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Magpie's Kleptomania by Elmalach

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made by Elmalach for Ludum Dare 58 (JAM)

Visual novel in the adventure genre You play as Magpie, a single mother who wants to decorate her nest with all kinds of shiny things to make it the most beautiful nest in the whole forest. Join the battle and make thoughtful decisions so that your chicks grow up in wealth. (WARNING: This game is a for fun, made on Twine, and it consists of pictures taken from the internet.) If you faced any bugs please contact us

Link https://dfgjdgf.itch.io/magpies-kleptomania
Original URL https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/58/magpies-kleptomania

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Given 2🗳️ 9🗨️

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zexurge
Oct 07th · 02:39 UTC
lmao has [hatoful boyfriend](https://store.steampowered.com/app/310080/Hatoful_Boyfriend/) vibes :bath:
rosday
Oct 07th · 02:57 UTC
Cute! The dodging minigame is clever
TomPendergrass
Oct 07th · 03:23 UTC
This one is tough! I couldn't handle the quick time events. Maybe because I'm playing on a trackpad. It was a cool concept but now all I can hear are birds chirping
ugly_robot
Oct 07th · 21:50 UTC
This was great! Loved the bird noises and especially the fashionable mr pidgeon! Surprisingly scary to have the cuckoo bird show up! Good job
ellaris
Oct 08th · 11:24 UTC
Interesting experience, I liked meeting the various characters and options for each location.
- The button pressing seemed to make the text box change size, but then the buttons seemed to appear in the exact same space?
- The final image seemed to have all possible loot and not only the ones collected, it would be cool to only show the items collected.
Vladislav1941
Oct 08th · 12:10 UTC
Круто интересно
YurisCat
Oct 08th · 13:56 UTC
A very interesting game! I really enjoyed the various mini-game segments within it. Creating such mini-games within a dialogue framework requires a lot of creativity! The character illustrations are also super cute, haha! I love your game.
sick machine
Oct 08th · 14:36 UTC
A cute and funny game. It's nice to meet someone who made a game purely on Twine.
The variety is also pleasing. The atmosphere is well-conveyed.
I'd like to see a "Restart" button or something like that at the end of the game.
LesDremlet
Oct 11th · 10:19 UTC
This is a hilarious game, buddy!
I don't usually play visual novels, but I just couldn't resist this one.
I especially enjoyed dodging the cat and cutting the fishing line hahah!
It's a shame there's no music in the game, it would really add to the experience.
And I got the good ending on my second try ; )