Bird Express by Cleoh

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made by Cleoh for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

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MUSICS :

"Walk With Me" and "Busy City" from TrackTribe

!warning! we had a little problem with audio balance, so be carreful when you buy a bird - it's loud !

Ratings

Overall 527th 3.625⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Fun 336th 3.688⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 332th 3.646⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Theme 305th 4.167⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 326th 4.083⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Audio 393th 3.524⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Humor 473th 3.295⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Mood 673th 3.435⭐ 25🧑‍⚖️
Given 90🗳️ 28🗨️

Feedback

peterfiftyfour
02. May 2023 · 11:16 UTC
Nice entry! Was fun to slowly build up the number of birds - it would be nice if the detection of the paths was a bit snappier. I wanted to draw them very quickly but sometimes they didn't register very well and it slowed me down a bit. Cute art btw!
Mr_DanH
02. May 2023 · 23:06 UTC
I'm getting file not found on your download link
rohanmoon
02. May 2023 · 23:06 UTC
Hmm I couldn't get this to work, the game would load up with some animations but I didn't know what to do, clicking on things did nothing and keyboard wasn't useful. The artwork looked pretty nice though.
Obe Dot
02. May 2023 · 23:09 UTC
Pretty fun!
DenisSobolev
02. May 2023 · 23:12 UTC
The game breaks on the tutorial, and without it I did not understand how to play
🎤 Cleoh
03. May 2023 · 00:18 UTC
@mr-danh Thanks for notifying us, it should be fixed now!
🎤 Cleoh
03. May 2023 · 13:07 UTC
@denissobolev @rohanmoon We now have a (very) simple tutorial in the form of a GIF and a written explanation in the description. Thanks for trying anyway!
Sean Atterbury
04. May 2023 · 00:59 UTC
The game was really cool! I really liked the artwork and the gameplay was very chaotic.

Good job!
DurkaGames
04. May 2023 · 19:38 UTC
First 5 o' 5 in all categories. We love the music, art and mechanics. This is a hard game, that hard to make you suffer in all of good senses. Thank you for this game!
Sylf
04. May 2023 · 20:07 UTC
Pretty fun puzzle game with cute style and nice blue bird (I`m not talking to you, Twitter, no).
I thought that it`s one of these games, that`s easy to learn – hard to master. Maps become more complex, days become harder. Sometimes the line was acting in a strange way and drew in a loops, that I didn`t want to create – and it even cost me some deliveries. But overall – good work!
Bastinus Rex
04. May 2023 · 21:28 UTC
Really cool little game, and even without the tutorial I understood quickly ! I liked the effort you put into drawing the buildings, and segment challenges by gradually adding components. (I think you already know it but the sound when you buy a new bird is really high !!) GG
Clephanie
04. May 2023 · 21:36 UTC
@sylf Thanks a lot for your complete comment, we are glad you had fun despite the bugs (Normally a lot of them are fixed in the itch version). And yes, the bird... I realized by drawing it that there is a "teeny tiny" resemblance, but I just hoped no one would notice it haha xD
LDJam user 301151
05. May 2023 · 13:40 UTC
fun game that got real frantic as time went on, very nice.
Digx7
05. May 2023 · 23:45 UTC
The art is amazing, impressed that you're able to do that amidst a game jam! Appreciate how you taken the time to add a difficulty scale. congrats on finishing the game!
Nizanth P
07. May 2023 · 07:55 UTC
It's a cute delivery game. This game has a ton of features, such as a day-night cycle, difficulty level, and cute artwork, which makes it quite amazing. I like your idea. Great game! :)
VirtualMan52
07. May 2023 · 16:53 UTC
An overall very nice entry! Idea was great and well-executed, graphics were cute and polished and music was fitting. I do think however that the gameplay can get a bit repetitive and that there is a point where the game just starts putting in too many orders and becomes a bit overwhelming. I would've also liked the map to have a more equal amount of warehouses (as at some point there was 1 worm merchant for 3 water warehouses and 3 bakeries) and I also had no reason to reach for certain far away warehouses. I also encountered a few bugs with the UI not updating correctly and houses spawning in unreachable spaces, but nothing fundamentally game-breaking. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Either way, I had fun in the midst of path-drawing chaos. Congratulations! :thumbsup:
LDJam user 336851
07. May 2023 · 16:59 UTC
Really hectic super good
Roroto Sic
07. May 2023 · 17:21 UTC
an interesting game! The path is sometimes a bit clunky when drawn but it work overall ! Nice art, fun level design !
🎤 Cleoh
07. May 2023 · 18:20 UTC
@virtualman52 Thanks a lot for the review! The warehouse types are randomized, so sometimes you get screwed over yeah... But it was an easy way to make each run feel a bit different, that's why it's still there.
LDJam user 243193
11. May 2023 · 05:08 UTC
I wish the ordering could be simpler so I could give order faster but I could see why. It's fun game nonetheless, will have to try better next time.
JulienLussiez
19. May 2023 · 17:12 UTC
A lot of a qualities to this game. It was fun to draw path and nice to have a mode to play calmly.