Fall Girl by civmaniac

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made by civmaniac for Ludum Dare 51 (JAM)

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Every 10 seconds a skyscraper window washer falls to his death - The Onion

As this 'totally serious' and 'completely correct' study (quoted above) shows, being a window washer is a very dangerous profession. You balance on the edge, see things better left unseen, witness friends try and fail to fly. And every 10 seconds, you are in great danger of being the one that will fall to her death. But hey, that’s the job and someone has to do it.

Gameplay

You are a window washer. So go wash some windows! When in doubt, jump on things. Try not to fall too much!

Keybindings

  • Keyboard: AD or Arrow Keys to walk, Space or Arrow Up to jump, E to wash
  • Controller: L Thumb or D-pad to walk, A to jump, B to wash

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Credits

Everything made from scratch for the jam by the two of us, except for the music track.

Music: “Psychic City (Voodoo City) (Instrumental)” by Yacht under Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International (CC BY-NC-ND 4.0) license. Check out Yacht here.

Ratings

Overall 122th 4.013⭐ 82🧑‍⚖️
Fun 115th 4⭐ 82🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 362th 3.582⭐ 81🧑‍⚖️
Theme 845th 3.381⭐ 82🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 334th 3.975⭐ 82🧑‍⚖️
Humor 61th 4.114⭐ 81🧑‍⚖️
Mood 340th 3.709⭐ 81🧑‍⚖️
Given 109🗳️ 213🗨️

Feedback

Trexxak
04. Oct 2022 · 00:27 UTC
So glad you guys are back!
Good night for now, though! :smile:
Joshua Denk
04. Oct 2022 · 05:54 UTC
Fun and funny game. One thing that could be improved is the platforming. Jumps felt too short for their height. Otherwise a great and charming game.
LadyMeow
04. Oct 2022 · 14:56 UTC
Very cool game!
ChillerTyp
04. Oct 2022 · 14:59 UTC
Haha, this is funny. Could be some mobile game. ^^
Finn Pickart
04. Oct 2022 · 15:00 UTC
Good game, I liked the idea of washing windows and having to dodge all these different things.
But I didn't really understand the theme of every 10 seconds.
I thought maybe the platform moves every 10 seconds or you have to dodge something every 10 seconds, but when I counted it wasn't 10 seconds.
Or I'm just bad at telling time idk.
Have I missed something?
But good game, I liked it :)
TheOrioli
04. Oct 2022 · 15:01 UTC
A lot of personality in the graphics and the in-game events, really nice humor in the game 🙌
Don Fouts
04. Oct 2022 · 15:01 UTC
Cool game idea, I like the different enemies. It was a little hard to jump between the platforms and the game slowed down a little when I had cleaned everything on a row but had to wait for the platform to move up and down. Awesome entry, nice work!
Gonzalol
04. Oct 2022 · 15:12 UTC
Very funny game, it keeps you smiling while random things happens. I enyojed, it's very short
fabula_rasa
04. Oct 2022 · 15:20 UTC
@finn-pickart Thanks for playing and glad you enjoyed the game :smile:.
As to the 10 seconds - our first connection to it was the 'fact' that every 10 seconds a window washer falls to his death (as per the linked 'study'). However, we found that that is an enormous death toll of window washers :wink:.
Finn Pickart
04. Oct 2022 · 15:36 UTC
@fabula-rasa Ah okay I got it.
That's pretty creative with the window washers fact.
I wouldn't have thought of this
Ugghmaster
04. Oct 2022 · 17:41 UTC
This is a cool game! I love all the little details, like the fact that pizza spawns when a drone is hit by one of the falling window cleaners. :grin: The attention to detail is really outstanding!

My only complaint is that i almost did not play past the first level, because at first I did not realize that I could make the jump to the far right window.

Also I appreciate the linux build. :thumbsup:
dp3rucha
04. Oct 2022 · 18:16 UTC
I had a lot of fun playing the game, especially with the older person with the cane. I didn't understand how the 10 second theme applies in the game. But it plays pretty well.
INCD021
04. Oct 2022 · 19:20 UTC
Love it, the art, the music and game :D Very well done, can't say what to change to make it better. :thumbsup:
PicusBGames
05. Oct 2022 · 00:24 UTC
Fun little game, and cute graphics! I really hope the fatality rate of window washers is not that bad! Oh and I love the game name... simple yet adds to the cuteness somehow :)
bcmpinc
05. Oct 2022 · 00:31 UTC
A simple game, yet very well executed. I love it.
Paul Avallone
05. Oct 2022 · 00:43 UTC
Really funny use of theme. I love the little detail of the rope bouncing as it moves position. You have a good variety of obstacles The gangsters shooting at each other from different windows has to be my favorite. Would love to this expanded with more levels and introduce new mechanics. Maybe different cleaning tools and zooming out farther to show more windows. Very well polished. I had a fun time playing Great job!
I wrote it myself
05. Oct 2022 · 09:18 UTC
It's so satisfying to clean a window, mix it with a fun platformer; and you have a great game. Well done!
elysiagriffin
05. Oct 2022 · 10:11 UTC
Thanks for submitting your game for me to play on my stream!

If you’d like to rewatch the playthrough, you can find it here: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1609823066?t=1h30m7s

Good luck on your ratings, see you next LD! :D

💜 Elysia Griffin AKA Button Feedback Lady
https://www.twitch.tv/elysiagriffin
epeachyband
05. Oct 2022 · 10:12 UTC
I like game dynamic environment of game. The way game tries resist player goal is realised awesome.
The game graphics and sounds makes my eyes and ears feel good.
Thank you for the submition of yours!
Roroto Sic
05. Oct 2022 · 11:29 UTC
The two gangsters shooting each other made me laugh loudly^^
very funny game! Just one question: Why Grandma are so mean?!
LDJam user 248799
05. Oct 2022 · 11:30 UTC
Really cool idea, simple and well executed !

Balancing is good, it was challenging but I managed to reach the end without frustration :thumbsup:
Dahut
05. Oct 2022 · 11:32 UTC
Well, I did not realise being a window washer was so dangerous :smile:

It was a nice game to play !
fabula_rasa
05. Oct 2022 · 12:50 UTC
@roroto-sic Well: her pension is late, her left knee has been hurting since Thanksgiving, her stew is too salty and her children insist on calling her not even close to often enough. And to top it all off, some dastardly redhead is jumping in front of her window. That was just the last straw. "Get off my lawn" - the grandma thought, even though she had no lawn, and she went to fetch her trusty cane.
sterco_raro
05. Oct 2022 · 13:53 UTC
Very well made, I think it's one of the best I've tried so far!

that old hag... aaargh
TriangleTriangle
05. Oct 2022 · 19:42 UTC
I can dodge bullets, drop kick drones out of the sky, leap over birds, and dive out of the way of falling objects... but that old lady... she scares me.

Great game! I loved the 2d vector look, I haven't seen as much of that style but it looks very polished and professional. Very fun style and vibe. I did give up on the second level because it's quite slow to clean all the windows, and waiting for the platforms to move feels very slow, and I have the attention span of a squirrel, so when I got all the way to the end of a level only to die on the last window, I couldn't quite bring myself to go through the entire thing again. That's probably just me.

Well done!
Beefbone
05. Oct 2022 · 19:49 UTC
Cute little game, wish I could operate the lift myself as it being automatic frustrated me a bit
fabula_rasa
05. Oct 2022 · 20:16 UTC
**Thanks, everyone, for playing and for feedback!** We're glad you enjoyed the game and didn't run away from the scary grandma.
@ladymeow @chillertyp @theorioli @don-fouts @gonzalol @incd021 @bcmpinc @i-wrote-it-myself @epeachyband @pikario @dahut @sterco-raro


@joshua-denk You might be correct. This was our first attempt at any kind of platforming :grin:

@ugghmaster Thanks for pointing this out. Maybe I should have added a second arrow pointing to that window as well to make it more obvious. Probably would help :smile:

@dp3rucha Our connection to the theme is in the fact from the study we quote at the start of the game (which I now added to the description page to make it more clear - thank you for pointing out that it wasn't really :)). Originally, we also had events spawning every 10 seconds to reinforce the theme further, but it turned out to be not often enough on later levels, so we decreased the timer there (and it's cheated 'every 10 seconds' now :wink:)

@picusbgames Don't worry about the brave window washers - the quoted study is extremely unreliable :laughing: I'm glad you like the title!

@paul-avallone We had a lot of ideas for various obstacles and boons on our list. This concept really lends itself to creativity. We implemented as many as we managed in the jam time. Various cleaning tools are a nice idea!

@triangletriangle The old lady is indeed the scariest. When she takes her cane in hand, men tremble. I'm very happy you like the look of the game! As to the slowness of window cleaning, you might not be the only one. It was mentioned by one more person - so there is at least two of you :wink: It might be that we indeed made it a bit too slow. However, making it faster would probably affect the balance and could make the game too easy. It would require some testing.

@beefbone The initial concept was actually for the player to operate the lift himself. However, we decided to change it to the automatic movement to provide more platforming elements.
Trexxak
05. Oct 2022 · 20:58 UTC
All glory to the Hypnotoad, once more :D

Loved what you made out of that Onion article!

Very solid gameplay with very sensible progression and even a learning experience - While in hindsight it makes total sense a Pizza delivery drone will drop... Pizza, making the connection myself that the drone differs from the bird in that way was still a very welcome surprise... in the last level with one heart left. :'D

Also as always - big fan of the unique art style! The environmental art and backgrounds really sold the setting!
booremi
05. Oct 2022 · 21:15 UTC
the neighbors are so fucking rude 🙄 cute adorable little game i like it <3
Ryan Dotsikas
05. Oct 2022 · 21:18 UTC
Awesome job with this clever title! I love the intro with the headline from the onion, brilliant! But I had a lot of fun playing this, it controlled really well and I loved seeing what new and different obstacles/attacks would occur and how the next level would be designed. It was unfortunate to have to just wait for the platform to move to get the end of that last window, but that's just all part of it. Great job!
🎤 civmaniac
05. Oct 2022 · 22:07 UTC
@trexxak
I was wondering if drone wouldn't be too hard to read. In hindsight, that pizza box/label should have been probably bigger and draw attention.

There's also a secret ending, and since it's not too obvious it's a secret, I wonder if anyone got it 😅
Tex Killer
06. Oct 2022 · 00:11 UTC
This game is very well made, congratulations! I wish I had better feedback to give... The only annoyance I had was the jump not working while the wash button is pressed, but that is easily avoidable. After reading about the secret ending I went back to try to find it, but I could not. I guess it is very well hidden, haha
Birdy Games
06. Oct 2022 · 04:31 UTC
It's a good game. Simple, but very polished. The last level is a bit long and gets repetitive, but it's a good game overall. Good job!
KatreenAshy
06. Oct 2022 · 09:39 UTC
An Amazing Idea ! I love the art ! Well Done :)
fuzzybut
06. Oct 2022 · 15:16 UTC
A secret ending?? Now I have to play again XD Pretty fun game, and it feels clean (no pun). The obstacles are funny haha. Hope you had fun making it!
LDJam user 297980
06. Oct 2022 · 15:23 UTC
Thanks for submitting this game! I really enjoyed playing this. Great art, well polished and really fun.
Oakhardt
06. Oct 2022 · 17:44 UTC
Poor girl. Apparently the whole city wants to see this young lady dead! Was is up with this city anyway? Corpses flying from buildings, people shooting parrots?! Anyway.
It was fun and challenging! I find the first major jump to the dirty window quite difficult. I would loved a little sparkle effect and sfx when a window is successfully cleaned! Also the levels were quite long. Maybe shorter ones but more? It's a flavour thing I guess. Oh and it took me way to long to figure out you can jump on drones and get pizza! Maybe a hint would be nice. The game and the visuels were quite charming! The music was fitting. Enjoyed it overall.
Cedric86
06. Oct 2022 · 21:34 UTC
Great entry. Movement felt very nice. BGM also very fitting. Graphics also looked very nice. There is nothing bad to say here. Well done.
enderr42
07. Oct 2022 · 02:03 UTC
Dissapointed no flower pot ever hit a drone as in real life.
As much as i'm indifferent to platformers, this was great fun!)

Also please normalise babusya-yellow bucket interaction
LDJam user 156819
07. Oct 2022 · 05:17 UTC
Nicely done on the visual style and sound effects. Goofy and fun. Jumping onto birbs was probably the most entertaining thing to do. I just wish jumping was more responsive, especially while I'm pressing (or just about letting go) of other keys.

[Stream vod here!](https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1611166734?t=03h28m20s)
Nash
07. Oct 2022 · 10:29 UTC
This was a pretty good entry! It is a complete package and nothing feels out of place. That is a great accomplishment for a jam game.

The only major feedback I have is that the level design could use some work. In some levels it is a bit annoying to have to wait for the "elevator" to move multiple times so you can get to those last windows. I would have hoped to see more platforming routes between windows so that the elevator would be the safe route but if the player wants to proceed quicker then they can take the risk and do a series of jumps to get there.

I also noticed that there is a really cool jump boost mechanic with the elevator. If you jump at the peak of the elevator movement you can jump really high. I do not know whether this was intended but it is very neat and it would have been great to see levels that take advantage of this.

But overall, a really solid entry. Very high standards what it comes to jam games in general!
Vulpez
07. Oct 2022 · 16:36 UTC
Good game, I think this would be a nice mobile for children! It has a cute artstyle and the controls are very easy, great job!
binaryDiv
07. Oct 2022 · 19:38 UTC
Very nice game! I love the idea/inspiration, the graphics are really good and cute, and generally it was a lot of fun!

The difficulty curve was good, the first level wasn't too easy but also not too difficult, and the last one was a
bit of a challenge (in a good way).

I really just have some smaller nitpicks: The controls (especially jumping) sometimes didn't work smoothly. Also, waiting for the platforms to move (and then hoping that they move in the right direction) sometimes was a bit annoying. Controlling the platform movement via keys would have been cool.

But all in all a very very great game! :)
Midna
07. Oct 2022 · 20:50 UTC
Super fun game! cute graphics and loved the concept. Once i figured it out that i could jump to the other platform it became more fun.
fabula_rasa
08. Oct 2022 · 02:07 UTC
**Thank you again to everyone who played our game and took the time to give us some feedback.** You all rock :)
@booremi @birdy-games @katreenashy @fuzzybut @babbersher @cedric86 @enderr42 @vulpez @midna

@trexxak The Hypnotoad must be honored! It told me so, and who am I to argue with the most glorious toad. I'm always happy to hear that you like the art :).

@ryan-dotsikas At the start, we planned on giving the player control of the elevators. But we changed our minds to this automatic movement to provide more platforming opportunities. However, that might have been a bad decision, as a few people mentioned that waiting for the platform to come can be tedious.

@tex-killer Yeah, we had some bugs with the jumping that we weren't able to completely squash. And the secret ending is indeed well-hidden. There is even a clue to it on the wall - so vague that nobody will ever get it :grin:

@oakhardt A sparkle effect on a cleaned window is a great idea! Like in an old window washing fluid commercials :grin: I did make the pizza box too small. Should have been bigger and drawing more attention - then I think the players would get it fast. After all - it's pizza, when isn't that a good thing? Don't get me started on this city. It's a hellhole, a den of scum and villainy, and you haven't even seen the half of it. I heard that the people living on higher floors hate their window washers even more, and they are quite craaaazy (who do you think is throwing down all those poor guys that you see falling!). There are rumors of crazy cat ladies, vampires, seagulls with permanent diarrhea... it's a madhouse up there.

@outfrost We did have a bug problem when it came to jumping that we were never able to quite squash.

@nash Alternative platforming routes for the brave (or the mad ;)) are a great idea! Thanks for that!

@binarydiv We had problems with the jumping when making the game - a bug that we were sadly not able to squash in time. Sorry that you ran into it. When we came up with the game, we actually were going to give control of the platforms to the player. We changed our minds in the process to put more emphasis on platforming. Might have been a bad decision :wink:
Tex Killer
08. Oct 2022 · 02:40 UTC
@fabula-rasa Ok, now I got the secret ending. Once I found it I thought I had to do the thing multiple times, it took me a while to understand it can only be done once... :stuck_out_tongue: Great job to the both of you!
nyxkn
08. Oct 2022 · 06:58 UTC
OH MY GOD what a beautiful game. It's the cutest thing I've ever seen. Super well presented with incredibly charming art and animations. The atmosphere and humor are glorious; I was smiling the whole time. Gameplay was quite fun, although the levels were long and having to restart one felt quite annoying. Having to wait for the platforms to move sometimes was also quite tedious, especially when waiting for them to raise to jump off. Overall really well made and supremely polished game!
figadei
08. Oct 2022 · 19:36 UTC
Simple and fun game! The premise was funny and I like how new elements are introduced as you play. The graphics were simple but clean and I especially liked reserving the lineart for the interactable objects and things and leaving the background without it. Good job!:)
fabula_rasa
09. Oct 2022 · 00:44 UTC
@tex-killer Congrats! I'm quite happy you managed to get the secret ending - you made my day :smiley:
Cosmo Nectarine
09. Oct 2022 · 08:02 UTC
I really loved it. Art style is great, gameplay mechanics are really smooth. Grandmas are scary. Great game.
tigerfinch
09. Oct 2022 · 13:54 UTC
Nice idea and well made. I felt the movement was a little too "slippy" and the jumps were a little too close. The grandma and her stick was the hardest obstacle to judge, sometimes just didn't have time to get out of the way. Overall, really nicely done.
fabula_rasa
09. Oct 2022 · 14:41 UTC
@nyxkn That's just so awesome to hear! Thank you! You're not the first to mention that waiting for the platforms can be annoying. We probably should have stayed with our original idea of giving the player a remote for the platforms.

@cosmo-nectarine Thank you for playing and taking the time to leave a comment. Grandma is indeed a menace to society :wink:

@figadei Thank you for playing and very glad you liked the visuals :)

@tigerfinch Grandma is the worst - everyone agrees :laughing: This was our first attempt at anything resembling a platformer, so the movement indeed requires more work.
mikolak
09. Oct 2022 · 15:21 UTC
Really enjoyable. The game starts up easy, but also provides a challenge later on. The cutesy graphics and audio are a perfect fit for this type of platformer. Levels could be somewhat improved, maybe by adding high risk, but fast shortcuts that able to get you back on opposite platforms, combined with ranks for timing.

Finally, the fact that hazards interact with one another - like when a parrot gets clocked on its head by a grandma - gives opportunity for a chuckle.
Erkberg
12. Oct 2022 · 07:04 UTC
Great game with a wonderful artstyle! And it was awesome welcoming you to the stream yesterday! Here's the VOD if you want to check that out again:
https://youtu.be/x8_8yrtjEcU
sergilazaro
12. Oct 2022 · 09:26 UTC
Cute game and fun to play! The platform being outside your control isn't necessarily a negative, it would be a different game and challenge if it was all under your control. Only thing I'd possibly change in hindsight, is that holding the "clean" button doesn't seem to add much because there's no reason for you not to clean while in front of a window, right? It could have been automated. But it's just a silly thing.
Chakit
13. Oct 2022 · 06:58 UTC
Had Great fun while Playing This Game!!! Nice idea, enjoyed playing! Great game!
LDJam user 250825
14. Oct 2022 · 23:40 UTC
I like how the instructions are graffiti on the wall. The obstacles are very fun, I wasn't expecting the bullets to collide with the birds :D The controls work fine except I wish jumping would cancel cleaning, I got hit many times as I was too slow to let go of E. Graphics are nice and very readable from a gameplay standpoint, very solid entry!
🎤 civmaniac
15. Oct 2022 · 18:34 UTC
We've made a post-jam version with some improvements based on your comments. Web version will stay 1.0 until jam is over, and native builds 1.0 are still available.

Here's a list of changes:
- Improved jumping and better controls.
- New enemy: Ghost.
- Player can now jump on bullets.
- New particle effect plays when window gets fully cleaned.
- Revised pizza box graphics.

Thank you for your feedback!
amarokczukay
16. Oct 2022 · 01:24 UTC
i've had a very good laugh playing your game! the variety of enemies is great to see, and the overall game feels kinda nice to play! not being able to jump while pressing E got me a bit confused at first, but that's something you learn. the graphics and animations look polished. very good entry, congrats!
Fort
16. Oct 2022 · 14:25 UTC
This game is very fun to play, the fact you have to be very aware of dodging obstacles whilst trying to clean windows makes this much more fun! Amazing :thumbsup:
Volkolak
16. Oct 2022 · 15:20 UTC
Good implementation of the idea with humor. Well done!
Tamasik
17. Oct 2022 · 12:23 UTC
Cute Game.....I dont know how to clean other side of window...XD Tried so many times
JMad
17. Oct 2022 · 19:45 UTC
This was fun! You can easily add onto it by adding levels, too. The length was just right for a quick playthrough. I like the idea and you did a good job with the implementation : controls respond well, it straightforward, and challenging enough to keep one entertained. Nice one!
Papaver
18. Oct 2022 · 12:58 UTC
Very nice game! I had fun playing it. :smile:

The graphics are very nice and I enjoyed all the different obstacles and enemies and their animations. I also enjoyed how sometimes they interacted, like the bullets killing the bird.
I like the in-game instructions on the wall. I was a bit confused in the first level though, because I didn't see the window on the right as a window I should clean, because of the big arrow ;)

Original take on the theme! For the later levels, I think it's good that you dropped the 10 second interval and things happened faster. Sometimes the waiting for the moving thing was a bit boring if all the windows nearby were already clean. It was unclear for me in the beginning why jumping didn't always work, but apparently you can't jump while cleaning. Makes sense I guess, otherwise you would just hold E all the time, but it did confuse me for a moment. I read that you already have a post-jam version. Maybe you could also add some splashes of water while cleaning the window?

In the web version, the music sometimes hangs in transitions between levels or when restarting a level. Might also be because currently my laptop isn't plugged in.

Overall, very well done! :clap:
🎤 civmaniac
19. Oct 2022 · 11:58 UTC
@papaver Glad you liked it! Thanks for suggestions! I like the idea of adding the splashes. The bug with jumping we fixed in post-jam. The music hanging is not only on your laptop, it is a common issue with Godot web export.
VPhyre
19. Oct 2022 · 16:57 UTC
A very fun game and very enjoyable to play. The mechanics of predictability of attacks from "enemies" is fantastic. The level design is very good too, there is an excellent learning curve. The graphics are nice, and the sound is good. As well as the gameplay is solid. Good job!
MikoziQ
19. Oct 2022 · 20:47 UTC
Power(hand)washer-window simulator 2D!

Pros:

- Quite nice music!
- Funky animations and a likeable character (even though she's silent)
- Multiple obstacles and 'enemies'
- Color scheme is pleasant to the eye
- Good take on the theme in mechanics

I don't really have much of cons, and considering time limitations, you guys went beyond of what's expected. Excellent job!
Danial Jumagaliyev
20. Oct 2022 · 17:01 UTC
Damn the cowboys with guns were kinda unexpected and caught me off guard in the 2nd level :laughing:
Overall, I liked the concept and I finally understood how a job of a window cleaner can be disastrous. Well done!
LDJam user 260723
21. Oct 2022 · 14:03 UTC
Well, it's look like window washing is really dangerous job :smile: The challenge is just right, visuals are nice. Good submission!
MikroPiru
23. Oct 2022 · 15:05 UTC
I unfortunately couldn't rate this until the deadline... But I now tried this, and boy, is this well done! The graphics are really pretty and the controls feel very solid. And the events are also all very good and just challenging enough. The only thing I could criticize in the slightest – and what others have already pointed out – is the rather loose connection to the theme. But that's a very small minus.

All in all, this feels really polished. Really stellar work!