This Game 10/10

The idea seems solid and fun. But for some reason every time i made any choices i ended up in the exactly same place and the game just ended. I am bit unsure if the game crashed or it just ended. The browser window keeps giving same error ''Warning write error'' and something else. But still funny idea.

I like short stories and loved this one! cool idea with the animal hair but it was missing something. give it a 9/10!

Nice to see another RenPy game submitted for this jam, its a fantastic visual novel game engine! This is a good idea for a game and I found the execution to be very funny. I really like all the character art as well, it all felt pretty polished, working well to create a short and cohesive experience. The music was indeed very loud, thanks for the warning. I also got the write error previously mentioned, which forced me to read slower as the text would quickly become obscured behind the error window.

cool!

I survived

Damn Tick! Luckily my friends helped me reach the neck...
Fun idea, really cool game!

Hahahah I love this. Creating a visual novel is very unique. I enjoyed it a lot. Good humour, made me laugh a few times. I feel betrayed by the tick. The setting of the dogs fur is quite an interesting one and fits the theme of tiny creatures quite well.

Funny little idea :blush:
Your link is just the link to your local host so it's just the link used by your own computer but not accessible form the internet. If you want to upload your game somewhere you need some host that is accessible like you did when uploading your game to the LudumDare page. A lot of people also use itch.io there you also can upload your game like you did here on the Ludum Dare page :blush:

Interesting take on the theme. I kept getting errors when trying to play it on the Ludum Dare site and the link provided does not work. The errors didn't prevent me from playing but just filled up the screen.

AI slop. big oof