Soul Ownership by lowercaserho

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made by lowercaserho for LD33 (COMPO)
An interactive fiction game and story written with Twine 2 under the Harlowe story format.

This turned out a little bit more fiction and a little less interactive than I had hoped for, but I'm generally pleased with the result.

Since this is Twine 2, the game page itself also doubles as the source/project file, and can be imported and edited.

Ratings

Coolness 56% 3
Overall 3.34 296
Fun 2.71 677
Humor 2.32 634
Innovation 2.82 578
Mood 3.78 73
Theme 3.75 228

Feedback

quill18
24. Aug 2015 · 03:17 UTC
Creepy and awesome. Played it through to the end and was happy I did.
ianh
24. Aug 2015 · 04:32 UTC
Very well-written! The door code part was a bit tedious, but otherwise this was quite fun.
Phil Strahl
24. Aug 2015 · 04:36 UTC
Very well written and touching story, I enjoyed it very much. And thanks for making me feel clever for finding out the door code :) Also interesting twist, thanks for your entry!
andyman404
24. Aug 2015 · 04:43 UTC
Great story. I figured out the door code on the first try, given the clues. Thank you for this story!
filiph
24. Aug 2015 · 06:01 UTC
I loved this. It took a while to get going, but after it did, I was thrilled.

The writing is excellent. The part with the footage gave me serious chills. And the whole experience is super polished (not only for a LD game, but in general).
qkerguelen
24. Aug 2015 · 06:08 UTC
Wow, the story was really cool, I couldn't stop reading! Great job, very good entry and well written!
Crowbeak
24. Aug 2015 · 07:24 UTC
Good use of theme and very well-written. Only dampened by my solid dislike of cats.
KunoNoOni
25. Aug 2015 · 00:00 UTC
That was twisted... But I loved it! HaHa! Good use of theme.
rotpar
25. Aug 2015 · 04:34 UTC
Nice writing, very atmospheric.
MechaTofuPirate
27. Aug 2015 · 01:17 UTC
Really good writing. Nice work!
Jawesome
02. Sep 2015 · 03:24 UTC
Sad, Theme-related, fun, twisty, puzzle... everything. I absolutely loved it.