Dance Instructor by st33d

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made by st33d for LD27 (COMPO)

Ratings

Coolness 39% 1422
Overall 2.92 714
Fun 2.62 815
Humor 2.27 525
Innovation 3.40 257
Mood 3.08 298
Theme 3.46 281

Feedback

L
26. Aug 2013 · 04:01 UTC
Kind of short, even for a puzzle-based Twine. Still, nice to see you giving it a shot!

Also keen to see the other options of that timer script get some use.
Soundboy
26. Aug 2013 · 04:57 UTC
Really great idea + implementation, would love to see it expanded on
PTSnoop
26. Aug 2013 · 10:22 UTC
Short and to the point.
Jimanzium
26. Aug 2013 · 10:22 UTC
Rather short, and I found it difficult to read whilst the timer was going down. But, the writing was well done. Also, a little short
PaperBlurt
26. Aug 2013 · 12:29 UTC
I agree a bit short, but it ties to the theme very well..
RobotParking
26. Aug 2013 · 15:03 UTC
Short and to the point (as the other commentors have noted.) Something to be said for minimalism.
RoseNinja
27. Aug 2013 · 14:34 UTC
a little short but nice game, like the idea awesome good work
SneManden
27. Aug 2013 · 14:38 UTC
Wow, very alternative, but really breath-taking, actually! For a text-based game, it was quite fun to play.
davidwparker
28. Aug 2013 · 06:19 UTC
Interesting start... would like to see it expanded.
Gus
28. Aug 2013 · 06:35 UTC
Using a timer in a text game, that's something, very nice way to pratice my dynamic reading xD
Still don't know If I managed to beat it, there's no more options and the rewind doesn't work, so I think maybe this is it.
Also, creative title.
kazukishida
29. Aug 2013 · 09:51 UTC
Very nice use of a timer on a text-based game! It was very thrilling and well-written. Would love to see an extended version of this! Great job! :D
dook
29. Aug 2013 · 20:29 UTC
Great use of the theme for a twine game. It doesn't need to be any longer, but I think it could be. Perhaps a sequel? :P
imef
29. Aug 2013 · 20:46 UTC
A bit short but I liked it!
Sh1rogane
29. Aug 2013 · 20:46 UTC
Never thought i would like a text game this much,
Want more of it ;)
RHY3756547
03. Sep 2013 · 13:36 UTC
Fantastic idea, one of the few gamelike twines I've ever seen. It could have been longer (mayybe not because of the timer), but I enjoyed what there was of it.
kirbytails7
08. Sep 2013 · 07:09 UTC
Very interesting...It'd be nice to see it be a bit longer, but it's a very cool idea.
lesterpig
08. Sep 2013 · 09:47 UTC
I expected a music to fit with the name ... But it's a nice work :)
Christina Nordlander
14. Sep 2013 · 13:21 UTC
Of all the bomb defusing games I've played in this LD, this is one of the better. I like the bells and whistles you've added to the usual Twine set-up, and the timer is great. Nice work on puzzles, too.

Typo: "goto" should be two words.


SPOILER

The ending felt a bit abrupt, but it still works.