{"author_name":"Elemental Zeal Games Studios","cat":"LD #28","comments":[{"author_name":"dalbinblue","time":"December 16, 2013 10:48 am","epoch":1387208880,"text":"I took a quick look at the game and have a few things that could be improved. As a small change, when you restart a level leave the elf at the same position and angle so that a player can hone in their shot. Also when I broke all the ornaments, and knocked over the tree getting a score of -8000 the game still said good job. You may want to change the logic to change the end message depending on how well or bad the player did. With extra time you may also want to try improving the animations; the elf walks very stiff, and while making animations quick is necessary in a game jam sometimes, you have extra time to add polish. Finally, there are a lot of dissonant chords in the music. It sounded a little like a young kid just learning piano trying to play a Christmas carol, which may have been what you were going for, but with all the chords evenly spaced the dissonance becomes too much.","spam":"N"}],"epoch":1387206720,"likes":3,"metadata":{"p_key":"34593","p_author":"Elemental Zeal Games Studios","p_authorkey":"12839","p_urlkey":"70141","p_title":"Feedback requested for Jam Entry \u201cElve\u2019s Eve\u201d before submission!","p_cat":"LD #28","p_event":"LD28","p_time":"1387206720","p_likes":"3","p_comments":"1","p_status":"UPD5","us_key":"12839","us_name":"Elemental Zeal Games Studios","us_username":"zkenshin","event_start":"1386892800","event_key":"20","event_name":"LD28"},"text":"
\"Elves'<\/a>

Elves’ Eve Poem Wreath<\/p><\/div>\n

We have pretty much completed our entry for the Jam, but still
\n have 8 hours left. If anyone has time, and wants to play
\n our current build to provide some helpful feedback, we
\n would be very thankful.<\/p>\n

Link To Game<\/a><\/p>\n

Congratulations to everyone who has already completed a competition entry,
\n and good luck to everyone else working on their Jam entries!<\/p>","time":"December 16th, 2013 10:12 am","title":"Feedback requested for Jam Entry \u201cElve\u2019s Eve\u201d before submission!"}