 UTC
I like it :)
Sestren
06. May 2021 · 12:15 UTC
I'm impressed at how sinister a simple color change can make a word. The difference between seeing a blue word versus a red word made a simple thing like 'laugh' or 'park' have a very different feel to it. Excellent mood on this one.
Chillen
07. May 2021 · 20:38 UTC
Aside from the unclear objective, I think the mechanics worked well for the metaphor! The "Remember" felt a bit out of place, as it was unclear if there was any reason to/to avoid remembering, unless you actively *decide* to remember the bad things, but I may not have tinkered enough. Either way, I like the implicit and ambiguous storytelling that's presented by listing some things as good/bad memories, and how much that could be fleshed out in some worldbuilding as a long-term project. Part of my thesis research had me looking into game mechanics that promote motifs and indirect storytelling, and I really like the memories as an avenue for letting the player build the story in their own heads!
VixenMink
08. May 2021 · 01:17 UTC
Definitely worried about Mie. Let us all not be like her and her deep issues with sleeping pills.

Very dark take on the theme and the music resembles this twisted concept. You are enough :)