{"author_link":"\/users\/adam-gould","author_name":"adam-gould","author_uid":"adam-gould","comments":[],"epoch":1714734698,"event":"LD55","format":"md","ldjam_node_id":394986,"likes":4,"metadata":{"p_key":"206809","p_author":"adam-gould","p_authorkey":"1012909","p_urlkey":"443348","p_title":"The Wrong Book - an idler-style demonic bonanza (Compo)!","p_cat":"LDJam ","p_event":"LD55","p_time":"1714734698","p_likes":"4","p_comments":"0","p_status":"WAYBACK","us_key":"1012909","us_name":"adam-gould","us_username":"adam-gould","event_start":"1712966400","event_key":"120","event_name":"Ludum Dare 55"},"node":{"_collation":{"body_sanitizer":"TextUtils::SanitizeHTML via existing importer","event":"LD55","removed_author":false},"_superparent":383062,"_trust":5,"author":12909,"body":"[![wrongbook reviews.png](\/\/\/raw\/d62\/3\/z\/64f3e.png)](https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book)\n\nFor this LD compo, I had a very distinct mindset going into it... it'll likely be my last for a long time as I'm going to become a father for the first time in just a few weeks, so I really wanted to sum up everything I've learned and done over the years making Ludum Dare entries. What I ended up with was a game I am immensely happy with, and based on the reactions so far, I'm not alone. This post acts as a post-mortem and also semi-promotion (even though results are a day and a half away).\n\n***There are big spoilers below - if you haven't played the game through to the end, I highly recommend doing so. It takes around 15 minutes.***\n\n# What is the game?\n**[The Wrong Book](https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book)** is a 2D strategy\/idle game based around hiring cultists, summoning demons, and putting them all to work to contribute towards the summoning of The Great Old Things.\n\n# What did I focus on?\nKnowing that humour and audio have been huge winners for me in the past (achieving 3rd place in each of those categories over two consecutive compos), I figured I would lean into my strengths. I did more voice acting than ever before, and spent a good chunk of time on audio design and music composition. In addition to this, a few days before the compo started I was having a conversation with a friend about how games (specifically Civ and Factorio) manage to achieve the \"just one more turn\" feeling and thought I should implement some of those philosophies into the game design.\n\n# What worked?\nTo be quite frank, a lot worked. The reaction from everyone (fellow entrants, family, friends) has been overwhelmingly positive. The humour landed very well with people, and the audio has impressed many, especially the wide variety of voices and voice lines I managed to put in the game.\n\nThe UI design is probably the best it's ever been for any of my games, which I can tell purely by the fact that nobody has commented on it at all. It's my first game with extensive tooltips and context menus, and I think it's worked in my favour to an incredible degree. Everyone I've seen play the game managed to figure out very quickly how to interact with everything and what the gameplay loop was, with no confusion or ambiguity (a first for me). Speaking of...\n\nOne of my favourite things about the game is how automation is not available right away. Everyone, by the time automation is researched, has become very much used to manually clicking on units to queue up resources. Taking some inspiration from Factorio, I decided early on that in order to make automation feel useful & fun, the player needs to spend at least *some* time doing things manually first. The feeling you get when automation is finally unlocked is one of relief, and it might be the best gameplay moment of the game. The whole game was designed with this feeling in mind. Give the player an obstacle first and *then* give them the tools to overcome it.\n\nBut, in my view, the crowning achievement moment comes right at the end (again, ***massive spoilers***). I had so much fun putting that silly little polka song together, and my friends and family haven't stopped singing it at me since the game came out. Very rarely have I seen any of my entries cause people to laugh out loud, but this one managed it.\n\n# What didn't work, or needed more work?\nIn all honesty I feel this section is much more \"nitpicky\" than previous post-mortems because the game has been so well received there isn't anything huge here; certainly nothing on the game design or balance side.\n\nThere was an annoying bug with the Unity engine that caused UI text to disappear midway through the game *in the WebGL version only*, but I managed to put a fix in a few days later. I'm hoping this bug didn't affect anyone's enjoyment of the game too much - it was infuriating for me to see something so key to the game being ruined by something in the engine itself, unrelated to anything I'd done.\n\nThe other thing was also kind of a bug - UI scaling for high resolution monitors. The maths I put together to determine where the tooltip shows completely falls apart if the UI has any dynamic scaling on it. I only learned this right at the end of dev time, just before submission, so I had to turn off scaling and make the UI a fixed size instead. Unfortunately this meant that the text was tiny on very high-res screens.\n\n# Final thoughts\nI'm so happy with The Wrong Book. I think it's my best Ludum Dare game yet, and if it's my last one (due to impending fatherhood), I'm very happy to go out on such a high. Thanks to everyone who's played it and left such wonderful comments.","comments":1,"comments-timestamp":"2024-05-03T22:54:38Z","created":"2024-05-03T10:31:51Z","files":[],"files-timestamp":0,"id":394986,"love":4,"love-timestamp":"2024-05-03T22:51:44Z","meta":[],"modified":"2024-05-03T22:54:38Z","name":"The Wrong Book - an idler-style demonic bonanza (Compo)!","node-timestamp":"2024-05-03T11:11:38Z","parent":391139,"parents":[1,5,9,383062,391139],"path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book\/the-wrong-book-an-idler-style-demonic-bonanza-compo","published":"2024-05-03T11:11:38Z","scope":"public","slug":"the-wrong-book-an-idler-style-demonic-bonanza-compo","subsubtype":"","subtype":"","type":"post","version":1238092},"node_metadata":{"n_key":"394986","n_urlkey":"443348","n_parent":"391139","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book\/the-wrong-book-an-idler-style-demonic-bonanza-compo","n_slug":"the-wrong-book-an-idler-style-de","n_type":"post","n_subtype":"","n_subsubtype":"","n_author":"12909","n_created":"1714732311","n_modified":"1714776878","n_version":"1238092","n_status":"WAYBACK"},"source_url":"https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book\/the-wrong-book-an-idler-style-demonic-bonanza-compo","text":"[![wrongbook reviews.png](\/\/\/raw\/d62\/3\/z\/64f3e.png)](https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book)\n\nFor this LD compo, I had a very distinct mindset going into it... it'll likely be my last for a long time as I'm going to become a father for the first time in just a few weeks, so I really wanted to sum up everything I've learned and done over the years making Ludum Dare entries. What I ended up with was a game I am immensely happy with, and based on the reactions so far, I'm not alone. This post acts as a post-mortem and also semi-promotion (even though results are a day and a half away).\n\n***There are big spoilers below - if you haven't played the game through to the end, I highly recommend doing so. It takes around 15 minutes.***\n\n# What is the game?\n**[The Wrong Book](https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/55\/the-wrong-book)** is a 2D strategy\/idle game based around hiring cultists, summoning demons, and putting them all to work to contribute towards the summoning of The Great Old Things.\n\n# What did I focus on?\nKnowing that humour and audio have been huge winners for me in the past (achieving 3rd place in each of those categories over two consecutive compos), I figured I would lean into my strengths. I did more voice acting than ever before, and spent a good chunk of time on audio design and music composition. In addition to this, a few days before the compo started I was having a conversation with a friend about how games (specifically Civ and Factorio) manage to achieve the \"just one more turn\" feeling and thought I should implement some of those philosophies into the game design.\n\n# What worked?\nTo be quite frank, a lot worked. The reaction from everyone (fellow entrants, family, friends) has been overwhelmingly positive. The humour landed very well with people, and the audio has impressed many, especially the wide variety of voices and voice lines I managed to put in the game.\n\nThe UI design is probably the best it's ever been for any of my games, which I can tell purely by the fact that nobody has commented on it at all. It's my first game with extensive tooltips and context menus, and I think it's worked in my favour to an incredible degree. Everyone I've seen play the game managed to figure out very quickly how to interact with everything and what the gameplay loop was, with no confusion or ambiguity (a first for me). Speaking of...\n\nOne of my favourite things about the game is how automation is not available right away. Everyone, by the time automation is researched, has become very much used to manually clicking on units to queue up resources. Taking some inspiration from Factorio, I decided early on that in order to make automation feel useful & fun, the player needs to spend at least *some* time doing things manually first. The feeling you get when automation is finally unlocked is one of relief, and it might be the best gameplay moment of the game. The whole game was designed with this feeling in mind. Give the player an obstacle first and *then* give them the tools to overcome it.\n\nBut, in my view, the crowning achievement moment comes right at the end (again, ***massive spoilers***). I had so much fun putting that silly little polka song together, and my friends and family haven't stopped singing it at me since the game came out. Very rarely have I seen any of my entries cause people to laugh out loud, but this one managed it.\n\n# What didn't work, or needed more work?\nIn all honesty I feel this section is much more \"nitpicky\" than previous post-mortems because the game has been so well received there isn't anything huge here; certainly nothing on the game design or balance side.\n\nThere was an annoying bug with the Unity engine that caused UI text to disappear midway through the game *in the WebGL version only*, but I managed to put a fix in a few days later. I'm hoping this bug didn't affect anyone's enjoyment of the game too much - it was infuriating for me to see something so key to the game being ruined by something in the engine itself, unrelated to anything I'd done.\n\nThe other thing was also kind of a bug - UI scaling for high resolution monitors. The maths I put together to determine where the tooltip shows completely falls apart if the UI has any dynamic scaling on it. I only learned this right at the end of dev time, just before submission, so I had to turn off scaling and make the UI a fixed size instead. Unfortunately this meant that the text was tiny on very high-res screens.\n\n# Final thoughts\nI'm so happy with The Wrong Book. I think it's my best Ludum Dare game yet, and if it's my last one (due to impending fatherhood), I'm very happy to go out on such a high. Thanks to everyone who's played it and left such wonderful comments.","title":"The Wrong Book - an idler-style demonic bonanza (Compo)!","wayback_source":[]}