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Good job!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1167120,"author_name":"LRDJJ","author_uid":"lrdjj","epoch":1759851340,"text":"Very cool concept, nicely done!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1167199,"author_name":"vydra","author_uid":"vydra","epoch":1759852066,"text":"Nice mood. But it is hart to read this font if you're not English speaker.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1167563,"author_name":"Huex","author_uid":"huex","epoch":1759855552,"text":"The game has a cozy feel\u2014a strong character and a pleasant, minimalist environment create a sense of calm.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1168998,"author_name":"bereg","author_uid":"bereg","epoch":1759868594,"text":"I'm a sucker for artsy games, and this one scratches the itch well enough. I really like the concept of coloring a black-and-white world while uncovering memories. That said, I think it could benefit from more inner conflict and emotional depth to truly land. For example: I looked at the suitcase or the painting \u2014 but was the memory powerful enough? Why had I forgotten it in the first place?\n\nOverall, it\u2019s a great concept that might just need a bit more refinement. I really admire your determination to bring something soulful into the world - and thank you for that! Also, the sound design does a wonderful job of setting the right mood.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1169589,"author_name":"florianCohen","author_uid":"floriancohen","epoch":1759874385,"text":"@bereg Thank you very much for your comment, indeed something is missing, I agree. I was only able to work on it for 1 day and I sped things up a bit, but I plan to refine the game more outside of Ludumdar. But really thank you for your message, it means a lot to me.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1169911,"author_name":"tardis2snej","author_uid":"tardis2snej","epoch":1759878683,"text":"Very good for a one-day game! Love the concept and graphics. The only thing I noticed is that after the item gets colour it draws on top of the environment. Not sure if that was intended.\n\nFlying fish is super cute.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1170022,"author_name":"florianCohen","author_uid":"floriancohen","epoch":1759881049,"text":"@tardis2snej Thank you very much for your feedback. There are indeed rendering problems when I \"render\" the color. I didn't have time to fix it, but I think it gives a nice little effect.","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":1170796,"author_name":"Nolamosoft","author_uid":"nolamosoft","epoch":1759899417,"text":"The world gaining color is a great effect and I think you used it well. Bravo! ","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1171118,"author_name":"klausklapper","author_uid":"klausklapper","epoch":1759907020,"text":"Not a lot more to say than what has already been said. Fantastic result for one day, and the first time I realized the color change I thought \"Wow, that's a cool idea!\". Any plans to keep building on this idea in the future?","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1172278,"author_name":"Raivk","author_uid":"raivk","epoch":1759926356,"text":"Great concept, love the colors appearing progressively. Really great mood with the chill atmosphere. Could use a locked and hidden cursor but it's still cool!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1172746,"author_name":"Alva Peng","author_uid":"alva-peng","epoch":1759933828,"text":"I like the vibe! One tiny suggestion is that the font is elegant but a bit hard to read.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1173109,"author_name":"wewrutuwertrer","author_uid":"wewrutuwertrer","epoch":1759938951,"text":"Character movement feels really nice and little fishes are absolutely adorable :)","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1174276,"author_name":"florianCohen","author_uid":"floriancohen","epoch":1759955290,"text":"@klausklapper thanks you for your feedback ! i dont know for the futur but I would like to continue it :)","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":1175144,"author_name":"surfacedfox","author_uid":"surfacedfox","epoch":1759979637,"text":"absolutely wonderful aesthetic! Very elegantly designed.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1175291,"author_name":"einfach","author_uid":"einfach","epoch":1759985046,"text":"absolutely great game,like the vibe!!!!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1176670,"author_name":"tangling","author_uid":"tangling","epoch":1760021159,"text":"awesome graphic\uff01 impressive","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1178345,"author_name":"Daniel123","author_uid":"daniel123","epoch":1760073549,"text":"I like the floating fish.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1178825,"author_name":"Torami","author_uid":"torami","epoch":1760098536,"text":"Wow absolutely amazing game, it reminds me of a childrens book I used to love as a kid where the mole stole all the colors and all the animals became depressed and at the end they managed to convince him to let the colors out again. I love these artsy style of games and this one was amazing. The only thing I found very weird and confusing were the controls, however insanely nice game and good job. Also fits the theme in a very unique way which I escpecially love.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1179414,"author_name":"zelew","author_uid":"zelew","epoch":1760119487,"text":"incredible graphics!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1180548,"author_name":"Sissie","author_uid":"sissie","epoch":1760177072,"text":"I very enjoy strolling around the gray space\uff0cfinding a poem of story,and fitting it together like a pieces of puzzle...the only problem for non-native speaker is font, it's hard to distinguish between\"N\" and \"R\",but it kind of interesting for me to guss some handwritten word.So absolutely nice atmosphere and good job!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1180616,"author_name":"8TreasurePorridge","author_uid":"8treasureporridge","epoch":1760181417,"text":"cool guy, nice game show, hoping to see on the steam!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":1187084,"author_name":"Dengyixa","author_uid":"dengyixa","epoch":1761026770,"text":"It is cool!!! 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