About Crayons and my garden by velvetlobster
A laid-back platform where you'll sail the endless sea of things I've come across in my garden, along with some quirky finds, and make some friends while sharing your thoughts on this journey.



btw ...find these fellas and choose your favorite

| Link | https://velvetlobster.itch.io/about-crayons-and-my-garden |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/56/about-crayons-and-my-garden |
Ratings
| Overall | 493th | 3.602⭐ | 56🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 919th | 2.896⭐ | 55🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 367th | 3.518⭐ | 57🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 604th | 3.609⭐ | 57🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 226th | 4.182⭐ | 57🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 346th | 3.5⭐ | 56🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 439th | 3.219⭐ | 50🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 92th | 4.167⭐ | 56🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 52🗳️ | 96🗨️ |
This is beautiful and human. And at any rate, it scores highly on the metrics. Might be the only game I award the full five stars to in the mood category. I sat with this for a while. Well done.
I hope Im not spoiling fun for anyone, but the dialogues are great, you can sense it right away that person is deep into reflection. Overall very artsy game, would love to see it transforming into something more than that, maybe some simple puzzles.
Overall, I enjoyed it, always love this kind of semi-experimental jam games.
Very nice game! And I loooove the look of it, with the photos and all.
I do wish there were more characters to interact with. I was kind of disappointed that I ran out of unique NPCs after a few minutes (unless I missed something). Would love to see this expanded upon!
Thank you to everyone who is testing and providing feedback. I'll make sure we take a look at all of your games. 😊
I'm not sure if it was a good idea, but we tried to simulate a way of "insisting". You know, you have to agree three times or not agree three times ... There is some feedback where the agree and disagree options shake a bit. But I'm not sure if it was enough. You can also navigate them with the arrow keys, so you never actually use the mouse in the game.
Only, music felt a bit too much for me so I muted the site quite soon >_<
Also, I fell down a lot, but climbing back up felt almost impossible ;_;
I'd also like to know how you set up the placement as there is no obvious repeat.
Great job, thanks for making such an unique game.
Some of the graphic elements might have been broken on my browser unfortunately. But I like the usage of found stuff as assets.
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I also wondered at first whether the **Agree/Disagree**-buttons were broken or was it deliberate.
The *"insisting"*-idea you were going for is possible to implement properly but it would require some additional feedback-elements as you have said.
Gimmicks like these are fun but can be quite tricky to pull off (and I speak from experience!)
@dis0rder thanks for the detailed review. what graphic elements do you think might have been broken? yeah I think some more feedback is necesary, we are already working on them for a post jam version
At the same time I think it might be a good puzzle - when I saw coordinates in the bottom right I thought that it is a necessary thing for me in the gameplay. Or a storytelling game, if the stories were connected. Or even some kind of a Pokemon game, where you need to collect all of the leaves. But for now I agree with the first comment, it is more an art installation. And sometimes a particular piece of art might not touch you, and that's okay - that's what happened to me. Still, I think it's cool, that such submission are also created, thank you for that experience!
Certainly, it is a more comprehensive version that we intend to keep working on. The idea is to indeed add more elements, insert more, let's say, "objectives" or "paths"
And you are quite right to say that, at this moment in time, it resembles an art installation more than a proper game. I believe it could evolve into a bit of both in the future.
Thank you for the sincere and well-detailed review =)
