Normal Human by Profugo Barbatus

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made by Profugo Barbatus for Ludum Dare 49 (JAM)

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Can you and your Unstable Alien mind manage to pass as a normal human, and discover the secrets in their halls of learning?

We went a bit off the road with the Theme here, but we're super happy with the end product. We both crunched hard to get to where we got, and despite some roughness in the latter half of content, we're really proud of what was done. Hopefully you enjoy it as well!

Ratings

Overall 385th 3.786⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Fun 631th 3.524⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 252th 3.786⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Theme 698th 3.595⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 108th 4.429⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Audio 671th 3.25⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Humor 107th 4.053⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Mood 166th 4.025⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Given 41🗳️ 11🗨️

Feedback

Pandore
04. Oct 2021 · 23:07 UTC
Guys, your characters are so cute... I just melted :')
The core concept is nice and actualy pretty hard ^^' Thanks for making and sharing this game !
stellarLuminant
05. Oct 2021 · 01:40 UTC
shouting "INVASION INVASION INVASION" at the top of my lungs does not get the local authorities involved, quite unfortunate.

i love the concept- it's silly and unstable which pairs with the adorable art style. i also really appreciate the easy mode added in, it's a blessing for those who want to seek out the additional content.

as for some critical feedback, i'd love if the word hitboxes were a bit more... coherent, and I feel like most of the interactions boil down to whether I get the intended phrase exactly correct or not. I feel like "Need Water" and "I Need Water" should communicate the same context... right? I would also really like to see extra interactions for actually using some of the no-no words like "I Eat Humans". That's all probably extra content work that might have been too much for the jam.
MalusKhan
05. Oct 2021 · 09:59 UTC
Well done on the concept, the story and the arts / sound ... It's maybe a bit repetitive but the main mechanic is a good idea ! :)
Jupiter_Hadley
05. Oct 2021 · 10:53 UTC
Love the graphics! I included it in my Ludum Dare 49 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :) https://youtu.be/IO7T3gBWVBc
huckleberryjen
11. Oct 2021 · 01:58 UTC
It's a very cute game c: The art and music are very quaint, and it's a fantastic concept! However, a few times, a word would show up that I didn't drag in, which was confusing and a little frustrating to me.
🎤 Profugo Barbatus
11. Oct 2021 · 02:04 UTC
@huckleberryjen Glad you tried it out! I'll have to see if the tutorial can be more clear about that mechanic - If the timer bar runs down to zero before you make a choice, a random word gets added. I know it says it, but its not really something the tutorial actively shows off, since it has an extended timer on it.
YouK
11. Oct 2021 · 02:46 UTC
Very cute arts and innovational concept. I appreciate that you made a easy mode. I think font size can be a little bigger, The current font size is sometimes too small to read.
JPGFG
11. Oct 2021 · 02:57 UTC
cute art styles and a cool concept. Great job!
WolfMeryX
11. Oct 2021 · 03:54 UTC
This is a really good entry. Not something I was expecting, but it was super fun! I loved the concept and how the gameplay was like, along with it fitting with the theme of unstable as well. The music was fitting for it too and even messing up made it fun still.
Good idea! And very nice art :)
LeYamez
11. Oct 2021 · 04:53 UTC
So cute! haha was nice looking at all the art
David Brož
11. Oct 2021 · 15:08 UTC
This one is a cute one.
C0nt
11. Oct 2021 · 16:41 UTC
What a cute game! And polished as well. It was a bit hard for me to play, but perhaps I'm bad. Sometimes the word you needed would only come by once. Other times it went by too fast and was too small to be really clickable.
Inokentii_Best
12. Oct 2021 · 19:00 UTC
Fun game) Catching words is really fun!) Very cute art)
VladLawrence
12. Oct 2021 · 19:11 UTC
Great idea, great music, great jokes, great drawings) It was very funny, i had a lot of laugh trying to catch right words:3
bloodycoin
12. Oct 2021 · 22:01 UTC
Very well done. Great mash of theme, art and backing gameplay. Characters are cute and have a character. Was pleasantly surprised by word dragging mechanics. Both how challenging it is and how well it fits into the theme. :D
parkuhrmd
13. Oct 2021 · 20:31 UTC
This is a great game of prcedural humour. I was laughing at every phrase that I mangled. The artwork was on point as well. Would love to see more of this! Great job!

I have to agree though that the words were way too small to hit them cosistently. Maybe putting some boxes around the words would make it easier to hit them? Could also have been a resolution issue with Unity.

Edit: The phrase "I loathe SPYING" has now been accepted in our friend group's joke canon.
LDJam user 263516
13. Oct 2021 · 21:02 UTC
This is a really cute concept that I wasn't prepared for :) The art and gameplay work well for this jam, and I like how you subverted the "mental instability" theme lots of people are using by making it about a robot instead. One thing I'd change is to restrict only certain keypresses from advancing the text, as I accidentally skipped some lines :P
mistercheezymoon
14. Oct 2021 · 08:23 UTC
I'd like to begin by saying that the art style and the premise give this game a lot of charm from the outset. not only that, but this is a pretty unique take on dialogue for games in general! Something well worth patting yourself on the back for, I think. Naturally borking your phrases gets a few good laughs out of me.