Lost In Time by Westmave

Our Timeline is out of control. The Past has been changed. The Present is declining. The Future is uncertain.
Step into the consciousness of historical persons. Persuade them to follow their fate to stabilize our Timeline
| Link | https://marvinwest.itch.io/lost-in-time |
| Link | https://marvinwest.itch.io/lost-in-time |
| Link | https://marvinwest.itch.io/lost-in-time |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/49/lost-in-time |
Ratings
| Overall | 902th | 3.409⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 745th | 3.424⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 451th | 3.591⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 521th | 3.788⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 1209th | 2.939⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 361th | 3.563⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 927th | 3.242⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 30🗳️ | 59🗨️ |
As for constructive feedback - I think I've seen this problem in pretty much all LD games with this type of text interface - the typing is annoyingly slow and I'd love to have a way to speed it up; also some audio track would be lovely!
Also, nice to see a narrative-based game on LD - we made one as well, not too many of those around :)
As someone else said, I wish the text was faster.
I don't have to say much to improve much, but I can't stop thinking of a whole story that revolves around a whole drama in the perspectives of different people that YOU HAVE to make happen or else the timeline will end up unstable! Who knows that could be a really interesting take on the same concept, but it's not tied to history. Definitely an avenue to pursue if you want to make this a full game.