Your Item Has Been Delivered by Jonathan Lorenz

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made by Jonathan Lorenz for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

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A good robot will always deliver items to their compagny's customers, no matter what ...

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Note : Most of the graphics are from Synty Studios. The player model is original as well as the explosion at the end of the game.

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Ratings

Overall 789th 3.386⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Fun 924th 3.045⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 762th 3.136⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Theme 408th 4.091⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 736th 3.455⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Audio 303th 3.682⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Humor 465th 3.31⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Mood 270th 3.881⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Given 20🗳️ 30🗨️

Feedback

LDJam user 158571
02. May 2023 · 15:15 UTC
Nice game! I liked the atomic blast effect a lot! The audio is very immersive as well!
BOPOHx
02. May 2023 · 18:09 UTC
cool music and sounds! nice game!
Nail
03. May 2023 · 09:15 UTC
I like the mood and concept of art. It would be great if you can add instructive elements into your game in the future. Good luck!
🎤 Jonathan Lorenz
03. May 2023 · 09:20 UTC
@nail what do you mean by "instructive elements"?
LDJam user 282870
03. May 2023 · 09:23 UTC
I loved your game. I think he meant by instructive elements we didn't know where to drop the box, if we could pick up multiple boxes, we can't move forward of back, if you go to fast and hit a curb the box pops off. Stuff like that.

The game was superior though and the game play was just excellent. Thank you for a great play
ThatSommeS
03. May 2023 · 09:24 UTC
The phsysics are a bit wonky, making everything feel very unstable.
Love the concept and the story
Quanta Studios
03. May 2023 · 09:28 UTC
The end scene with the blast was so aesthetically pleasing. I had some trouble with the box bouncing the player around when flying about, maybe this could be rectified by making the grapple could be a bit longer? Overall really solid and fun!
lgg
03. May 2023 · 09:47 UTC
I love the paralax background, I had some troubles with finding out where to go for the next box, but it was worth to see the end. KABOOOM!
Divi
03. May 2023 · 09:58 UTC
Pretty nice game! The movement could be a little faster and the tutorial text could also disappear at some point, but even if the experience is short, the mood, narrative and music all work very well!
congusbongus
03. May 2023 · 11:07 UTC
I liked it, a nice short game, worked reasonably well aside from the wonky physics but it wasn't a big deal. Love the detail like robot eyes!
LDJam user 261418
12. May 2023 · 17:17 UTC
The controls can be a bit clunky. But the messages were funny and cute! Graphics are impressive and so sad that we unwillingly and unkwnowldingy needed to deliver a bomb x.x :D
Janice Lee
12. May 2023 · 17:31 UTC
Loved this game! The 3d assets and art was amazing and loved the moving elements and controls
garlic
12. May 2023 · 18:17 UTC
I loved this haha! A very original idea with a very well made atmosphere. The graphics and sound design were beautiful. The only thing I didn't appreciate was the clunky rope physics.
Gibran Bisio
12. May 2023 · 18:20 UTC
Nice work. Good atmosphere.
jackypark9852
15. May 2023 · 04:32 UTC
Good job! I really like the music. The only thing is that I'm a bit confused after I grab the letter box, I try to follow the green arrow but I can't move forward. It would be nicer if there's more instructions on what to do with the grabbed letter box.
Stevie257
15. May 2023 · 19:02 UTC
I appreciate the developer's efforts in creating visually engaging graphics that enhance the overall gameplay experience
ArtPerski
19. May 2023 · 09:39 UTC
Pros:
- simply controls
- ending <3

Cons:
- generic models and art style
- too short