Story Based Game!

Check out my game: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/loopamonium. Its in a way story base kinda because it has a narrator... anyways hope you check it out. When playing, turn on volume to listen to my narration. It would be appreciated if you guys would leave feedback on my game as I am 12 and need to constantly improve my skills. Good luck post jam!