I’d figured that maybe it was time for a postmortem of my entry,  so, well… Here we go. Be gentle.

This was my very second Ludum Dare, and for it I entered a short visual novel named “A New and Beautiful World.”

WHAT WENT RIGHT

• Writing a “real” story within the 48 hours– This was, more or less, the main objective I strived for through all of this. The personal challenge that I’d set for myself was that, “pretty much everyone in the world can make a better game than you in 48 hours, but can they create a better story?” Essentially, my coding skills are utterly amateurish and embarrassingly immature at best, though not nonexistent. My writing skills, though? Well, pretty much anyone that’s been to school can write good enough prose. That’s not bad, however; it means, I’m one of them. I don’t consider myself that great of a writer or anything; I just liked that it meant I started on even ground than on the gross disadvantage I’d have spawned on were I to go code-heavy with the game.
• Livestreaming  Apart from some stupid messing around with gaming and whatnot, this LD was the first time I’d ever livestreamed anything. I livestreamed the entire of my development of the game from beginning to end, and I feel like it’s what drove me on to the finish line. People, when reviewing the game, sometimes express how impressed they are that I managed to make that much content in such little time; that was absolutely all due to the stream. Not that I had a large audience, or anything like that. I think the very highest amount of viewers I ever had on at any time was 11.  What’s important isn’t that anyone was actually watching me. It’s that Twitch said there was at least someone out there who was. It just drove me on, subconsciously, is what I think. The fact that I was being recorded, and that that recording was available for everyone else in the world to see, just kept itself lodged in my mind. It made me think, “people are watching you do this, man; you ought to not screw up,” and it’s probably the reason why I made the deadline.

WHAT WENT WRONG

• Writing a “real” story within the 48 hours– Actually going forward and shoving all my weight onto story did have its cons. Er, it had a lot of cons. For one thing, I did not get to make as many branching paths or choices or endings that I’d wanted to. I wouldn’t have been able to keep up the quality throughout all of them, or I just wouldn’t have had the time or energy to pull it off, due to how taxing writing the story was even completely linearly. Furthermore, focusing so much blood and sweat on the writing meant I just didn’t have time to produce any art or music at all; which is my greatest regret with the game.
• Not a game– Essentially, then, I just feel like I failed to make this project an actual game, due to the reasons described above. I spent too, too, too much time on writing a story. I forgot that, in the grand scheme of things, what I wanted to make was a visual novel, not a short story. My first fault was not having enough paths. Having only one choice in the entire plot doesn’t even constitute it as a VN, let alone a game. That’s what I admit; that was my failure, was my undoing. I just don’t think “A New and Beautiful World” was a real game. And that’s the single most important thing that any Ludum Dare entry should be.

POST-COMPO

I’ve completed a post-compo release of my game, which also includes an Android version that you can side load onto your mobile device!  Things added include music, drawn backgrounds, credits, spelling and grammar corrections, and more. The downloads are available on my personal site, right here. Unless you have a certain affinity for total silence and black backgrounds in your visual novels, I’d probably play it over the compo version.