super short but fun

Kinda procrastinating working hehe.. But great game! Funny dialogs and a few routes to go down. I especialy liked the "Power of friendship" one, you could even say friend SHIP!

Cute :)

Nicely done! Cool to see s twine entry :smiley:

Book game. i remember paper book with game

Well done!

simple but effective. some funny dialogues made me giggle.

Fun writing, well done.

Very cute. Fun idea, kept short and sweet. ♥

Short and humorous

Why power of friendship dont help?(

Cool idea. Very fun to read through!

short and sweet 10/10

Nice and simple, I enjoyed the funny dialogue, too! Some sound effects would have been the icing on the cake!

Simple and had a solid vibe. Although it might have been nice to add some audio of sounds of the sea. Great work, and be proud of completing a game in one weekend! Cheers!

Always cool to see Twine games. This is a great one. Really good writing: simple, to the point, funny and, surprisingly, packs a bit of pathos as well. Like, I expected this to just be a gag game, but it's actually a nice little tone piece. The last page/lines really put a sweet, melancholy bow on it.

A short but very complete story! The options can be funny at times, and the system of being able to go back and make new choices is pretty cool for a JAM game. Congratulations!

Power of friendship should keep ship floating, no? eahhahahahahahah. Great game!!!!

Nice, kinda funny, pretty cool overall

Short but fun. Very cool the different dialogues.

Humor is on point!

Good job

Some really funny stuff here! Made sure and followed every path!

I liked the many dialogue options, found it really funny haha. I love it LOL. I lost it at the balanced diet part and explored every dialogue option. A short but great entry nonetheless!

Simple yet fun ~ Nice entry !

oh that was quick ... =( so sad I only have abandon ship now

Love it!

Nice game! Didn't understand the return button in the beginning, needed to abandon the ship eventually :)

I am surprised to see a game made with twine!
the story was super entertaining :3 Great Job!!

This was great! It fitted the theme absolutely perfectly and I loved it, haha. It was really funny, and surprisingly engaging. The return button was also really kind of you :) I used it to explore all possibilities, which was a lot of fun :D

Nice job! This game has a good sense of humour and doesn't outstay its welcome.

It was really challenging and fun to play. Loved the idea of showing you last path. Awesome job.


The first mate is a hater.

In all seriousness, this is a short, but fun experience. The dialogue options are all charming and tend to have something funny in them. Above all, it leaves before it starts to get grating or monotonous.

Nice job.

Great writing, really thankful for the back button. Very reminiscent of keeping your fingers on the previos page of a choose your own adventure book. Would have loved more content.

A well executed text-based story game with funny dialogue options and different routes to explore. Good entry!

Very short but fun experience! Really well executed!

It is always refreshing to see text based games in jams. They are an artform of their own.

I liked the writing on this one and it was also pleasant to see that you used some effects for the text. Those really help to set the mood in these types of games.

The cover art is gorgeous by the way! I wish there was more of it in the game too (between the text parts possibly).

Well done.

Absolutely tragic that my affirmations didn't stop the ship from sinking :\ I always love your entries, great sense of humor.

Short but sweet :)

congrats

Short but fun, well written and funny, great job!

Pretty funny. I love seeing narrative games in LD. Well done on finishing.

Simple and nice :)

Short and sweet, and excessively funny writing. The comedy in the responses was fantastic, and I do truly wish the pirates had managed to patch the hole with the power of friendship. Great job! Love a good text adventure

Nice and simple. Big dub imo

Funny and simple! :thumbsup:

Neat story.

As advertised it was a 2 minute adventure! Well done and I appreciate that it is playable in browser!

Cute little game! Quite funny dialogue. I remember your last entry, love your sense of humour! It's always nice to see some different experience at LD.

Also, did you make the cover art? Would love to see a game in that style if so, it's lovely.

Nice work!

"That was exactly the type of health and safety measure that you objected to, and which drove you to piracy." Hah! Nice social commentary. B-)

I enjoyed the humor. It was a quick game, and I found I explored each branch too soon, but I enjoyed it all the same.

Nice game

Really enjoyable and funny writing, and good social commentary. Packed more into 2 minutes than most games.

I was waiting for a visual novel, due to the image in the description. Nevertheless, I had so much fun playing the game, I liked its humour. Nice job!