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Dark Entries by MechaTofuPirate

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made by MechaTofuPirate for LD33 (JAM)
Dark Entries is Twine game about a woman who has just recently been turned into a vampire and is just trying to figure out how to survive during one night in 1986. This is both my first Ludum Dare game and my first Twine game.
Web http://mecha-tofu-pirate.itch.io/dark-entries
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-33/?action=preview&uid=55204

Ratings

Coolness 74% 3
Overall(Jam) 2.89 812
Fun(Jam) 2.62 850
Humor(Jam) 2.32 755
Mood(Jam) 3.32 381
Theme(Jam) 3.59 418

Feedback

Mathstr0
24. Aug 2015 · 02:46 UTC
Great game!
ziege
24. Aug 2015 · 20:44 UTC
Well written. I enjoyed it quite a bit.
vividhelix
24. Aug 2015 · 21:51 UTC
I liked the "toy with him" part, fits very well with the theme!
LandoSystems
25. Aug 2015 · 01:37 UTC
Great Game. I enjoyed seeing what was going to come next.

I did get into a stint where I didn't have any choices, other than that, great game.
van noctar
25. Aug 2015 · 02:13 UTC
Why not, the logic good working.

You could put images with the text. :)
A_K_
25. Aug 2015 · 02:19 UTC
Didn't get it, sorry
Fanatrick
25. Aug 2015 · 02:27 UTC
Very good for the ratings, I've played through the whole thing even though it looks much more suited for the female public. The part where you mentioned the club was "bitchin'" got a kick out of me :)
Josh H
25. Aug 2015 · 02:28 UTC
Very disturbing! It was a well written story. Good job.
defacid
25. Aug 2015 · 05:50 UTC
This excellently captured the theme, and the story was solid, but I wish that there was more GAME to it. Each of the decisions were essentially one of two extremes to choose from and I would have liked to feel like I had more options and more control.
Inateno
25. Aug 2015 · 09:58 UTC
Loved it, got my attention from the beginning to the end :)
BaseCase
25. Aug 2015 · 14:50 UTC
I liked it! I don't play a lot of Twine games so I'm not sure what the field overall is like, but this had some nice moments. Good humor and the chase scene was exciting too :)
lkpridgeon
26. Aug 2015 · 00:38 UTC
A nice game/interactive novel with great writing.
Crowbeak
26. Aug 2015 · 05:54 UTC
Well written.
Ershany
27. Aug 2015 · 01:46 UTC
This game gave off a really good mood :) Writing is good!
echokain
27. Aug 2015 · 17:21 UTC
Really well written, good job!
HotBoxGames
31. Aug 2015 · 00:29 UTC
Very well written! Extremely immersive & quite dark! Would be nice to see some branched endings or further story - this is really great for your first Twine game!
mubox
31. Aug 2015 · 02:07 UTC
Very nice text. ^^
BlackQuiltro
06. Sep 2015 · 13:51 UTC
Very well writen and captures the theme well. For me it needed more options and branching to make it more fun. It was too linear.