Really learning things from rating others' games....
The game "Firelore: First Fate" by Lucas Molina really shocked me...
https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/53/firelore-first-fate
That is the game I tried to make but ended up with something not so expected.
It is brief and deep. And the gameplay fits well with the fanciful settings. All these are what I lacked in my game.
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BTW, please also rate and comment on my game!
* https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/53/reincarnation-express *
It's a visual novel where you are (or actually not) the courier of hell in a fantasy world, delivering dead souls to reincarnation.
The endings may seem weird if you didn't get the metaphor of the characters, which was not very obvious since the "truth" of the game concept was only revealed at the start and the end...
My Game: Reincarnation Express
