Cards of Fate by Kseon

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made by Kseon for Ludum Dare 58 (JAM)

Collect events, choose a hero, and tell your story. The witch judges the plot — the better the story, the greater the reward. Every choice shapes the narrative.​ тг — https://t.me/adda_kseon

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Ratings

Overall 699th 2.958⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Fun 672th 2.813⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 476th 3.125⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Theme 700th 2.979⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 388th 3.667⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Humor 638th 2.262⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Mood 437th 3.479⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Given 15🗳️ 25🗨️

Feedback

Ulziton
Oct 06th · 20:55 UTC
cool visual and take on theme
Kate666
Oct 06th · 21:02 UTC
Good work on the visual)
dr-braur
Oct 07th · 16:51 UTC
I answered all the questions and then got some text in Cyrillic, so I still don't know what my story was :)
But it looks prrety decent!
🎤 Kseon
Oct 07th · 16:53 UTC
@dr-braur I only noticed after posting that there is no translation in the story, sorry 😭
Auceane
Oct 07th · 17:04 UTC
The game looks great, and I liked the concept but yeah the text of the story was in Cyrilic ^^"
🎤 Kseon
Oct 07th · 17:06 UTC
@auceane Thank you very much, the Cyrillic alphabet turned out sadly.
Pimeko
Oct 07th · 18:51 UTC
Loved the vibe and really imagined a story in my head. I thought the cyrillic was part of the gameplay and I had to unlock the translation haha, felt surprised
Afterwards the game crashed so I couldn't go further unfortunately
INGVIILD
Oct 07th · 20:02 UTC
Для игры, сделанной в одиночку получилось прикольно!)
Интересно придумано с выбором кусочков историй, в дополнение хочется чуть больше пояснений к картинкам мб или сами истории чуть побольше, но джем есть джем)
А тема обыграна интересно)
maximumoverkilt
Oct 07th · 20:04 UTC
The game wouldn't really work for me... which is weird because there doesn't seem to be a lot going on.
mackain
Oct 07th · 21:45 UTC
cool concept! first time seeing a renpy game here I think :) unfortunately i dont read Cyrillic so I have no idea what happened.
Ciphereo
Oct 08th · 05:51 UTC
an interesting game!!
anaticula
Oct 08th · 17:54 UTC
Such an interesting take on the theme! Tried several stories mostly trying to add up dragon story but none of them added up. Graphics is adorable and pictures on story cards are so cute!
Vulpe
Oct 08th · 20:10 UTC
Very visually nice and I like the concept. Well done.
Ira Baciu
Oct 09th · 09:47 UTC
Awww! This is first renpy game that I saw so far. I'm happy people still use it. Я бы посоветовала сделать шрифт побольше, потому что LD сжирает качество. И проверить везде перевод, так как иногда посреди игры появляется русский вместо английского
![Screenshot 2025-10-09 125112.png](///raw/3cf/56/z/6f0fd.png)
Eugenik
Oct 09th · 14:01 UTC
This was pretty cool haha :D.
🎤 Kseon
Oct 09th · 15:40 UTC
@ira-baciu спасибо большое!
Ginger_Kyoko
Oct 11th · 17:52 UTC
It's very good for a solo jam! It's sad that you didn't have time to draw each character their own card for variety (it's a collection, after all). And is there any point in collecting all these cards? It would be great if there was one in the future. Overall, it turned out well, good luck!
🎤 Kseon
Oct 12th · 16:52 UTC
@ginger-kyoko@ginger-kyoko Thank you very much for your feedback :)
dasMaichen
Oct 12th · 19:33 UTC
It has a good mood and very nice grahics. I would have liked to read the story in a language I can understand... ^^'
ingi
Oct 22nd · 20:17 UTC
Вот я удивился, когда она со мной на русском заговорила)
Красивая игра и идея хорошая