Deliverance by Aloya

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made by Aloya for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

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Ratings

Overall 938th 3.231⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Fun 721th 3.288⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 857th 3.04⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Theme 404th 4.096⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 464th 3.889⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Audio 504th 3.333⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Humor 838th 2.682⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Mood 865th 3.217⭐ 25🧑‍⚖️
Given 50🗳️ 38🗨️

Feedback

Sarmatt
01. May 2023 · 21:21 UTC
Very cool game. We play it with all familly!
Phyrocast
01. May 2023 · 22:14 UTC
Very nice! Reminds me of Papers Please! However the stamps can spam-press when held in place, which causes issues with the book. Good job!
Nastasya
02. May 2023 · 07:38 UTC
I like this game! Your first participation in Ludum is successful.
Volodymyr Karchevskyy
02. May 2023 · 16:22 UTC
Interesting concept! I like it)
Samoussa
03. May 2023 · 16:54 UTC
A very cool game! Stamping on things can be satisfying, and like an other user mentioned it did reminded me of Papers Please.
Congratulations!
klausklapper
03. May 2023 · 16:57 UTC
Fun little game. It borrows heavily from "Papers, Please", but so does mine. I encountered a bug where new documents would disappear from my desk right after spawning, leaving me with just the parcel and a blank desk. I encountered it during two or three runs, I think it might have been me clicking too fast or so?

I like how you get to select methods of transportation & boxes.
FrancoisGoret
03. May 2023 · 17:01 UTC
I love this category of game with pass validation and yours is fun to play.
But It was hard to find good packages because in my tries there is 90% of not valid packages.
LDJam user 278146
04. May 2023 · 14:29 UTC
I like this idea, it's similar to one of the ideas we came up with for the jam :)

I don't know if it's just me but I only saw three different names, it would have been nice to see more. It would also have been nice to know whether I got it right or wrong.
Rjdrag
04. May 2023 · 16:26 UTC
Nice work. A couple quick issues: Something was off in the tutorial and I couldn't really get though it properly. I'm playing on an ultrawide, so maybe some elements were misaligned. Also, the stamp seemed to rapid-fire stamp a bunch in a row when I wanted it to just stamp once.
LDJam user 257438
05. May 2023 · 10:13 UTC
This game reminds me of the game "Papers, please" and ou have done a good job on creating this game!
There are some issues with stamps! Sometimes, rejects or approves twice!!
Also, same things are coming up.

Overall, good submission and continue working on the game!
BlumBlum
05. May 2023 · 10:40 UTC
I really like the idea of whether or not to validate the delivery !
Congratulations !
LDJam user 338042
05. May 2023 · 10:51 UTC
Really cool concept! Game looks neat and pretty, the gameplay is understandable and the different checks needed add a nice depth to the concept. Switching from the 3 different view reminded me of FNAF. The music added some eariness which i'm not sure it was intended but i enjoyed it personally. I will say however that the stamping was a bit janky at times. I accidently stamped several dossiers before they even appeared because the stamp was too close to the table. Also the arrows to go back to a previous menu in the top right corner was somehow not really intuitive in my mind and i cannot tell why. Maybe my brain pictured it pointing the other direction. Overall great work!
PSV Games Studio
10. May 2023 · 01:38 UTC
Nice game. Good job!
Usenrame
11. May 2023 · 23:04 UTC
reminded me valheim aesthetics
thiago neumann
15. May 2023 · 15:17 UTC
fun and interesting
Stevie257
15. May 2023 · 19:21 UTC
The graphics in this game possess a unique and identifiable style, reflecting the developer's personal touch and creative expression