We Suck At Deliveries by Blo

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made by Blo for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

We Suck At Deliveries!

Suck up and catapult your parcels to higher scores!

This is our first ever Ludum Dare and we are very excited to show you our game!

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Objective

You are a duo of parcel couriers, suck up and shoot parcels to deliver your packages to the correct homes!

Houses will display which product they need

Each successful delivery gives you a point! Wrongly delivered parcels deduct them!

Controls

WASD - movement

Q+E - Rotate Camera

Left Click - Shoot Parcel

Right Click - Suck Parcel

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Map

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Key:

White - House

Black - Road

Icon - Shop

Ratings

Overall 962th 3.185⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Fun 936th 3.036⭐ 30🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 880th 3⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Theme 384th 4.107⭐ 30🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 617th 3.648⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Audio 725th 2.58⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Humor 586th 3.077⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Mood 834th 3.26⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Given 28🗳️ 33🗨️

Feedback

thimmythimble
02. May 2023 · 01:01 UTC
if you want to play this in your browser you can do so at thomas-chernaik.github.io/delv

We couldn't get it working as an embed on time :/
professor
02. May 2023 · 01:26 UTC
The graphics in this are great! It is really fun to drive the van and just explore the bright terrain (The smiley faces on the trees was a nice touch).
PixelPocket
02. May 2023 · 01:30 UTC
Absolutely love the art, super cute!
8c4o
02. May 2023 · 16:15 UTC
quirky and with lots of potential
Game-mon
02. May 2023 · 17:23 UTC
Nice game! The art is really nice. I'd suggest having regular 3PS controls for this game (i'd rather rotate the view with the mouse than with Q&E), but that's a minor problem. Overall good job!
Space_Games
02. May 2023 · 17:51 UTC
I love the style of the game! Amazing work to all who made this!
Rakowu
02. May 2023 · 18:13 UTC
I really liked the idea,the art style and the game. Driving the car was fun. Would have been nice if you could turn the camera. It also took me a while to realise that it's not the position of the car with the pipe to the palette that matters, but the mouse cursor (to suck things in).
fidrik
02. May 2023 · 19:09 UTC
I like how the bushes have smiley faces, couldnt figure out how to deliver the packages
Shawn Beck
02. May 2023 · 19:20 UTC
Super cute and charming. Makes me want to draw smiley faces on everything. The driving mechanic is fun.
MrBamboo
03. May 2023 · 03:48 UTC
Fun to drive the little car ! Hard to get items. Great try
LDJam user 259103
03. May 2023 · 04:16 UTC
I like the art style, very charming. I found the camera a little awkward; a standard mouse-controlled camera would have worked better in my opinion. I think there should also be a timer of sorts so the game ends after a while and you can try to get a high score.

Nice work :)
ROBOWARRIOR1982
03. May 2023 · 06:59 UTC
First, congrats for your first LD game !

I played several minute and i like the graphics, cute and simple.

I'm surprise the **camera** is locked into this angle and don't follow the direction where the player go, it's disapointing first.
The **map** could be help but i didn't see indicator with my position on it, fortunatelly the area is small but this two points are not very "friendly".

Sound is good but no music ? Next time just add cute music free copyright and opting out "audio category". Than can add more mood in your game.

For the rest collect the package and distribute them is not really difficult when you manage with this 2 points (camera,map). If you work on it it can be awesome, for sure.
crittercorps
03. May 2023 · 12:26 UTC
i live for this artstyle
Meta-link
03. May 2023 · 15:37 UTC
Cool looking game ! It does fit the theme well, but the gameplay is a bit hard to get, especially with the camera. I really loved the atmosphere, good job :slight_smile:
🎤 Blo
03. May 2023 · 21:59 UTC
@professor @pixelpocket @8c4o @space-games @shawn-beck @mrbamboo @fidrik @crittercorps thank you all so much!!<333 it means a lot seeing this response from our first ludum dare<3333

@thomas-bringer @rakowu @python-b5 @robowarrior1982 @meta-link The feedback about the camera is very appriciated :pray: originally it was actually a fixed camera angle facing north thats why theres actually no homes on the south side of a road haha :laughing: were looking to make a more fleshed out verison of the game and will definetly have some sort of mouse based camera system (+ a better map)
Cheesecube
03. May 2023 · 22:58 UTC
Love the art style! The smiling bushes are especially cute. The controls overall felt nice, even with the weird but surprisingly usable q+e to rotate the camera. The only real issue I have is that it was very finicky sucking in packages. I did not realize it was based on mouse position and not the sucking tube's position until I read someone's comment. Overall though, very good for your first time participating in ludum!
zgragselus
04. May 2023 · 00:12 UTC
The painted art style is neat. I enjoyed driving around and delivered few packages.

Technically - camera is stuck at single angle, while that's not necessarily a bad thing - BUT - there is a map and indicators where the packages are, yet there are no indicators about recipients unless you literally drive to have their house in camera view (note. some of the houses had their request bubble too low, and it wasn't clear what they want). Had to always search for a bit.

Otherwise it was quite nice gameplay.

Congratulations on making a game!
Chris Chen
04. May 2023 · 01:35 UTC
With some more polish this would be really fun! the camera and driving controls were a bit finicky, but otherwise it's a cute and fun game. well done!
alec
04. May 2023 · 01:56 UTC
10/10 game title lol. Like others said the controls were a little finicky. I could see this game design really shining with a more varied environment. For some reason I'm thinking of the city from the old "simpson hit and run" game haha.

Congrats on the first jam submission, great job!
Dongle
04. May 2023 · 02:29 UTC
Impressive! You were able to accomplish a substantial amount of work in such a short period of time. Congratulations on your entry, it's certainly something to be proud of. I particularly enjoyed the art direction - it's playful and engaging.

The way you gather and shoot items reminds me of Slime Rancher.
Kitira
04. May 2023 · 17:13 UTC
Nice idea and driving around is really fun! I like the smiling bushes soooooo much, they are so cute! I also like the idea of "suck up and shoot parcels". Unfortunately, I could not select what item to shoot, so I were only able to deliver meat... Think I must have overlooked something. But nevertheless it was fun! :)
Erlioniel
04. May 2023 · 18:04 UTC
Hey guys,

Took a look and overall can't say that I don't like the idea, it's pretty smart and funny. Overall look & feel makes me happy just by fact of having such bushes :smile:

It might require some balance and some time limit / score would be nice to feel it more like a challenging game or something. Also I'm not that sure about that low camera for such game - from time to time driving felt a little bit odd. However I did like to play it, so here is my :thumbsup: for you!
LDJam user 235915
05. May 2023 · 17:06 UTC
I really liked the graphic design)
LDJam user 279507
07. May 2023 · 13:54 UTC
Loved the little truck and the ideas there. I also struggled with the camera and controls a fair bit, would have liked to get some solid long-shots on the delivery too but mostly drove up close.
Nice little entry
Doraemon
17. May 2023 · 02:22 UTC
Fantastic game. Love the title, and I had fun driving around :-)
MowPea
20. May 2023 · 00:17 UTC
The game kept crashing Web Player (Mac), but the graphics looked nice and driving felt good too.