The best feedback I have received so far came from my mother. I had to assist her as she can’t read English. She was quick to point out the absurdity of video game logic in some scenarios in the story.

The player's reaction time actually counts towards the piloted mech's speed in combat. You can only flee from a fight if you are faster than your opponent.

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