lycoris;lastwords by robobarbie

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made by robobarbie for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

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(links appear to be busted for me so all links to people/credit are on the itchio page instead)


estimated length of playtime - 15~30 minutes

content warnings - this game is about death and will contain themes surrounding it, including references and words relating to grief, murder, suicide, pandemics, etc. by playing this game you are agreeing to seeing them.


about

deliver three recently departed souls to the afterlife -- and keep their thoughts comforted. as best you can, at least.


known bugs

  • the web build struggles to play music on time + some SFX (some minigame sfx, a big THUMP in soul 3, and some starting line speaking text). if you want a full sound experience, it's highly recommended you download the game instead of playing the web build.

  • sometimes if you click the in-game menu, the game will irreparably freeze. i gotta be real i got no idea what causes that so godspeed if you get that

  • there are so many bugs if u play web version in some sort of incognito mode. probably don't do that LOL


team

saffeine - art

destini - writing

robobarbie - programming

hi-t3c - sfx/sound design

faefield productions - OST

redstormpopcorn, curiousinstigator, basil, selendri - QA


other tools/assets used

falling dust effect - tofurocks

glitch text effect - wattson

THUMP sfx - zapsplat


Ratings

Overall 51th 4.23⭐ 63🧑‍⚖️
Fun 441th 3.593⭐ 61🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 226th 3.784⭐ 60🧑‍⚖️
Theme 277th 4.2⭐ 62🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 13th 4.762⭐ 63🧑‍⚖️
Audio 13th 4.516⭐ 63🧑‍⚖️
Humor 743th 2.826⭐ 45🧑‍⚖️
Mood 9th 4.55⭐ 62🧑‍⚖️
Given 33🗳️ 63🗨️

Feedback

pfeyffer
01. May 2023 · 20:44 UTC
The graphics are stunning, the music is on point. I would probably have chosen less nerdy words but ones with more relation to the art style and depicted period of the game.
evilgeniusdance
01. May 2023 · 20:47 UTC
this artwork is amazing!
love this theme interpretation!!

im a bit confused on who's speaking when, though i know i myself (my character) pick options, i dont get which character exactly i am, am i the deliverer or the soul
also the moment when picking thoughts is a bit confusing too, but one can get a hang of it
3LSTMsInATrenchcoat
02. May 2023 · 00:35 UTC
I think this is the longest/deepest narrative game I've seen in a game jam (although I don't usually go for visual novels, so maybe that doesn't mean much). The story was compelling and the audio accompaniment is good. Took a while to figure out what exactly was going on with the word selection minigame, but that's fine. I was able to reach the end eventually. Overall, a pretty solid entry!
LDJam user 316658
02. May 2023 · 01:18 UTC
this was beautiful!! when i figured out how the text bubbles worked it was very cool.
velvetlobster
02. May 2023 · 02:13 UTC
this music is making me cry
Lovely choices and mood, rated you 5 cuz there is no 6
LDJam user 280509
02. May 2023 · 02:49 UTC
Stunning art!

The dialog display makes the maingame like watching subtitled classic anime movies.

And the antique book-like border decoration & ui animations really reminds me of Shinbo Akiyuki.
LDJam user 299757
02. May 2023 · 03:11 UTC
Didn't think I would be tearing up from a LD game yet here we are. First off the art and music beautiful. Second, the dialogue between characters is great, I love how it deals with the subject matter but keeps it light hearted. Also, the interpretation of the theme is great. Everything feeds into this melancholy vibe that is just wonderful. I hope to see this game go places, wonderful game!
FlashViper
02. May 2023 · 03:18 UTC
Ok, I have to get this out of the way before the actual review. This game is a little laggy in my browser. Doubt there's much you can do about that, but I thought it was worth noting.

### The actual review:

Wow. Wowowowowowowowowowowowowowow. That was not only a perfect game, it was a perfect __jam__ game. The music was great! The art was great! The story was profound and thoughtful. The take on the theme was innovative! But most of all, all of these things suit the game jam format really well! I'd be interested to hear about your development experience, but this game seems like it's 10% setting up systems, and 90% making content with the ever living crap polished out of it.

Congratulations. I think you're a winner!
GreatCadet
02. May 2023 · 04:18 UTC
Straight off the bat, you can tell this game is going to be good. From the graphics, to the pacing, to the audio, everything just feels right. The dialogue is really good and the game and all the aspects of the game just fit together really well. The game just felt so peaceful and polished. Like watching a movie. Seriously great work.

My only concern is I kept getting this error message:
![Screenshot_234.png](///raw/dba/93/z/5a67f.png)
GreatCadet
02. May 2023 · 04:19 UTC
The game worked fine despite the error message. Maybe it was just my browser. Great work regardless.
jaroslav2324
02. May 2023 · 05:23 UTC
Amazing graphics and audio design, interesting storyline, fantastic work! As i am not a native english speaker it was quite hard to choose right words during "bubble minigame"
innoboros
02. May 2023 · 10:01 UTC
Nice game there! Loved the mood set by the grafics and the sound. The first lines of the dialogue seemed out of the time, but I realized it is one of the points why I liked this game. Great job!
Jul._.li
02. May 2023 · 11:01 UTC
Wow! That was unexpectedly beautifull!

Graphics and animations are stunning, audio is perfectly atmosheric and all the sfx were on time. And don't get me started on the narrative, I mean, who doesn't like a nice heminguweyan iceberg. Loved the balance between dialogs and gameplay. Catching words had a nice difficulty curve even for a non-english-native-person-with-vocabulary-difficulties like myself.

Although wished that you could restart from gameplaying bit after failure for a jam version, 'cause there are a lot of games to rate and big setbacks can get quite frustrating.

Nonetheless, just a perfect entry!
LDJam user 278146
02. May 2023 · 11:27 UTC
Amazing art and subtle animations.

I was a bit confused at first with the contrast between the dialogue and the artstyle.
MorePixels
02. May 2023 · 12:29 UTC
The art was amazing. Awesome story as well i quite enjoyed it! I might have to sit down an play all of it one day!
ekaktusz
02. May 2023 · 13:22 UTC
Wow, very interesting interpretation of the theme! Nice music, amazing art and well written dialogues. The atmosphere is very chill / melancholic / sad. I think you nailed everything! Nice job!
Luxiffre
02. May 2023 · 13:39 UTC
I'm SO in love with this game! You already had me by having my favourite flower in the title, but the actual game is even better than what I could've hoped for. You made this goth's day :bat:

I don't really have much to criticise. The only thing that bugged me a bit was the default sound for the text scrolling, I found it a little sharp and too digital. Lowering the volume helped a little, but it still stood out against the warm acoustic music.

Other than that, though, this is absolutely amazing. I'd be thrilled if you decided to expand on this for a larger-scale game! :black_heart:
Jackaljk
02. May 2023 · 13:46 UTC
So moody, wow! The bubbles gameplay was not the best but the rest is great.
Lara Menendez
02. May 2023 · 15:28 UTC
This game is stunning!! I love how you guys interpreted the theme, I love the ambience, writing, music, everything. I coudn't take my eyes off the character art!! It looks amazing, nice job!
PacoDev
02. May 2023 · 15:38 UTC
Excellent, if you told me this game was done in 72 hours I probably wouldn't believe you, loved the aestethic and the mood overall, graphics are gorgeous and music on point. nothing bad to say about it except that gameplay can get very repetitive when you get to the third soul and it took me some time before I realised what I had to do with the popups. Short, sweet and very pretty!
Artemy Zen
02. May 2023 · 16:03 UTC
The story was fascinating, the visuals are beautiful, and the music is great. I don't often play visual novels, but I really enjoyed this one.
Saltysa
02. May 2023 · 18:18 UTC
I loved this game. The visuals were stunning, I loved the last story and its "twist", and the last character was gorgeous!
Zerovirus
02. May 2023 · 19:17 UTC
Absolutely incredible. Astounding that something so polished and well-written came together in just three days. This is easily the best thing I've seen out of this jam so far, standing head and shoulders above everything else.
Papaya
02. May 2023 · 19:52 UTC
Absolutely amazing. Especially loved the music. Didn't really understand what happened at the end but I enjoyed the experience regardless.
SkelleRoznik
02. May 2023 · 20:19 UTC
This is such an amazing and touching game. The story is very powerful. ​The art is gorgeous. The characters have... character and are memorable and engaging. The dialogue options actually change what is being told, which is very impressive.

It's very hard to find anything to criticize, but if I had to, it was a little confusing to understand what to do with bubbles at first. As I understood they tell a part of a character's story. Some bubbles can be derived from the dialogue, some are not. A little too random to my liking, but it's more of a personal preference, than a game's issue.

Also, it reminded me of an anime called "Death Parade", which is one of my favorites. I don't know if it was an inspiration or not, but I find it amazing either way.

Such a great entry!
hwaet
02. May 2023 · 20:55 UTC
This game is just beautiful: the stories, the music, the art. The word bubbles are laggy, but I still want to bask in the whole experience regardless.
MallanSandan
02. May 2023 · 20:57 UTC
Beautiful game! Everything works so well together! The art, the story, the music! Very powerful!
LDJam user 338234
02. May 2023 · 22:49 UTC
I'm genuinely blown away. It immediately felt like I was a part of the story thanks to the compelling audio/visuals/writing all coming together. All of the characters felt real to me.
In between I was slightly confused whether the character in front of you is the other party or yourself, but it becomes obvious as the game goes on.
The gameplay was really pleasant as well and thanks to the minigame not punishing failure too harshly I started failing on purpose to explore all of the dialogue options. The only moment of frustration was getting stuck on the third soul, but it did make it more rewarding to beat.
And finally, I loved that you're lulled into a rhythm only for the game to hit you with something new in the best "oh dang i hadn't even THOUGHT about that but it makes sense" way.
Clephanie
03. May 2023 · 15:17 UTC
Beautiful game, i liked the gameplay too, even if i had a hard time with it because english isn't my native language ^^
amango
04. May 2023 · 18:01 UTC
The vibes for this game are insane. The aesthetic is killer; I want a new desktop wallpaper with this!
friedrice
05. May 2023 · 01:02 UTC
Wow!! A really gorgeous game-- love the artstyle with the subtle swaying motion of the carriage, the stylized character designs, the subtle character animation/movements, all the effects like the particles and watercolor-like overlays, the background music which was really fitting too. The writing is very well done and I really felt like I could empathize with the characters in the limited time. I struggled with the 3rd soul for sure, especially with the first choice selection minigame, but I feel like that was a part of the experience for that character's story. I also started experiencing the "warning: write error message popup in the middle of the 3rd soul's story, though it would disappear after a while. All in all, really wonderful game!
LDJam user 319166
06. May 2023 · 05:16 UTC
Beautiful Graphics and music! I enjoy the stories all through the game. It is a wonderful game!
LafLaurine
06. May 2023 · 22:20 UTC
The atmosphere of this game is amazing! I really love the graphics and the gameplay which really serves the story. I am used to playing visual novels and I can stay that I loved this one.
ardorugus
07. May 2023 · 03:20 UTC
Moody, soothingly involving, nice idea with calming thoughts. Maybe, could sound a bit less depressive. I'd recommend turning off the dialogue (typing) sfx, for it ruins the mood fast.
Angela He
07. May 2023 · 03:28 UTC
this feels so polished and the music and art is gorg! And the little animations are such a nice touch. I love that the spider lily at the bottom is the settings toggle. Kind of reminded me of the sections in Spiritfarer where you say goodbye on the boat on a surface level but here I felt like I got to know my passengers way deeper despite just being a jam game. That last person.. I've never played a souls-like visual novel but now I can say I have. Really cool idea. What happens next in the story, I need to know???
LDJam user 355188
07. May 2023 · 20:12 UTC
This game is so beautiful, both the art and the writing! It started off strong and only got better throughout. Everything felt really polished as well!
zephyreds
10. May 2023 · 11:50 UTC
Oh this was wonderful!! The first two souls had me in tears so fast. The tone shift to soul 3 was jarring in just the right way. Super cool take on the prompt, gorgeous art, just beautiful all together.
OrangeSurprise
11. May 2023 · 00:35 UTC
What an amazing entry, I was not ready to be hit in the feels. I love the progression and the dialog was really well written. Amazing art style as well, great job to the artist, the character designs are absolutely superb! Very strong entry to this jam, congratz on this beautiful game :)
LDJam user 250825
11. May 2023 · 00:36 UTC
What a great experience, everything comes together in this game! The setup with the first two souls and the shift to the third one was perfect. Good use of interactive elements within the story without them feeling forced, I especially liked the second-to-last one with finding the one word. Great art and audio as well!