I crafted an v2 of my ludum dare game with the feedback i got.

if you haven't seen it, i think you should. I've put 2 links, one with the jam version and one with the fixes. You can also check the huge differences btween them.

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/i-am-not-a-murderer

the best part for me and for others who have tried it, is the "new mechanic" implemented in it. what do you think?