Spider Business by Vindicta

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made by Vindicta for Ludum Dare 56 (COMPO)

The game is a visual novel about a spider who dreams of starting his own business. Players will follow his adventures, face challenges, make decisions, and interact with various characters to help the spider succeed in his venture.

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Ratings

Overall 105th 3.694⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Fun 182th 3.316⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 172th 3.306⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Theme 71th 4⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 183th 3.472⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Audio 89th 3.588⭐ 19🧑‍⚖️
Humor 31th 3.889⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Mood 131th 3.5⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Given 34🗳️ 14🗨️

Feedback

ladybenko
07. Oct 2024 · 18:19 UTC
hi! a visual novel with spiders, I didn't see that one coming :) I got to the part of the minigame of catching flies, but after losing it I got an IndexedDB error ![Screenshot 2024-10-07 at 8.19.17 PM.png](///raw/cc6/2/z/666cc.png)
dooskington
07. Oct 2024 · 19:33 UTC
That fly catching minigame is tough! A bit more feedback for each fly caught would help a lot in making that part more fun :)
RichardGots123
08. Oct 2024 · 09:38 UTC
nice idea and good realisation
Laura_17
08. Oct 2024 · 11:02 UTC
interesting idea
voidraizer
09. Oct 2024 · 02:42 UTC
Neat idea and implementation, but I will say the sound can be a bit piercing, especially with headphones on
candlesan
10. Oct 2024 · 02:10 UTC
A visual novel indeed. I like the manner in which the spider talkd about web fees, it made me feel like the agony of actually starting a business and all the fees and rules you have to go through not to mention it's a pun with "world wide web" fees
JohnCoffee
11. Oct 2024 · 00:25 UTC
a bit lengthy, a bit buggy, but it is a visual novel. good job :)
Sabrina_Ross
11. Oct 2024 · 00:31 UTC
Ren'py flashbang me when opening it, love visual novels and the puns the dialogue were really silly and cute. The bug catching game was kinda bugged and scuffed though.
zoglu
12. Oct 2024 · 13:26 UTC
Nice idea to make a visual novel with this theme ! The beggining was great, however I also ran into the bug described by @ladybenko
SdCorpse
14. Oct 2024 · 00:37 UTC
It is a very interesting idea to create the visual novel not in anime style!)
Brain Siege Gameworks
16. Oct 2024 · 12:35 UTC
It's is charming but the error with the flycatching minigame really hurts it.