Comatoast by crow_seeds

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made by crow_seeds for Ludum Dare 48 (JAM)

Who could've known that smelling burnt toast when you're having a stroke means your metaphysical toaster's broken? Travel deeper and deeper into your own subconscious until you reach the prized toaster at the center and wake yourself up from your coma. Look out for the manifestations guarding your mind, though- one wrong move, and you're toast!

Made over the weekend with some non-programmer friends. We spent our entire budget on the horse sprite. First time making a 2D platformer. All audio, visual, and programming elements (Except the Comic Sans font in the intro) created by us.

Credits: * Khoi (@crow-seeds) - Programming, Room Design * @la-bread - Music, Tile/Background/Character Art, Replacement Horse * Jay - Enemy Art, Horse Voice, Tile/Background Art * @mooobster - Various Screams and Sniffs, Character Art * Raghu - "Narrator", Tile Art * Max - Item Art * Trevor - Tile Art * Faaiz - Legal Consultant

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(Update 4/27/2021) Fixed a couple of bugs in version 1.0.1. These include: * Fixed items not working as intended (Balloon, Vegemite, Eggs) * Fixed bug where the horse's discussion about the human condition doesn't trigger * Fixed bug where certain rooms don't appear * Adjusted the layout of certain levels to prevent spawn killing * Slightly altered levels to eliminate difficulty spikes * Fixed sound effects system not working as intended * Fixed room generation bugs caused by going out of bounds

(Update 4/29/2021) Another update with some slight changes. The game is also now available on itch.io to play in browser! * Fixed room skips * Alternate ending where you kill Chester * Made it so you can't hurt enemies through walls * Syringe now has sound effects

(Update 4/30/2021) Last update, I swear! * Enemies now don't do damage when in their dying animation * Rooms now load if your computer's language is something other than English * Fixed bug where Chester continues to talk even though you've left his room * Fixed bug where you can climb up walls by spamming the jump button * After clearing a room of enemies, enemies won't spawn again in that room * Game now properly letterboxes when playing at an aspect ratio that is not 16:9 * Knife damages enemies on stay in addition to hitbox enter * Fixed hitbox of breakable blocks * Altered a room in Level 3 that softlocked the game in certain situations

(Update 5/1/2021) ffs * Syringes now cause damage * Fixed Chester's voice getting cut off when you kill him

Ratings

Overall 860th 3.547⭐ 34🧑‍⚖️
Fun 460th 3.656⭐ 34🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 866th 3.258⭐ 35🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1410th 3.226⭐ 33🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 1032th 3.588⭐ 36🧑‍⚖️
Audio 800th 3.339⭐ 33🧑‍⚖️
Humor 64th 4.172⭐ 34🧑‍⚖️
Mood 1232th 3.258⭐ 35🧑‍⚖️
Given 40🗳️ 56🗨️

Feedback

Leginar
27. Apr 2021 · 02:48 UTC
This is a very funny game, but it is also very difficult. I was only able to make it to the third area a handful of times. It is great that so many of the screens are set up like puzzles, and it was fun learning how to get through them without taking damage. There are a few that are a bit mean though (I'm thinking of that screen in the second area with the tiny spikes especially)

I had a lot of fun playing this, although since the later stages are so difficult, it would have been nice if there was more variety in the early dialogue. I feel like I will be hearing some of those jokes in my dreams tonight due to how many times I heard them.

The horse sprite looks great.
PeculiarCarrot
27. Apr 2021 · 03:11 UTC
This gave me and my friend a good laugh, it's goofy and the "Travel deeper and deeper into your own subconscious until you reach the prized toaster" line kills me. The gameplay is fun and the whole game feels like a fever dream sometimes, which isn't a bad thing :)
LDJam user 0
27. Apr 2021 · 03:51 UTC
Oh me, oh my! This game sure tickled my funny bone! Golly gee whillikers, this game is a HOOT!
LDJam user 0
27. Apr 2021 · 03:52 UTC
Oh me, oh my! This game sure tickled my funny bone! Golly gee whillikers, this game is a HOOT!
Cornflowerblue
27. Apr 2021 · 05:07 UTC
Cute, weird game! I like the bizarre vibe and the presentation.
SmallChungus
27. Apr 2021 · 07:04 UTC
TL;DR

This game is the Super Mario 64 of 2D Platformers. Comatoast is SO, so much more than the sum of its parts.

Where do I begin? This is the best game I have ever played. Please play before reading further.

The one-liners that play throughout are just as densely packed and enjoyable as Gex, but they are self-contained, and therefore require no pop-culture knowledge and they will not age as poorly. The platforming in this game is absolutely stellar. If you watch videos or see screenshots, you might say "This is a BABY game" but it is NOT. Right from the get-go, the levels are out to get you. But where some games are "cheaply" difficult, relying on invisible blocks and abruptly jerking spikes, *Comatoast* lays it all out in front of you. The obstacles are right there, you have plenty of time to plan out your movements and your path, but executing is another beast entirely.

The way you approach enemies is seamlessly sewn into this landscape. The rooms don't feel like bare platforms with enemy stickers randomly scattered about. Each enemy is painstakingly drawn, attacking in patterns that you must learn and integrate to inform your movement. The soundtrack absolutely nailed it, there is a palpable difference between the dreamy earlier stages and the nightmarish later stages where platforms pixelate and disappear, subverting the expectations of level design and mechanics that the player builds over the first two levels. This is remarkable, in a game that lasts only 5 minutes, there are two strikingly different aesthetics but both are a joy to play.

I only have one complaint: Why are there not 10 of these?
James Kusardi
27. Apr 2021 · 21:20 UTC
i can definitely see how this would hit a spot for some people's sense of humors, but unfortunately the humor wasn't for me. i did find the platforming somewhat interesting and pretty enjoyable, even if it felt quite difficult at times!
CandleBird
28. Apr 2021 · 02:30 UTC
This game cured my fear of horses and stopped me from balding.
CZ46
28. Apr 2021 · 07:23 UTC
cool horse 10/10
personguydudeman
28. Apr 2021 · 16:25 UTC
Who woumnd've thumnk my sister and her friends would be in this game jam, and make a game so good
pedrohph
29. Apr 2021 · 03:11 UTC
The game looks super fun, but unfortunately I can't pass the first area, the toast fall down and the "Game Over screen" appears. I tried a little but can't understand how don't die there :(
LDJam user 245646
29. Apr 2021 · 04:29 UTC
@pedrohph Sorry to hear that! Was the game lagging by any chance? Do you know what the level looked like when you kept falling to your death? Trying to fix this problem ASAP.
pedrohph
29. Apr 2021 · 04:46 UTC
Immediately after the opening screen. It's so fast.
Here's the screenshot.

![Screenshot.png](///raw/6b3/e2/z/417d8.png)
Fenderbate
29. Apr 2021 · 09:24 UTC
I really like the looks and feels of the game, but the voiceover got a bit annoying for my taste 😅
WetBurritoSupreme
29. Apr 2021 · 18:14 UTC
Horse was well worth the money
Wintergatn
30. Apr 2021 · 04:06 UTC
I like that you embraced the "drawn in microsoft paint" style hahah. Definitely a difficult game, but of course there's a market for infuriating funny games :)
jk5000
30. Apr 2021 · 14:06 UTC
It looked fun, but I had the same issue as pedrohph.
LDJam user 245646
30. Apr 2021 · 17:33 UTC
@jk5000 Can I get some info on what platform your running the game on? Trying to fix this bug but I can’t seem to replicate it.
jk5000
30. Apr 2021 · 18:09 UTC
Windows 10
LDJam user 245646
30. Apr 2021 · 20:02 UTC
@jk5000 Hmmm, can you try playing on the browser version to see if it still causes the bug?
jk5000
30. Apr 2021 · 20:10 UTC
The game work in the browser version. The game was funny, but also really difficult.
LDJam user 245646
30. Apr 2021 · 20:23 UTC
@jk5000 @pedrohph I think I figured the bug out! Do your computers happen to be running in a language other than English? I had accidentally encoded the file that stores all the room information in English instead of the universal encoding. Should be fixed in the next version! Let me know if this isn’t the case.
jk5000
30. Apr 2021 · 20:32 UTC
My language is not set to English. When you have fixed the problem, you can write back again, and I will test it for you.
pedrohph
30. Apr 2021 · 21:24 UTC
@crow-seeds OH! My computer is running in Portuguese. Let me know when you fix it! I'll love to play it :D
LDJam user 245646
01. May 2021 · 00:01 UTC
@jk5000 @pedrohph New version is up, should be fixed! Sorry about that!
LDJam user 234769
01. May 2021 · 00:39 UTC
Cool cool cool.
STROKE OF LUCK i will never get this joke out of my head.
Good game, too bad I couldn't leave the horse room every time I got into it, because... where do I begin.. the sprite was just mesmerizing, you know.
I was really impressed by how many rooms there were, it made it fun to retry and see what would happen. Might come back to it, and try to finally beat those damned to-do lists.
JakobTheQuizGuy
01. May 2021 · 00:44 UTC
Fun game, I love the jumping and landing animation! The enemies further down have really cool designs as well.
7Seven Studios
01. May 2021 · 00:48 UTC
Nice concept and art! The voice acting was very funny :smiley:
fae.exe
01. May 2021 · 01:45 UTC
I absolutely loved the voice acting and the writing. Great job with the room design, and the extremely distinctive aesthetic, this game oozes personality!

The horse was, of course, wonderful.

I'll never get out of my head the "maybe I should stop complaining about my stroke, there are starving children in the world", and the "stroke of luck". This is both a blessing and a curse.

Thank you for this scintillating, slightly burnt gift you bestowed unto this sinful world.
jk5000
01. May 2021 · 06:05 UTC
The game works fine on my computer now.
Incredible Potato Kids
02. May 2021 · 18:31 UTC
That was a GOLDEN experience. Thank you for making this game xD. Loved the humor and the absurdity of it.. that horse..
Big round of applause for you, I'm going to remember this one for sure!!!!
Tygrak
05. May 2021 · 08:16 UTC
Oh my god that was actually amazing! It was difficult, but in a good way, I just had to keep on trying until I beat the game! All the animations are great, the music was nice, the voice over was amazing and really fun, it's all gravy! The combat using was pretty cool too, a lot of distinct enemies with different attack patterns. In the end I ran away from all the enemies to make things easier, but that still required knowing what the enemies do to succeed - the eye thingys at the end especially gave me a lot of trouble before I figured them out. The horse was of course the best and well worth the budget :). Amazing job - I'd play more of this if it was made into a full post-jam game. I can see this game placing very well~ :)!
LeYaoTang
06. May 2021 · 00:27 UTC
The great LD48 diamond! Deeply fun. The voices are the great ludo moto here. I was so challenged by the exam (F). The game designer is a genius.
wizard sino
06. May 2021 · 19:38 UTC
this game is far harder than a game about toast has any right to be. it's fun, but becomes more tedious each time i die. not terrible.
zoarfy
10. May 2021 · 22:14 UTC
My god this was incredible. I gave you 5s across the board, you deserve it. This is seriously brilliant. I love the non-stop VO, I love the graphical style, I loved the game. More more more from this dev please.
Euler Moises
13. May 2021 · 02:08 UTC
Interesting game! A little crazy, but it has its charm. The random screens give a greater challenge to the player and the art, almost childlike, gives a special touch to the whole. Some colliders need to be checked.
The best, for me, in the whole game is the bread with bone. It never crossed my mind that loaf of bread had bone.

Congratulations!
Juanv
15. May 2021 · 17:10 UTC
This game is awesome! I found it really funny and enjoyable, it's really well made. However, I also found difficult fighting the enemies and sometimes idk why the player went automatically to the right. Overrall is really good.
La bread
16. May 2021 · 20:22 UTC
@juanv when you go automatically right, is this after you attack Chester? If so, jumping automatically fixes it.
LDJam user 222495
17. May 2021 · 00:11 UTC
Goodness that was weird



:)